Giantess World

The first dances of Dalia Reyes by SirDarkvid Rated: R [Reviews - 4]

Summary:

Fking Keys and Fking Hades. How can he get rid of death all the time?

My name is Dalia Reyes Wood, I am currently 20 feet and this is the story of my growth and my path to being a hero... or at least since chapter 104, whatever it may be, this is MY story.

The chapters revolve around Dalia and her day to day during her third growth, which will raise her up to 60 feet in height. (Feet up, feet down)

But each chapter will contain segments from other perspectives or scenes for the sake of history.

Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing Woman, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 107 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 269332 Read Count: 292094

[Report This] Published: January 20 2018 Updated: July 10 2018

Reviewer: Link Signed
Date: January 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Defcons and you

I liked some of your phrases, e.g., smile of a lottery winner.

Phrases like that are what make foreign writers interesting to me. They're unique in the way they construct the English words into sentences.

That being said, I'd advise taking steps for more readable content. You can begin by familiarizing with dialog tags. It's probably the easist thing you can do at first to improve readability.

http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/

Writing is a lifelong process of improvement. Just starting writing can be the most exciting since the changes you make often have the biggest effect.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the support Link! (and thanks also for the link XD)

These first two chapters have been a little less worked because I was not used to write and handle the options on this page, (God, I still do not know how to put several heights in the menu)

Now that I have become accustomed more or less to how it works everything I will try to write again without using the dialogues and more like in the link that you have passed me.Thank you very much for everything and I hope this story entertains you half of what your story entertains me!

Reviewer: Link Signed
Date: January 24 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Say something (part 1)

Hanna seems like a nice girl. It's too bad she gets picked on a lot by the other kids.

Unfortunately, I think some concepts are lost in translation. The dialog tags help, but it's still challenging to read and follow. I know some folks write giantess stories on language-specific boards. That might be a good idea to get more reviewers. Just a thought.

Author's Response:
For reviews do not worry! I have plenty of reviews in real life (all the people I've written / adapted stories and scripts for theater), also not find a forum or a page for stories of giantess in Spanish is quite difficult :(

On the part of Hannah, she has not changed since she was little, still a girl who is quiet but with a good heart. Here the problem is the feeling of herd / clan. Sofia made the decision with 12 years to have to mess with Hannah and everyone decided it was the right thing to do. At the end of the day, Sofia is the lion, the king of the jungle and the words of a lion is the law.