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Summary:

When cities across the world like New York, London and Toyko go missing, their foundation, buildings and people disappearing in thin air, the world assumes multiple theories: Aliens? Terrorist? Judgement Day?

The answer might shock them: the cities haven't left Earth at all. In fact, each of them has been transported into a different body part, and those bodily functions will destroy each and every city, killing millions through actions of eating, using the restroom, and more.

First story in an upcoming series


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Micropocalypse
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13768 Read Count: 57171
[Report This] Published: February 23 2018 Updated: August 12 2018
Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed
Date: November 21 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Coming All Together Now! (Part 1)

You one of the best writers I've ever scene on this site ! 

Your writing of Katie is absolutely perfect! And the best part of your story. She fulfils every perfect detail I love in an unaware gts character. 1. How big her butt is (how it ripples and jiggles just laughing, moving and especially farting) 2. How big her appetite is. 3. How nasty of her body is inside and out. (Mountian size turds, constantly farts, lazly wipes, fart residue, still wearing the same spandex) 4. How she intentionally have the nano people go into other places (on other giantess people)

The amount of detailed unaware content that you put in your story is incredible. Absolutely love how you juggle different pov's from the giantess and her actions to a micro person or city (in or on) one part of her body and how her actions are affecting each of them on different levels or at different times simultaneously.

For example the parts where you wrote of Claire playing with Katie's ass then having Katie accidentally release a small fart that sent a tiny piece (for them) of poop into Claire's mouth, then switch pov that same action to Oliver seeing Claire and it hitting her teeth leaving a stain, then switch it to Rimini, Italy in the colon and how the poop started off as a long strip of poop that was spread across the main street which by the fart rolled up into one giant ball that carried any poor soul caught in it from her ass into Claire's teeth then tongue then down her throat. That kinda of writing it stuff I REALLY love in unaware stories.

This is all to say I'm begging you to continue this story as I see it hasn't been updated since last year in August. Do you take commissions ? Heck I'll even do that if just to get the Part 2 of "Coming All Together Now" and more. Your writing is that good.

As for Ideas what I hope is that we continue on with Katie and her continuing to unawarely/unintentionally spreading the micro people plus poop and fart residue to other people in the party like how she did with Claire having the droplet of fart residue sucked into Claire’s nose that carried Oscar when she took in a whiff of Katie's accidental fart. Even better have Jessica sneeze oscar and snot/boogers into other girls food or Katie having some of the poop remains of Rimini go to girls mouths, thier hair, in eyes, or land on buttcheeks while girls are dancing =D Just my ideas and hopes for things to see at the party

Summary:

New York City didn't expect this on a Saturday afternoon...

This is, unless they expected the city to shrink to the size of a quarter and be placed in the rectum of an unaware college girl Mabry, whose bowel movements, gas and appetite they must struggle to survive against, while also exploring the lactose intolerant Amari and sweaty Danica for the hope that may save them all...

One thing's for sure: this story has it all!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Destruction, Feet, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19029 Read Count: 29255
[Report This] Published: June 14 2020 Updated: August 21 2020
Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed
Date: April 28 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The Set-Up

A thousand apologies for being so beyond late in giving my reviews for this story. As you already know Skulldeath50 both your micro city stories has been my all time favorite story on this site. And this 1st chapter exemplifies why. Starting off with the character of Mabry who like Kate from your original Micro City story was EASILY the best thing about it. That type of girl who is pretty but her body functions, eating patterns, manners, and etc are anything but is just AWESOME ! Having that overwhelmingly fat ass that jiggles from absolutely everything, her farting literally 24/7, and her colon being a wasteland that now harbors New York City is why your the best ! 

Giving some comments on the other subjects of this first chapter, love that she shares a bed with her two other roomates, love that Amari is another big butted girl who reacts terribly to dairy and other food items, love that Danica is a sweaty girl with bad gas. Super love that Mabry watches friends while eating chilly with her chubby stomach out. All that is the reasons why you are the best ! 

Summary:

To many, Mrs. Pennington is just your average high school health teacher. Deep down through, she’s got much bigger plans. 


Her class is currently learning about reproduction, and she plans to take her first period class (her favorite) on a special field trip. Not to somewhere, but inside someONE.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Scat, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37412 Read Count: 133988
[Report This] Published: April 05 2022 Updated: April 21 2024
Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed
Date: June 12 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The beginning

THIS.STORY.IS.GOLD Unknown893 ! I can't express it enough how freaking awesome this story is. I wanted to send my reviews for a good while know but been busy. There's so much i wanted to say. As an unaware fan and body exploration fan since I was a kid from watching Magic School Bus this is one of the best type of stories i could ever ask for ! From the characters and your insanely great detials in POV and etc. There's more I've got to say trust me but thank you Unknown893 for this ! 

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Ladies and Gentlemen, Her

So sorry I've been busy and haven't been able to send the rest of my reviews on each chapter Unknown893 but trying to continue with those as i have so much to say! Considering this second chapter reveals Amelia herself i'll review on that along with Mrs. Pennington. 

Youve done such an incredible job with Amelia. I LOVE how she is this very adorable, beautiful girl that is really sweet BUT is so sexy and has a big booty and love that you continuously mentions how her butt and boobs giggle all the time and even moreso how you have Mrs. Pennington insult her and refer to her as a thot as well lol! It's hilariously good and just love how you made their teacher a perfect mix between someone like Ms. Frizzle but someone who has devious and dark side. love it !

But as much as i love these two I can't wait to talk about my actual favorite character of the story in the next chapter though and I bet you can guess who hehe.

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2023 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Amelia’s anal defenses

REALLY hope they do get to explore the buttcheeks as I've been wishing for that since the start of the story! i really want to the class to be able get off the bus like they been doing and get to have fun walking on Amelia's buttcheek land and do stuff to it please ! 

Alot of reviews are saying they hope the knife won't be felt but i hope so ! It goes with why i been LOVING Ashley the best character here lmao. Here being the unknown vip thats moving things along again would be so awesome haha. 

Really hoping for no deaths as that kinda would kill the mood of the story honestly since this has been such a blast of a field trip for the class and Mrs. Pennington

Still working on my other reviews especially my very long one on my favorite character of the story so wanted to get this new update review out beforehand though.

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed
Date: March 03 2023 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Return of the Pussy

Aww i REALLY hope they get to return back to the buttcheeks eventually please =( I loved all we got with her anus but they never got to really enjoy and walk on Amelia's buttcheeks and explore it like they already did with her pussy already. I do love that there back but hope the buttcheeks get thier turn again Unknown893. Also hope my other big hope is that other body parts get explored that i am go into further detail in my other reviews im about to send


As for this chapter BEYOND awesome we got another update so fast ! =D your the best  ! and it was SO hot that Ashley once again shows why she's the best character and pulled that move that got the class moving foward again lmao LOVE how Amelia jumped out her seat and her buttcheeks clapped and jiggled because of it ! and loved when you mentioned all the things her anus has done for her including dealing with boys and men ogling her ass haha love that part!

Thank you so much Unknown893 ! and hey are you getting my PM's i've sent as well ? Really wanted to review and compliment directly to you. Keep being awesome !

Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed
Date: April 21 2024 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Clitoris climbing

WOOOHOO !! Thank you so much for updating and continuing this wonderful story Unknown893 ! This has been the best thing on the site in years ! 

And this chapter was GOLD especially the terrorist part ! Love SO much how you revealed other things have invaded her ass and tits ! That's so hot ! And even Ants ?! I would love so much if you show us how that happened! Love how Ameila is always unaware of this stuff or even when suffering isn't sure why. Hope the next update is soon !