First let me just say that i absolutly love the world/character building in this. The writing is smooth and is just overall fun to read. I absolutely love all of the characters especially Izzelah. You did an absolutely amazing job describing how dark and horrible the dark ages were. This series is the size of a full fucking book with over 180 something pages worth of story. I absolutely love this series but I write this reveiw to tell you the one thing that is very off putting for me in this story. The age of death in a major and minor. The fact that a major can live to be over 60 years older than a minor is just so baffling to me. It would make sense for the bigger species to live a little bit longer like 10-15 years like how most women live longer than men. But just the fact that Ignacio will live longer than Izzelah is heartbreaking, and while some may argue it’s good storytellig and more realistic that life is depressing like that, it almsot makes the whole romance thing between majors and minor obsolete. Whats the point in having Izzelah and Sebrina in love (because I know that’s most likely where it’s going) if Sebrinas just gonna live to be 150 when Izzelah dies at 90. Anyway, tangent over. I’m not trying to tell you how to write your story, just giving my opinion. Great story though for real, you have real talent.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise. While I completely respect your opinion on the age gap, I have to say I think it makes the whole love angle more potent. It's heartbreaking and tragic yes, but I think it really speaks to the characters that they're willing to go for it anyway. Not to mention it's just another element that shows the absolute superiority of MAJORS in this world and exactly what Izzellah's against. Not even time is on her side. I think that's also why minors are more prone to ingenuity in design, or at least they were. They strive to leave a mark on the world. Will it work out for Izzellah? Should she even bother? Thank you again!