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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2023 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story; I think it would have simply been better with all the tinys as simply an inch tall (sprinkled tinys that need a microscope don't do a thing for me) and the number of tinys involved at the 'sprinkling' level is way too many for feasibility.

I also think it would be better if all the festival-goers entered the same size, with the House of Mirrors was the shrinking mechanism. It lends an extra layer of sinisterness to the carnival.

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