Reviewer: Mechasharkzilla Signed
Date: January 08 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Ever Regretted Something?
Mushy rom-com levels of gentle interaction in a GTS story, while still being literate? Well, you've got me sold! Does make me sad that it's the end of their story, but I'd read a goddamn novel about this subject, so that's probably not a valid criticism.
So, yeah, really good job.
Author's Response: Hah, wow. Thank you. Reading this before heading into work is kinda giving my day a good start. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm the same way. I love a good, long read with this kind of material... for the most part. Sometimes a little bit of conflict here & there spices things up, too, but then again, the way I ended this story was setting up Sydney to never want Vince to experience conflict again. I'd always wondered about that-- why it's so rare that some of the other gentle stories, the girl lets the shrunk dude out of their sight, and grave misfortunes befall him. Which, is why I had Sydney research the subject while Vince slept. In my mind, he's going to have one very alert protector and lover in the time they spend together from there on out.
My work can never really hold a candle to some of the novel-length stories on this site, but typing short stories seems to be my niche. And, I do give a huge crap about typing fairly decently. Sometimes too much awful grammar can ruin something for me.
Again, thank you, Mechasharkzilla.
Author's Response: Hah, wow. Thank you. Reading this before heading into work is kinda giving my day a good start. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm the same way. I love a good, long read with this kind of material... for the most part. Sometimes a little bit of conflict here & there spices things up, too, but then again, the way I ended this story was setting up Sydney to never want Vince to experience conflict again. I'd always wondered about that-- why it's so rare that some of the other gentle stories, the girl lets the shrunk dude out of their sight, and grave misfortunes befall him. Which, is why I had Sydney research the subject while Vince slept. In my mind, he's going to have one very alert protector and lover in the time they spend together from there on out.
My work can never really hold a candle to some of the novel-length stories on this site, but typing short stories seems to be my niche. And, I do give a huge crap about typing fairly decently. Sometimes too much awful grammar can ruin something for me.
Again, thank you, Mechasharkzilla.