Hi again little big planet 

I wanted to put another review in the story to let know my thoughts on it, also sorry if is a big long.

I'm surprised by gaia character on the story i thought she was goin to by some kind of myth being but i'm glad she is real and i'm kind of curious to see the interactions to her with the cast, for what i see on her she kind of reminds me to both Lucy and Divya like if she has divya personality but having at the same time Lucy attitude specially when she talks abouth antlasia, to be honest gaia first appear in Lucy stomach kind of reminds me to one episode of Futurama where they go to a desert planet and Fry the main character drinks a bottle of water that he find just to find out that the people in that planet where made of water and he drink his king and become the new ruler of the planet just to later find out that the king was alive inside him and his followers now wanted to opend Fry to free his king, at least Gaia subjects din't wanted to throw Lucy into a giant squeezer...... yet.

I fell that Divya will have some paralelism with gaia, some ants already see her as the goddess and Lucy the devil but the question is if Divya is some kind of representacion of a modern Gaia and Lucy the devil then who or what was the devil from Gaia, we already have some answer of what happend to the ants real home including a name of the person behind his doom prince Aryan but i fell that there's somenthing more deeper than that i mean if you already introduce a literal ant goddess i will not surprise to see some kind of ant devil similar to her.

Lucy and Rebecca relationship is one i find curious but i saw that they have somenthing in common that is that they din't measure the small thinks they due can affect others like for example the same way Lucy kill the ants and causing that his brother got kidnapped Rebeca case could be with his cigarattes, Rebecca saw his cigarattes the same way Lucy saw attacking the ants “not a big deal” and we already saw that Lucy not big deal was a big deal that affect his brother and later the rest of his family also the same case could be say to Rebecca, we saw that his cigarattes already hurt the small life but somenthing that she has not see yet that is hurting Lucy. Smoking in front of her could cause her probably problems to bread specially considering Lucy diet. I don't see Rebecca as a bad mother but not also as a good mother more like a irresponsable mother, the same way we saw that Lucy is not a sweet inocent little sister we also saw that Rebecca is not a sweet inocent mother, Rebeca loves his childrens specially if she had them at young age but the same way Lucy could not control his emotions she can't due the same, it could be see in the prologue how she hit a 8 year old Lucy just for say a bad word, she regret it instantly but i fell she did more or similar to that even before she got his new job. Lucy and Rebecca relationship is more like a vicious circle basicly Lucy made Rebecca angry she hit her or due somenthing that she will regret and Lucy leave all his frustation to the ants over and over again until it fall to Max, i fell Rebecca arc will be that she learnds that she is not always the good and inocent mother that she write on his blog now that Max is ant sized and for her missing right know and that his cigarattes actually are hurting someone who she loves, i hope that soon the firewall family find out abouth Max is missing to see how they manage that.

For Lucy i fell that from the firewall family she is one who will suffer most in the storie, if the goal is to stop her attacks she will have to know abouth antopia and how she literal has being murder conscious beings similar to humans and his brother that i fell that she will have a few unaware encouthers with her thinking that he is a ant will tried to kill him just to find out who really is and live to know that she almost kill his brother and Max will not see her with the same eyes anymore, yes Max is trying to save his sister but if he make it he deep down will saw her as how the ants see her, like i say before in my last review i don't know the understanding that Lucy will have with antopia but after all that i say is probably that understanding will make her due somenthing that the ants wished to happend to her since the begining.

I know that Max wants to avoid Lucy got shrink but i fell she needs to get shrunk because if Max just told her the truth with enough evidencie is she is big it would not have the same impact that get shrink and see the consequences by yourself, i fell if Lucy got shrink Christine could be the perfect antagonist to her, both of them are kind of similar but Lucy is in a lower level compared to her but i fell that Lucy path of becoming popular will take her not to a same level to Christine but similar. Lucy could belive that she will become like her and that could horrifying her and specially thinking that she hurt Divya and steal 50 bucks from his mom and dealing at the same time that she is some kind of demon child to the ants and the same time she tried to paid for his sins, Christine could be the perfect villain for his redemtion arc.

Abouth the 2 stories a thing that caught my eye was loosely based on true events because it has a point, the ants in that time where not so advance like in the actuallity they don't have the aphid cameras to know what really happend, i fell that what really happend is that the ants decide to exaggerate a little what happend or put some exaggerating lies to warning the others abouth humans, i fell those interpretatations or lies got update over the time because how they could know Jurassic park 3 if is suppose to be realize almost 50 years inspired from a book that will been written in 27 years or how the ants could know the name of all the stomach parts inside Darla if they din't have access to internet to that time o less to a biology human book on that time. I fell that all the ants got missing in both operations and they decide to invente what happend or some of them return and for what they told abouth the mission they decide to exaggerate the thing or invent stuffs so they could warning the other ants abouth the humans, i also fell if that was the case the storie of the 5 teenager girls was probably made up so kids on that age could not go to see humans.

Max has a point on the ant society, although they act similar to humans they are more blood thirsty that the humans, i fell that is somenthing that the ants will have to learnd here is that not all the problems can be fix with violence, yes i understand that they needed to act to stop Lucy rampage but punish someone who has nothing to due and have probably zero influence in what Lucy is doing will make the things worst because sometimes when we wanted to hurt someone who is hurting us and that way is hurting someone who has a connection with him but has nothing to due on how they hurt them will only make it worst, in fact it could let to created somenthing worst that the person who is hurting you.

Well thats all for know anyway due you know when the next chapter will be ready no pressure just curious or how much have you advance on it and also how much this tour to antopia will continue? I like the world building but i fell that we being in that for a long time, anyways i hope that you are good and....

