Just a fetish collector XD
Alice is a senior in high school and those around her are disappearing. Unaware to her she is causing the problem by thinking of what they are or should be and transforming them into that object unknown to them.
Great concept. I would love to see more of unfortunate victims of her power.
As other people have pointed, this story has a lot of potential
Ashely is like any other college student, just trying to get by. Sometimes he just needs to have a little fun.
One of the best stories I have ever read... I can imagine some guy could be very (un) pleased to be his insole, or Ashely could be interested into smoking some dude XP... anyway, you have better ideas than me and I cannot wait to see more cruel but really creative transformations from Ashely XD
I love how Ashely threats his playthings, I really do XD, he is so creative with them, and if we think on that a few moments, he also turn them into quite useful things (in that way they should be quite grateful with him XP)… for ideas, I imagine he can use some rude dude as his sexy underwear XD, or a couple of those as some cute pair of socks, or turning someone into a toering for Clair… but of course, Ashely seems to have more preference for more disposable things, so tampons or false nails could be a good fate for some guys (perhaps an entire gang of dudes XP)
"I'm such a nice person..." ... wow! That's phrase, that inner thought of Ashely is simply delightful, an amazing insight of how he sees his playthings.
I’ve to say that the chapter 10 has been one of the best tf stories I’ve read, I usually prefer inanimate transformation scenarios, but this one was a real pleasure. I love how you stablish characters, with their own proper motivations, this makes the transformation process and the realization of their new reality something extraordinary to read, one can actually feels their emotions and their shock and above all, the exquisite cruelty of Ashely’s.
The victim just screams "why??!!"... and the only reply Ashely gives them is “I was bored” or a "Why not? XD" ...
I just love how he treats them, with that joyfull naturalness, mixed with a sense of indifference that actually accentuates his cruelty… I like to think on, what would a person think with the power to turn others into any objects on them? It would be better to consider them as useless individual rather than useful items? I mean, like in chapter 8, one could think that all was some punishment over Tod, but at the end, when Ashely explains his simpler reasons the whole story acquires another tone, a better one XD. or like in chapter 2, when he considered it would be rude to ask Daryl if he minded getting him a hot dog, turning him instead … that was so great… It is like whit the delivery guy, when his transformation was to make something useful of some guy who has none importance as a person to Ashely.
But you show us how that’s is not a mere utilitarianism from his part in which people are just mere potential objects, but actual “playthings” in which their utility is related with the mood of Ashely, which recognize the trauma and pain of his victims and delights in it at the same time it doesn’t implies the great del for him.
As I say it, exquisite XD
I love clothe transformation, but that implies some idea of having a tf person around for some time, and one of the things I enjoy of Ashely’s tf is the almost immediate dismiss on his victims, turning them into just disposable momentary things (with some exceptions, as the toilet guy X/), so instead of having some guy as his thong (which would be awesome XD), or using some random guys as new insoles for his sneakers, I can imagine him more using a pretty girl in some restaurant as a Q-tip or as toilet paper, just because he needs it, but also, having a really good time by turning some annoying fella into a pimple and enjoy on his pain at the moment he squishes him. Or some dude as a candle during a blackout, a great opportunity to make other “improvements” in some other people XD
For his physical appearance, I have imagined him sexy and petite, something like this https://imgur.com/a/6PAzX0e .. However, with black hair, not blonde… for some reason I imagine Sammy being blonde, but not Ashely. However, I imagine Ashely whit a mischievous look in his face https://imgur.com/a/sg31lkI ….
I think Ashely's powers could be also used remotely. I mean, I can imagine a situation in which some dude after being a troll to an unknown guy in internet, is then manipulated and transformed before being transported in front of a cute sexy boy, realizing he was the one he was bothering … then, as Ashely started to explains the situation with his wonderful cruelty, the guy then suffers the last part of his humiliation, by realizing his new purpose on life by being turned into something “special” for Ashely’s fun XD…
Uh?... where is chapter 12?... XP
Togheter with the introduction of the new character, which is so great as Toby has a lot of potential for the story, I love this quick but interesting look at Ashely's psychology. Through the previous chapter one could think that Ashely's friends stand in some kind of "safe ground"... however this let us know that's not the case.
For Toby, I think he could be somehow reclutant in some way or another, but perhaps turning into a crueler version of himself as Ashely shows his gift... however, as Toby becomes more and more active he could be, unnoticingly, giving to Ashely the ideas of what to do whith him... that would be quite ironic XD... Toby being used with his own ideas XD
It's unwise to steal candy from someone who has a sweet tooth. It's even unwiser to provoke a Vampire on the one night a year they enjoy the most.
Thank you story for my fan's who voted over on Eka's Portal what they wanted to see the most.
I love it. I just love it. The creative and above all cruel way Elizabeth punish her new toy is delightful XD. I cannot wait to see how she plays with Aubrey XD.
Great work. And I have to say it again; I love it! XD ... I really wanna make a fanart of this XD.
Thanks for share it with us XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it Anonymous. ^,^
This was a fun write for multiple reason's and I can't wait to continue it.
Thank you for sharing your kind word's, and I'm glad it could inspire you. :)
You see an ad for a new app, it is like tinder but instead of dates it is for women to live out fantasies of owning men as objects. You download it and your adventure begins.
(storyline completed now)
its back, now with an alternate ending!!
I love it... my favorite so far id the chapter 1, but hey! The second one is amazing too ... this story really has a lot of potential... The concept of the app and the perspective of the poor fella is the best. I love how those girls treat the transformed guys, as just mere object… I mean that’s what they are, but they know they have conscious and they just don’t care about their lives… only the satisfaction they gave to them … the indifference towards those guys is delightful (I use this word a lot XD)
A short but nice story XD... I was to suggest an insole transformation, but the boot one is great. ... about ideas, what about being a lipstick, or a nail polish?
Great chapter XD ...
I?m going to vote: Bree Morgan-survive... I want him to be alive a little longer... XD
