[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
I loved this chapter <3 we need more!
Author's Response: Yay, glad you had fun
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
This is really awesome. I love stories which go strong on the detail, and you've done a great job with that. Your prose is very evocative.
ps. I know she was a bit of a jerk but I still feel sorry for Brittany now ^-^
Author's Response: So do I! Thank you for taking the time to comment, makes my day. I'm glad you liked the detail. I love describing the little mechanics but worry about bogging things down.
Date: January 04 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Yay! Finally an update. It had been so long I was thinking of Pming you to make saure you hadn't died!
Your so great at both the discriptions of the giants from the tiny's point of view and your exploration into how a family would feel to be in the care of the youngest, and formerly smallest member.
Things I'm looking forward to, The akward first day Gina gets to "babysit" And Brittneys shrinking. Can't wait!
Author's Response:
PM me anyways!
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, after writing it I almost just skipped it altogether in order to get to more action heavy stuff.
Gina's going to be a great babysitter, she just has to remember to wear turtle necks.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
This is a great story so far! Very creative, I am looking forward to reading more!
Date: January 04 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
awesome story. you're a great writer.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
So someone's already written a book. Why am I not surprised. People will cash in on anything. "Dr. Terrance Smith." Probably has his own talk show on cbs and makes quotes like "Loud is not allowed."
Everyone's coping differently. Cole seems the most leveled of the childrens I think he'll recover quickly. Hell he's got the attention of a young, curvy, latin girl. Sooo..silver lining?
Keep fighting Brittany! Make life earn the right to shrink you and when it does happen maybe start a clothing line? There's a whole new customer base no one's catering to. Small Comforts are a bunch of hacks. Jump in now and you'll be raking it in hand over fist! 5 years fron now you'll be touring Paris debuting clothes you designed yourself AND model in!
Anyway good chapter.
Author's Response:
Damn, that's what I love about your stories. You get out into the bigger world instead of just staying in the living room.
I love those ideas and might just steal some of them.
Cole is having more trouble adapting than he expected, I think he had more control issues than realized. Hopefully he'll figure out how to enjoy life at his new size.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Great stuff, nice to see this back.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: Small Comfort
Great chapter. These characters, dialogue and Erica's personality are what make this story for me. Love how she had to threaten Brittany to give her that cd. Always nice to see a meek person with power but yet doesn't abuse it. Well done.
Also loved the "chores" of painting her toes and the image of her using some extra tiny paintbrush to return the favor is quite funny.(hope that happens)
Can't wait for Brittany to shrink. And Gina's character was a nice addition that meshed very well with these characters.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the specific notes, it's really enjoyable and helpful to hear what details worked for you.
Man, everyone seems anxious for Brittany to shrink. What did she do to you?