Izzellah Ivory struggles to cope as a minority in a world of superior beings.
This canon?
Pffft! Hah! I feel it's canon...because I wrote it. For me it takes place sometime after Izzellah's first year at Winton High. Like during a spring break or something. But truthfully you'll have to ask Kurogane335. Alejandro, Alaric, Old Creek, ect..... are all belong to them.
Okey! I'm just gonna write down my thoughts on MAJORS here:
Looking at the other reviews, it's pretty clear that most MAJORS are hated by most of the readers; and not without reason. Everything they do is hypocritical! They claim that they want to return the minors to what they once were, yet they view them as helpless children, spoil them and give them no control over their own lives. This causes minors to descent in their fantasy worlds as it's the only place where they are in control, resulting in a vicious circle; the more helpless the seem, the less control they are given and the more they go in their own world, which causes them to seem more helpless in the real world and be given even less control.
The latest chapter pretty much proved Izzellah's theory: minors don't need bonds MAJORS do! Contrary to what the arrogant, and appearantly ignorant, MAJORS believe! In fact, MAJORS need it so much that they even evolved to force minors into bonding with them with the Tier 3. The minors are essentially the only people who can keep the aggressive MAJORS in check.
If I had to guess then I'd say that this aggression is a result of their superior height, strength, and intelligence being a double-edged sword; the human body wasn't meant to grow so big, their brains have to be under a lot of presure trying to regulate it.
The only reason why minors even need to bond with MAJORS is to get around a world not made for them and defend themselves from other MAJORS, which once again proves their hypocricy; MAJORS aren't the solution! Their the cause!
Now, I want to write down what I think about their thinking process. With the revelation that cars were invented by minors, I have come to believe that a MAJOR'S way of thinking is very linear and lacks in imagination and the ability to innovate. In fact, Sabrina's confusion at how Izzellah handled math causes their thinking process to seem almost machine-like to me!
I wonder what effects this all had on society. The story seems to take place in a dystopian future yet the technology seems the same as early 21st century. This means that the MAJORS couldn't invent new technologies or could only improve on what the minors had already made. Sooner or later this will cause society to stagnate, if it hasn't already.
After thinking about all this, I now can't help but think of the MAJORS as a, well... doomed species. With their violent and arrogant tendencies as well as their youner generation taking minors for granted, I can totally see a day coming where they will end up destroying themselves.
(Hope to get a responce!)
Well..............let's see what hoping gets you:
I don't think EVERYONE hates the MAJORS. I don't for what that matters. (not much). I think a few people are very vocal about it! There is a lot not to like though. I personally see it as a "superior" society trying to fix a mistake. Alternative point of view is they're manipulating and oppressing subclass of their own species they nearly wiped out themselves. Valid perspective.
Minors don't need bonds. I think I've made that clear now. Is that clear? (Seriously if people are confused PLEASE TELL ME!) I would argue that MAJORS don't need them so much as they WANT them but that's a matter of opinion at this point. I only write the story. When people read it, it takes on a life of it's own. I've read many theories on it now and none of them are completely wrong. Unless someone guesses MAJORS are robots. That would be wrong.....unless?...No! I just barely dodged jumping the shark this last chapter. They're not robots. Tier 3's do throw a dramatic wrinkle in the equation.
Ummmm. There was other stuff here and I'll try to remember it but I lost it again. I really hate this whole timing out thing. I'll need to be briefer or start typing these out on a notepad first. DAMMIT!!!
Okay so necessity is the mother of invention. Minors need more than MAJORS!
I like your justification for MAJOR aggression.
I don't think MAJORS would destroy themselves because that's depressing even though they probably would!
Some bullshit tease about the Dark Age (I am working on it)
Great comment. The End!
FUCK! I hate this comment system!
A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.
So, Lindsey is growing into a Cyclopean huh...
Just how big is she gonna get?
Bigger than Shannon!?
Any chance for another crossover set after her growth is done, where Sabrina finds Lindsey has become to her what Shannon is to Izzellah
Sorry for the super-long delay !
