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Bio:
Categories: Butt, Crush, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10953 Read Count: 14003
Date: February 20 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Banfield: This is the old editor of Vision Publishing. I bought your story about 9 years ago. You are a great writer, no doubt about that. But if you can, every now and then, avoid the "vore" it would make it so much more pleasant to those who dsilike that. I am seriously considering VP again with not only stories, but screenplays. Write a story, as only you can do, with no toilet, no vore but insertion and "clean" butt play and you may find yourself a very happy man. Email it to me at: yuuvgotmale@hotmail.com and we'll go over it. If nothing else, I'd love to see you write w/out vore and bowel movements. You are one of the best in the world at this and in my opinion you need to appeal to wider and different audences. Use "butt" and "squashing" by all means, but leave vore and human functions completely out of it. Use your imagination. Nice to see you again.
Author's Response:
Well, Tweaky, I shall contact you. You suggest I "use my imagination" which, if you check on all my stories, I most certainly do.
Categories: Adventure, Butt, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4769 Read Count: 28470
Date: November 14 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Laurel's Tears
Great story. Ch.4 confusing and gets off track unless it leads to a justifiable fetish finish. Best part was her sitting on him in car since it used the giant ass fetish in a non-crude manner. The reader feels cheated, because it's so well-written and we look forward to a sophisticated giant ass or pussy finish. Keep writing!!