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Summary:

Based on NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe; some characters may or may not appear in both stories :)

Old friends return to Old Creek and Alejandro his put in a burning dilemna. He'll have to decide how he stand sexually, mentally and what he see for his future, all while dealing with the most massive woman he's ever met....


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Maternal, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100306 Read Count: 132586
[Report This] Published: December 07 2017 Updated: January 22 2018
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: March 23 2018 Title: Chapter 29: (Bonus) Alaric and Ariel

Nice addition to the Major/minor series really enjoyed the characters and the world building. Glad to see Alejandro able to keep up with Majors keeping them on their toes even having control over his younger siblings which love him so much. Couldnt be more happy that Alaric was able to find and help a minor he could love showing that there are Majors are able to love instead of just dominate. Really enjoyed both families even though Shannon took it way too far with her mother. Not many stories have the younger sister actually calling their smaller older sibling "big brother" which is a big plus showing how much Lindsey loves Rando.

Thanks for the story.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the work here. It's all thanks to NotSirk story, of course (plus each of his chapter push me to try harder ^^). The Alaric and Ariel chapter is one of my favourite because of how it allowed me to develop a character who hadn't had a lot of spotlight (and won't have much for the forseeable future, really). And yup, Shannon was really unhinged when it came to her family and especially her mother, but I'm happy that I've managed to craft believable and likeable characters ! 

So, thans for the review !

Summary:

The MAJOR/minor crossover special done to it's completion.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Giant, Muscle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36645 Read Count: 41175
[Report This] Published: December 19 2017 Updated: February 11 2019
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: March 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Didn't expect to get spoiled in this story but that just makes me want to read even more of the Classic. How did relationships grow and how did Mei get her hands on Izzy.

Glad to see Izzy and Sabrina have grown closer. Izzy still having that fire in her to continue doing her own thing even making Shannon feel slightly intimidated. Also its nice to see Izzy wishing for a younger sibling even though she kind of wants to "mold" this giant sibling into being a better person towards minors.

Guess I need to read the other Major/minor stories in the mean time to get more familiar with this world.

Thanks for another great story.

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: February 07 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Catch and release/TENSION

Thanks for the updates. As expected of Izzy losing it after meeting Shawna. Also showing that Majors just see Minors as pets even everyone around Izzy just wanting to get into her pants without even trying to change and keep repeating the same mistakes. Was not expecting that ending for chapter 9 can't wait for more.

Summary:

A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223239 Read Count: 235149
[Report This] Published: February 03 2018 Updated: August 26 2019
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: March 23 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Intimate confessions

Just finished catching up to this story after reading the last installment gotta say love where this is going but didnt expect that to happen at end of chapter 11.

Glad to see Alejandro and Lindsey still getting along wonderfully even bonding and her trying her best to keep him happy and safe. Good to see Alejandro can still mess with Majors like he did with the principal and Lindsey showing that he is actually smarter than they give him credit, even trying to hold it together with a Tier3.

Can't wait for Alejandros reaction and the eventual meeting with the other cast.

 



Author's Response:

Truth been told, I hadn't in mind such a big reveal at the end of this chapter at first,  but it grew out of it organically, so I decided to not cut it. There will be quite a lot of troubled waters ahead, for most of the characters, but don't worry, ALejandro will deal with it next chapter. And then we'll return to Lindsey, since it's been some time now ! And speaking of her, I'm happy that you still like her. She has a lot of character growth to do, but I think her foundations are solid enough now for her to develop in a good way. And then, it'll be the school days, and expect some madness ahead !

As always, thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: May 04 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Third Interlude

The Lindsey chapter was good, was nice seeing her meet new people. The chapter had quite a few grammatical errors and the ending felt a little weird but guess it showed what a Major goes through at that age.

The Bondange chapters I did not expect which was a good surprise. Liked seeing Shannon and Alejandro growing closer especially with Alejandro starting a Bond taking the lead was unexpected. Wonder if Fiona's attitude will change when meeting Izzy even falling for her like everyone that meets her.

The Linda chapter was good showing more of how Majors tend to think of Minors which reinforce my own thoughs on that Majors feel like giant children. It felt like Lisa had quite a bit of power over Linda making her look like the adult. So to me Minors feel like adults while the Majors feel like bickering children if that makes any sense. Also wondering if Linda will make a pass at Izzy.

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review ! 