Bye. :)

Hi little big planet 

I been following your story since the realize of chapter 5, i never planned to created a account here and just being a reader but your story really tied me up, i was shy at first but like i say before your story really catch me up.

A thing that i really liked abouth Max is that from difference to other stories that i read is that he acts like a realistic 16 teen boy with flaws that some of his age have and it would never be written like his secret hentai dvd hidden in his closet, drinking underage and goin to the forbidden section of a library to see ant porn with a 11 year old child, that part make me laught at lot. Sometimes i fell that you put a little of your personality on him like if he is a loosely version of yourself in that world.

A moment where i could identify a little of Lucy behavior on Max was during the trial when he was yelling and cursing to the ants and Penelope, i understand why he did it but yelling and cursing to the people who are deciding your fate and the only person who wants to help you it will not goin to let any good sign to you, Max is a person who can control his emotions but when somenthing so big like this happend he can't control it anymore but later he understand that he should not be so mean with the ants because they have suffer worst that him or any other human and specially to Penelope the one who wanted to help him. Lucy in the other hand she doesn't have that control and let his emotions take the control of most of his problems and decisions, i don't know if she will have the same understanding that Max have with antopia or she will have it and that understanding will make her due somenthing that the ants wished to happend to her since the begining.

Max journey will be a hard one and i don't fell that the only threads that he will face will be his family but somenthing from his new size, i fell that Penelope or the ants will have to make him a armor to defend and protec his body similar to the ones the characters from grounded use, i also fell that Max will not goin to be unjured during his journey i don't say that he should lose a arm or a leg but i fell that he should have a few scars on his body or face or lose 2 or 3 fingers from one of his hands or in the most extreme case a eye.

A thing that caught my attention was the human books that Max found in the library because most of the protagonist from those books have somenthing in common with his situation, you see some of the books are abouth the main characters finding abouth a hidden world on they on world that they thought they will only found on dreams and imagination and changing the perspective of his world, other books are abouth the protagonist goin to a quest or a challenge to save someone they love like in Percy Jackson Percy have to save his mom and in The Hunger Games Katniss have to save his sister, thats somenthing that Max have in common finding a new world and trying to save Lucy and maybe his family, but the real thing that caught my attention was that most of those protagonist from those books later on in there stories they become in somenthing similar to a chosen one the one who will save the world and and have the fate of the world on his shoulders and every decision they take will affect it, Max right know have that in common he knows belives he is some kind of a chosen one to the ants, he belives for what he read in the book that he is the most important thing that happend to the ants since they arrival and is true, he see to himself as the one who will save his sister and bring peace betwen ants and humans but well....... i been thinking abouth the posibilites and paths of Max bringing the knowledge of the ants to the humans and well..... most of those paths ends with the spongebob meme of “we did it patrict we save the city” i fell that Max more easy path right know is to stop more future destruction to antopia and have divya attention, i also fell that Max will become in some kind of a chosen one but not like in the books he saw but more like Paul atreides from dune and Eren jeager from Shingeki no kyojin someone who has the weight of the world on they shoulders and to save the people they love and who follow him they will have to pay a big price and become in somenthing that they hate and it will hurt the people who they love and for the people who are follow him they will saw him as some kind of messiah, but the question is if Max becomes that who will hurt?, his family?, the ants?, or both?.

A thing that i found curious was the similitudes that Max and Penelope have with Max parents when they first meet, basicly that Rebecca was 17 a year older than his son and Robert his dad was 21 a year less that Penelope and speaking abouth Max and Penelope well...... since Penelope and the ants are aliens technically it would not count as bestiality or insectophilia but more like that scene from invincible but when Max parents meet Penelope and i hope they will due because it would be interesting and awkward well..... Robert will start wishing that his son was gay.

I hope that the next chapter comes out soon i have a theory of how gaia powers work but i will not goin to post on here because i fell that it would be a hug spoiler so i will let you know in private if you are interested or you want, until then congratulations for survive uni i hope that the next chapter comes out soon and i see you again when i have another review which it could be sooner because i have a lot of things i wanted to say abouth this story until then......

Bye.

I wonder if Max will come into contact with her mother or little sister in the future when he's the size of an ant or aphid, and maybe let him experience the giantess peeing

Amazing the part with the stinky mother feet was so nice for me. It's just a bit too long two chapteur instead of one could be better. But this chapter was perfect anyway

Author's Response:

I can understand when you say this chapter was too long. I never wanted it to become this long but I wanted to experiment with all possible giantess interactions I could think of at least once and vore and graphic digestion were the hardest ones to do and really swelled up the word count. It's not the content itself which is the problem but the way it is presented. 

I did actually consider splitting it into parts like Chapter 7 Part A, Chapter 7 Part B, etc so that it would be easier to digest for the reader. However, I tend to classify my chapters based on a common element or theme. In this case, it is essentially 5 sub-stories revolving around the common theme of insignificance. In the end, I decided against it because it would look weird and awkward in terms of presentation when compared to the rest of the chapters. I did provide lots of spacing to make it easier to follow. 

Lol, I decided to give Rebecca Firewall (the mother) a more prominent role as a red-haired MILF giantess and feet interactions and especially barefoot crushing and foot odour are always my favourite to write. We will see more of her later on in the story as well. :)   

It's weird. It's the best chapter I've ever read, and it's also the worst. More is not always better, and this chapter has been too long. It would have been better if you had divided it into parts to create more tension. Also, there are times when many people's connections get reset, so it would be a bit annoying to search for the last thing you read. Still, it was fun and exciting to read.

I thought you had given up on the story for a while, but you've made such a great update! Have you ever considered making the max smaller