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The Metzakal Ritual by bobobo Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

This story takes place in an alternate reality where an ancient civilization employs magic and potions in its everyday lives. The Metzakal Ritual is at the heart of the Huhmtakil Culture. Every year all men at the age of 18 are gathered to display their prowess and engage in a fighting competition to determine the strongest. Those deemed worthy become warriors and are given the right to mate with the most beautiful maidens. Those that don’t make it are assigned other tasks. Some, in accordance with religious beliefs, are shrunk and devoured by the maidens. This story follows Jumko as he gets ready for the most important week of his life.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52463 Read Count: 84312
[Report This] Published: December 22 2015 Updated: February 20 2016
Reviewer: fierysport Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Amazing and engaging story.  I had to read the final few chapters over and over again.  It's one fo the most erotically descriptive prose I've ever come across, especially when Jumko is inside Nadia's mouth and gut.  I wonder if Nadia is based on a real life character known to the author?  

I wasn't sure about the whole castration thing.  Could have been more sensual had he been allowed to keep his genitalia, albeit as a vastly reduced size.  I also couldn't accept Nadia's words (out of context) given she was a virgin and about to experience sex for the first time.

Overall I loved it and especially the whole concept of having to swallow a live being to almost trigger the fertility process.  Well done and deserving of a follow up or similar prose.   

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