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Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 6:03 PM Title: A War On Two Fronts

Go a bad feeling about Pat and Betty

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 3:24 PM Title: A War On Two Fronts

Don't feel bad about the long delay in posting. This story is worth the wait.

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2015 11:34 PM Title: A War On Two Fronts

Great chapter! I'm glad we got that tidbit about Amy's future plans, it's great that she chose a realistic career considering her condition...I hope we get another chapter soon, I missed these characters!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2015 10:57 PM Title: A War On Two Fronts

War seems to mean Amy and gang getting interviewed by everyone for now but Patrick has to have more to his story than to simply come over and ask her questions. This could lead a whole army of journalists descending on the town to ask them questions. 

That part where Mark admits how it really felt to be in Amy's breasts is neat, finally admitting it to someone. 

I kind of wished you had let us see what Ben's reaction to Patrick's advice. Hope he isn't too mad with being in Amy's cleavage, it could be worse. She could have shoved him between her buttcheeks or down the front. 

  Nice to see your update after so long, I want to follow it to the end!



Author's Response:

I don't know Nostory. You might want to reread that last line. Not everything is as it seems up front.

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