Reviews For It's Her World
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Reviewer: blackflashed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2026 7:37 PM Title: The beginning

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 3:07 PM Title: The beginning

Okay, I like what you have so far, but the structure is a bit bricky for my taste. Making the narration in several paragraphs helps to make reading easier. 

Reviewer: La Giantess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 9:32 AM Title: The beginning

Nice for a beginner, and I liked that story more than the last (that involved a cat). By the way, I'd just recommend to organize better the block of texts, maybe using a new line for every speech, so it's better to read.

Please don't get me wrong, I loved your text, it was little but ok for a nice quick read. For me, it deserves five stars.

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