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Reviewer: Toothpasted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2024 6:36 PM Title: Family Fight 2 - Overprotective

Would very much like to see this story continue! Please come back!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2023 1:35 PM Title: Family Fight 2 - Overprotective

Remy and (overprotective) Lori appreciation comment.

Okay, Remy and Lori have the most wholesome brother-sister relationship ever. It’s just sweet how Remy soothes Lori with his witts and playfullness, and she just wants him by her side.

And he can be more mature than Lori. By willing to not shut Alice completely out of the picture the guy is showing strength and empathy. They really complete each other.

Loved the interactions between them. Lori using her feet to not let him leave her side, scared, vulnerable, and now, right after she relented a bit… Yeah, Remy can’t stay away from her feet kkkkkkkkkkk.

Another wonderful chapter. As always, thanks for writing and sharing. Stay
safe!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2023 12:07 AM Title: Family Fight 2 - Overprotective

Interesting chapter. Is it bad that I hope the weight is starting to lessen not because Remy is growing bigger, but because he is growing even smaller, small enough that the he ends up stuck in a wrinkle in the foot?

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