Date: January 24 2025 2:34 PM Title: Secrets unveil
Meeting Jasmine.
I like how when Rose goes to retrieve Mathew she states to Sam that sparing his friend is not up to her.
Now for meeting Jaz. When you revealed the twist that she was actually tiny I was relly fond of it at the time because I thought it was subversive and cool that a tiny was using Rose for her agenda of control and fear.
Now I haven't talked much about Matthew ebcause I don't care much about him as acharacter but I like his reaction here because it is so realsitic.
When you find the great queen that even the giants fear is actually at your level, of course you're going to get a big head about it.
"Why is she so feared when even I could fuck her up" hi hubris was realistic and him gaining confidence when dealing Jasmine to poke, prod and even threaten her was the first interesting peice of characterization for him.
I like how when thye're bickering like siblings Rose has to be the mother and tell them to calm down lol.
Wizard of Oz
Now for the wizard of Oz I joke about years ago(man how time flies).
This moment recontexualised what we just learned, and at first I didn't like it and much preferred the orgininal twist. Now?
I much prefer it.
Learning the reason why eveyone is so scared of Jasmine is because she's a titan that could outgrow and kill them liek they're ant if she want to has so much lore implications.
How prominent are titans? are they rare? where do they come from? what's their general culture and view on their smaller siblings and tinies?
Does the giant world at large no about them? humans don't seem to know they even exist.





Date: March 20 2022 11:29 PM Title: Secrets unveil
really nice story!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the story. Also thanks for the rating
Date: March 20 2022 5:32 PM Title: Secrets unveil
Oh shit Wizard of Oz moment.
Author's Response: Lol.
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