[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor
You deserve all the praise for this story. So far you’ve used writing to depict a story about different perspectives, showcasing complex themes like violence, love and sex, negligence, religion and speciesism with rich details, wraping everything within the pains and tragedies of your main characters. As far as I can tell, we have a splendid coming of age story in the making – with size and speciesism being central components to move the narrative.
Marvelous. I don’t know how to emphasize more the quality of your writing. And for the record: I knew it! I had a felling at least one of my favorite stories would be updated until New Year’s eve! The wait paid off. Thank you! Thank you!
About Divya, she played perfectly what I would expect from a best friend, offering layers to Lucy’s character and actions along the way. Even better: she went beyond my expectations and introduced Budhist concepts into the story. Could this be an explanation for the existence of Antopia? If yes… that 99.99%… is our boy Max already with a death flag on his head?
Man, now that Ithink about it, we don’t really know if its possible to bring Max
back to his original size.
I also want to talk about Max and where him meeting with Penelope might lead. but I also want to wait and see how they interact moving forward after our hero recovers from all the shock and violence.
Again, thanks for sharing. Wish you a Happy New Year! May 2023 be full of peace and inspiration for all of us.
Author's Response:
Divya is actually loosely based on a girl I know in real life so I am so glad you liked her character 😇
This story is going to have a lot more complex mature and political themes introduced to elaborate on a lot of characters' actions and motivations so I am very glad you enjoyed those concepts as well. Divya being a devoted Buddhist girl was used to explain the vast majority of her caring character towards insects but I plan to introduce some more religious themes and concepts as well later on in the story.
I also created Divya's character to be the polar opposite of Lucy to serve sort as a moral consciousness for Lucy to reflect on her own actions later on in the story
I have the next 4 to 5 chapters already have an outline planned out so you have a lot to look forward to
Bit of a spoiler alert you are going to find out a lot more about Princess Penelope soon.
Wishing you a happy new year too! I love your in-depth analysis reviews 😀
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor
That was another really good chapter. I love the contrast between Divya and Lucy and also once again your descriptions. The way you describe those huge and immense sizes is so great. Also I love sock and shoe content so that helped too haha. Looking forward for more :D
Author's Response:
Divya's character is designed to be the polar opposite of Lucy's cruelty towards bugs so you can think of her kind of Lucy's consciousness to reflect on her own actions. I also created Divya because I felt there were too many stories focussing on giantess cruelty and not enough of other interactions so Divya's interactions are the perfect example of gentle interactions, especially the feeding ants the Oreo crumbs scenes.
That being said I have already planned an outline for the next 4 to 5 chapters so you have a lot to look forward to 😎