Reviews For It's Her World
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Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 3:07 PM Title: The beginning

Okay, I like what you have so far, but the structure is a bit bricky for my taste. Making the narration in several paragraphs helps to make reading easier. 

Reviewer: La Giantess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 9:32 AM Title: The beginning

Nice for a beginner, and I liked that story more than the last (that involved a cat). By the way, I'd just recommend to organize better the block of texts, maybe using a new line for every speech, so it's better to read.

Please don't get me wrong, I loved your text, it was little but ok for a nice quick read. For me, it deserves five stars.

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