[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
I liked it very much so. Hope carn can teach her their language an fast.. That emperor needs to be talk a giantess kinda lesson.
aaron
Author's Response:
A giantess kind of lesson lol aaron. It may not be Carn who teaches her their language, but I'm getting there. Should be about a chapter or 2.
Date: February 23 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
RHere:
one of the most fair in all the land I would most definitely dispute with anyone who dared say otherwise
You should add in an "and" or after land add a full stop.
And yes, do like it. The in perpective was unexpected, and actually like it. Mostly can't d it well mainly because it's too frequent or have many time skips.
Author's Response:
There's the Stubby I know! Did you have a little trouble typing at the end of this review? It was kinda hard to understand, but I think you said that you liked it.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
Like IT! Hell yea! Superb work, Dudeman! Jonathan Swift would say that your quite the satirical poet.....
Definately, keep this going, I can't wait to see what happens next...
You got a 'Knack' for this I believe, the style of writing seems natural for you? Maybe?
I think so! Anyway good job!
Author's Response:
This definitely has seemed easier for me than other works. Glad you like this Cat!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
I never usually like this type of story but you seemed to have really got a good handle on things, perhaps more interaction between the people and Amanda but so far so good, keep it up!
Author's Response:
I too am never usually into something like this, but it's actually a lot of fun to write. And don't worry, I hope to have a lot more interaction between the 2 sides in about 2 chapters.