Sooner or later, i'll return to the old chapter to do the spell-checking and corrections they deserve;;; but not today, I'm too lazy for it !I'm glad that you liked the bondage chapters, they were kind of hard to pull off. For all the Izzy question, NotSirk will have to answer it someday, perhaps. I'm also glad that the Linda chapter came out well !

Once more, thanks for the review ! :)

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: February 07 2019 Title: Chapter 47: I'm angry, yes !

Nice to see whats going on in the background between the Crossover Special by expanding on the characters histories. Everyone still trying to get into Izzy's pants and failing by acting the usual way by treating Minors as pets/items with no say in any matters.

Wondering if Alejandro might lose it one day and just shut out all Majors from his mind even Shannon and Lindsey for acting like they know what is best for him because he is a Minor. Shannon for being a control freak that might end up hurting not just Alejandro but others because of jealousy. Lindsey for trying to "protect" Alejandro like a baby even though she struck him down and still belittles him.

Cant wait and see if Shannon and Mei's plan backfires spleddly on them for trying to control Izzy and use her as a pawn. This should bring them both down a peg and also make Mei realize she is fucking up her chances with Izzy by acting the wrong way, think she already had an inn with Izzy but this might just make her dead last in the running. This also applies to Lindsey and Sabrina for acting like Majors all the time and not as civilized people.

Thanks for the updates keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !

Sadly, you'll have to wait a certain amount of time for the resolution of the cross over since the Interlude released tomorrow will be the last bit of it for a time !

But don't worry, it'll still add to the crazyness ! 

Concerning Lindsey and Shannon (and the other main MAJORS) it a balancing act because I want them to be sympathetic but also flawed and deeply ingrained in their mainstream culture. They grew uo in a world where linors are seen as prized possession, not really peoples, in the end.

Therefore, even characters like them can't see the minors as their equals. Shannon truly deeply  love Alejandro, but she won't treat her the same way she would treat a MAJOR fiancé. He won't have any access to the inner working of her firms, for instance.

That being said, balancing those two aspects of the MAJORS is actually a main drive for the story and it adds to the reactions Alejandro could have. Je wouldn't have slapped Lindsey otherwise. And it took him a lot of guts : the last time he truly went against a MAJOR, he lost an arm after all.

Summary:

Modeled after the Incredible Shrinking Man story by Richard Matheson, I will attempt to take you through various tragic stages and scenarios impressed upon a man with a shrinking disease.  These scenes may not be in chronological order so please do not expect gradual size reduction.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33761 Read Count: 134107
[Report This] Published: March 22 2018 Updated: November 02 2018
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: November 02 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

Really enjoyed this story especially the mall chapters showing the size differences. Mary was a nice change of pace compared to the usual mean giantess, gotta love giant milfs.

Glad Sarah was able to make a better life for John and the he got a good ending while the antagonists got what they deserved unlike other stories.

“ How did that lady know your name?”, I had a good chuckle.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your assessment Grandmaster B...

I figured that there needed to be balance rather than a one sided mean evil get the life smashed out of you that others do or that I am guilty of myself sometimes.   After all, it's not all evil out there.

John deserved a break too.  He'd really been put through the ringer and we have to consider how we would behave if bad things  happened to us again and again and again..  Many would break, some would kill themselves, and others might just shut down completely...  So there had to be some light for our protagonist somewhere I figured.

Thanks a lot for the review Grandmaster B.  :)

A New Society by mg2sio4 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Women took over, shrinking men and reducing them to objects. Follow the journeys of these hapless men, nothing but playthings subject to the every whim of the woman that purchased them.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Object, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19649 Read Count: 171913
[Report This] Published: July 03 2018 Updated: April 25 2022
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: November 08 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Sole Searching

Thanks for updating this story. Seems like Hannah's friends treat Jeff nicer and more gentle even if they tease and humiliate him. Still think Jeff might be in a decent position since Gordon is still alive meaning they dont push him too far.

Wonder if we will see another side to Hannah and the girls in the future not complete TINEE supporters but at least give Jeff a decent break.

 

Camilla by little mikey Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times.  Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47101 Read Count: 61627
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: October 07 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not many stories with "changing times" theme liking this one. wonder how big the women will get.  Having a tiny petite woman now tower over the men was nice.

