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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2022 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good story and well-written. Enjoyed the back-and-forth approach between Astrid's POV and Filip's. Unaware vore is quite appealing. You know, there could be a continuation of the story with Amanda getting tricked and shrunk down and eaten by Astrid, perhaps after enjoying a bit of foreplay. Maybe a sequel?



Author's Response:

Thanks <3 I thought the POV switches would be a nice way to emphaise the unaware nature of the vore, and the contrasting experiences of Astrid's pleasure with Filip's panic. If you just had Filip's scenes alone then the panic vibe wanes with prolonged exposure, so a switch is a convenient way to reset it. 

The commissioner has another entry in my queue coming up in a few months. I believe they wanted a sequel with Astrid, but that may change by the time I start writing. That's a fun idea with Amanda being shrunk down, perhaps if Astrid blames her for Filip "disappearing."

Reviewer: InHerBelly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2021 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

A++

9 out of 10 Dentists recommend being digested by Astrid. The one who didn't recommend got swallowed.

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm only surprised Astrid didn't swallow the rest too <3 

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