Reviews For Erica's House
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Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

Good story so far!  I know its going to be a while, but I'd really like to see  Erica set the brothers up with the girls that had crushes on them.  I'd like to see what kind of "normal life" they can try to have.  We're seeing how Erica as the guardian treats them, but what about the everyone else they knew and society at large?



Author's Response:

I'm actually a bit anxious to get back to the present as well, I have a bunch of notes on their ongoing lives once everyone has adjusted to the new world.  It'll be awhile though, maybe I'll insert a 'back to the present' chapter at some point.

 

 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

Well, since you asked....   I'd like to see Cole shrink next.  One of Erica's friends could come over, maybe one that had a major 'Crush' on him?   She would be extremely gentle, but very, Very, touchy/feely  she could spill something on him, and have to awkwardly give him a bath, you know-'just to make up for what she'd done?

That's my vote!  I'd shrink 'the Colester' down and give him a giantess girlfriend with a major crush on him!  ;`) 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, people seem to be interested in that line from chapter 1 about Gina's crush.  Good thing I have fun plans to follow up on that.

Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

This is getting really good.  Awesome character work so far, I can already tell this is going to be great!  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you keep reading.  I'm planning to get out a chapter a week.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

Ms. Danes discription sparked an interest....  Maybe, she could have a little prisoner of her own?  If somebody just happened to come up, missing?

I'm hooked already!  Seems like you've got a well thought-out plot already in place, and I can't wait to see what else could actually 'Suck' more than this Sunday?  ;`)

Great work realRS!



Author's Response:

I have tons of ideas as to where the plot will go, but nothing is firmly set.  If you have any ideas of your own I'd love to hear them.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

A touching moment amongst the craziness.

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