Will have to agree with Bigdawg K about Camilla, hoping she won't turn full villain and be brainwashed by the ladies. Seems Camilla still has a decent conscience but feeling good about hurting her Dad is a slippery slope. Will Mark kick her out of HIS house if she hurts him then what will she do. What will happen if Camilla makes Mark submissive will she then take care of him and her siblings having to drop out of school and find a better paying job?

I see this in many size stories women treating their husbands/brothers like pets or toys just throwing away all the time/love they shared in a heart beat. Guessing the statement power tends to corrupt is true in many stories. I know its a story I'm just thinking out loud.

Keep up the good work can't wait for more.

 

Shrinkism by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

Ryan thinks he's safe from Shrinkism but finds out that he is in for a big surprise.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201428 Read Count: 222663
[Report This] Published: December 30 2018 Updated: October 13 2023
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter. Poor Willow can't catch a break. Willow is too kind even going against her instincts which will now have a few consequences. Just want her to be happy with the other shrinkies shes been taking care of. 

Ryan for every step he takes he takes three back in this new evironment. Ryan just cant comprehend Willows actions after everything he has seen and been through. Wonder if he will ever learn even if it costs him an arm or leg.

Feeling Emily might get her mind blown by Shawn after they talk more, something she didnt do with Ryan. Instead of accusing Ryan of changing we might see a normal person come to understand they are the ones that change for the worse by acting like they care but really just ignore or hurt tinies. Cant wait to see what Mom will do by seeing Shawn and Emily's reaction. At least we can see Emily giving a pause to think or semi-reflect on her actions, hope she grows from the experience.

Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter showing how people act towards shrinkies even if they are acquaintances. Emily acting surprised how people treat shrinkies when she does the same just not as much to Ryan.  Both Emily and Mary being indenial about their own attitudes and actions towards Ryan and shrinkies. Not paying attention to Ryan, watching their step, checking if its Ryan who they are about to squish or even bothering to wear the earpiece. Ryan not able to grasp the situation he is in by being a shrikie not understanding how the world truly sees shrinkies and not considering the dangers of his size even though he has had a few mishaps inside his own home.

Glad to see Willow has become such a strong person but letting Ryan get to her was not good. Now we will see the consequences of the group losing their leader.

Keep up the great work.

Summary:

Remy is an average beta girl with an average prime family. There's nothing remarkable. There's nothing to see here.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23216 Read Count: 19920
[Report This] Published: February 07 2019 Updated: February 14 2019
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: February 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice to see you writing again. Was a little confused did the portals shrink people when they appeared? Glad to see the family still holds Remy in good regards even though shes tiny and thinking of her well being. Wondering if Lily might have some trouble after that sleeve movement.

Cute picture can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yes, the portals shrink people. Some get shocked while others remain mysteriously immune.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: February 14 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter. Erica and Lily trying to keep Remy safe at the cost of her loving them and it shows how much they are hurting. Think they are going at it the wrong way as in keeping Remi like a prisoner. Wondering if Remys nightmare was about Lily ending her missery also if Remy being small is the reason Lily hurts herself by not being able to be there for Remy.

Gotta agree with GulliversToy on the suit idea havent seen something like this in other stories, tinies using robots to interact with the world. Made me think back to the Men In Black Animated Series.

Keep up the great work hoping we see the family bond later down the road.



Author's Response:

Thanks, GB! Yeh, always wanted to do something with VR and the bot seemed like an interesting possibility.

Summary:

A story about a human living in a world where the Police are all Giantesses. He gets convicted of a crime and sentenced to death or live as a slave. He chooses life as a slave to hopefully prove his innocence against beings that are never wrong. He may regret his decision...


Categories: Incest, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57367 Read Count: 80027
[Report This] Published: June 09 2019 Updated: March 19 2020
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: July 15 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter expanding more on Caleb's past adding even more to the fuel. Everyone that did Caleb wrong being more guilt ridden by being forgiven but made aware that he will never trust another soul, find love or happiness ever again. Hope they suffer even more since they couldnt even be bothered to look into the crime like Caleb said.

Reminds me of another story I enjoy on this site, its all about trust and what happens when they break it.

Havent been hooked liked this in awhile keep up the great work.

Summary:

189 years ago the world was ravaged by the Shrining Virus. 99.5% of humanity was shrunk within a matter of days. Since then, the world has adapted to the existence of Big and Small people. While some Smalls are free others are owned.

