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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 26: Traitors

:-O

Nuff said.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 26: Traitors

I'd like to second gadgetmawombo's thoughts. Hot damn that hit hard. You've got a fine story here; keep it coming!

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 26: Traitors

Wow! What a twist! Out of all the updates this week yours takes the cake!

I really did not expect Isabella to die like that and to have Sanders be the one to do it. Damn. Whatever she learned she is taking to the grave unfortunately.

RIP

I fully expect Sanders to be done with the society after this. No way can he work with an organization that has two corrupt bitches as the head. 

So is this the end of chapter 1? 

 



Author's Response:

Nope one more chapter of Act 1

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 26: Traitors

Holy crap and then you had to post THAT song too. I'm just speechles...*gives a ten rating then has to sit down for awhile.*



Author's Response:

Yeah...I was listening to Blue as I was writing that last part.

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