However, the Bigs are not safe, because the shrinking virus still lingers in the blood of all humans. One out of every 15 Bigs will shrink during their lives.

Paul is the son of a powerful woman: a Senator who fights for the rights of Smalls. However, when Paul shrinks, will he be treated fairly by the women in his life or will he learn that all those lofty ideals are just for show?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55686 Read Count: 219012
[Report This] Published: December 23 2019 Updated: June 25 2020
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: January 29 2020 Title: Chapter 13: A New Home

Great story Benton enjoying every moment of it. Not many stories go into much details of a tinies life. I really dont like Sarah she wouldnt even give Paul a chance to explain anything while i feel he will have a better time with Brie. Thinking Paul will start working out with the team making him tougher.

Im also thinking Paul's Mom still cares for him but is just to busy with work and trying to find a way to keep him at home without affecting her or him. Guessing something will go down when Brie and Sarah have diner with their mom and she finds out what Sarah and her tinies did to Paul which will probably end badly for Sarah if Mom still cares for Paul.

Keep up the great writing cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: June 25 2020 Title: Chapter 20: His Final Home

It looks like Paul might end up in a decent place since Jen seems a little obsessed with Paul granting him some liberties but that probably won't happen. Kind of wanted Paul to mature a little while staying at Brie's but that didnt happen seems he might have turned into a bigger wimp.

Pauls sister's might end up bring screwed when his Mom finds out he has been sold even if she doesnt care for him. How will it look if her tiny son is owned by another Politician while she is trying to push for tiny rights. If Doris does care for Paul his sisters will probably end up even more screwed especially if she finds out how he was treated by them and the other tinies. Wonder if Hannah would have wanted to keep Paul and treat him well. Also did Katelyn really love Paul. Guess we will never know.

Overall this was a good read that ended too soon as many people before me have said.

Summary:

Florina has a set of very simple rules. However when she finds cause to break them she learns that a good deed does not always bring you good things in turn.


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Growing Woman, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13024 Read Count: 16970
[Report This] Published: March 19 2020 Updated: June 19 2021
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Gotta agree with sandman what a ungrateful person Sona is, not learning a little humility while being saved by Flo not even caring for the humans she killed or will kill. But this might also be the only way Sona knows how to be greatful by making Flo her property she can make sure Flo cant get hurt or die trying to keep her safe but wonder how long that will last or if Sona will learn more from Flo by being together now.

Great writing was hooked, wouldnt mind another chapter if possible.



Author's Response:

Surprised people still read some of my older stuff, but happy to hear you liked it! Yeah, the point here was more or less that the folks like Sona are immature brats. Which makes the size, in my opinion, a bit more just terribly unfair when some brat can just do what she wants.

Summary:

Other people's POV in the Shrinkism universe


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 214927 Read Count: 388580
[Report This] Published: August 04 2020 Updated: April 26 2024
Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Willow

Great stories, have to agree with the others last one was a little dark hope she at least finds a decent home and the family ends up getting bad karma.

Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: November 21 2020 Title: Chapter 9: There can only be one

Thanks for the update great content as usual.

Ch8 Loved how Megan teased the boys and that she even felt bad for a second for eating the friend. Wonder if the reason Megan has Tod between her breast isnt just to humiliate him but so she doesnt accidently kill him. 

Ch9 what a chapter. Willow going through more emotional times being left out yet again from the family. The details of Willow being handled from the sandwich makin to the end where such a ride. Poor Willow having a mother that doesnt care for her or even recognize her and a sister that hates her for almost no real reason but guess this is the norm in this world. Thinking Nina and mom wont be getting off easy this time since Dad was more adament on taking care of Willow wonder if there will be a falling out.

 

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed
Date: April 30 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Ryan Spends a Day with the Girls

Another great addition to Ryans struggles. Ryan still being naive about being a shrinky even at home yet his Mom and Emily both blame Ryan for being more distant when they both dont even bother to engage with him not even aware of his predicaments. Allison feeling betrrayed but instantly treating Ryan like any other shrinky just shows that he was right about keeping it from her.

Guessing Mom and Emily will probably feel a little guilty for Ryan but will move on since they couldnt even be bothered to keep an eye on him or even give the slightless of support while alive. Its weird seeing family members and friends act like their lives are the ones that are over when someone close to them shrinks.

Thanks for posting another great story.