So far, I don't have plan for a new crossover or a time jump, even if there is a new short stories (9 chapters I think) that I wrote already which end Alejandro and Shannon's story with us. I may post it someday !
Living in a New World
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I think I can see where this is going:
The baby will have been affected by the growth formula and end up growing into a giantess either when she's around six or immediately after she is born, with some rapid aging as well.
Maybe she will be bigger than Alphas too.
Follow the married lives of Galadriel, a 25 meters tall Small and her husband Tristan as three new little - and littler - ones join their family. It'll mostly be vignettes in the lives of those five characters over the years, from the night of those birth to their discoveries of adult lives, and all the sexy times in between ! Also, some hints of what Gigantopia truly is, of course.
Just to be clear, the kids won't be involved into those until they are teenagers/adults, thank you very much.
Honestly, I was expecting more from this story...
The early chapters seemed to imply that the daughter was going to grow up to become a higher class of giantess, but that never happened.
Also, disappointed that we never got the children's POV.
Yeah, it was meant to be way longer, initially i wanted to shift the focus on the children and all (but didn't want to do it nwhile they were children, of course, for hopefully obvious reasons), connecting the story more to Dark Side... but I just hadn't the inspiration and since I still wanted to have some closure for this story, welp, I felt I had to finish it. Who knows, I may reopen it once the other two stories I have ongoing will be finished (and those I intend to see to their planned conclusion !). But I honestly felt terrible just leaving that one hanging.
For the record, the kids would remain Smalls however, but it wouldn't have changed size dynamics between the twins (+ Drago)
Theo took the scholarship no questions asked... but he didn't read the fine print when it came to roommates.
Will you please return to writing this story!
It's just really starting to get going!
Personally, I'm really looking forward to Roxanne's official introduction.
Everything we have already learned about her and the world's lore has led me to believe that she will be ever bigger than when Camilla last saw her by the time they meet again, having hit her second growth spurt while visiting her family.
I'm glad that Chapter 7 is finally out!
However, I must say that I was expecting something more for the long wait.
You got a point. I had a lot of stuff going on, meant to post this one like two months ago. I got more, expect more this month.
With everything we know about her now, I would like to present my theory on Roxanne:
I think Roxanne is a former nerd, explaining why she's already in college, and got bullied due to being short, with Diane perhaps being one of the said bullies, only for her to end up outgrowing and turning the tables on her tormentors.
However, as a result, she has now become something of a bully herself by floundering her size and teasing others for being "small" compared to her, causing her to end up teasing Theo for being "tiny".
Personally, the more I learn about Roxanne, the more I get excited about her debut!
I also hope that, when she finally appears, she will end up being even bigger than what Camille and Gen remember, having hit her second growth spurt while away!
(Hope this gets a response!)
"'Big. Girls. Get. Bigger.'"
Didn't think that learning what 'BGGB' stood for would be so satisfying.
Several interesting things were revealed toward the end of this chapter.
Now, with only two days left before the start of the semester, I can sense Roxanne's official introduction coming in the next chapter or the one after that. As I mentioned in point 4, It's pretty obvious that Roxanne is a human-Atlesian hybrid, which will no doubt have major ramifications for her character. I'm still sticking with my theory that Roxanne used to be teased for being (relatively) small, only to end up outgrowing her bullies. However, this revelation can potentially give even more dimensions to her, like: she hates humans because her human parent abandoned her, which she will take out on Theo.
I'm also still hoping that, when Roxanne returns to college, she will be even bigger than what Camille and Gen remember, having entered her second growth spurt.
Finally, with this chapter ending on such a line, "Big. Girls. Get. Bigger", I hope the story's pacing will start picking up when classes finally start, cause I want to see these big girls get even bigger!
(I hope this gets a response from the author!)
You nailed several points… one thing I would say is, I feel like despite their huge size, Atlasian males would be slightly less aggressive or decisive than men from the core… just as Atlasian women would be at times overconfident or self absorbed. That’s what I was thinking when I wrote that they didn’t seem “all there.”
I think there are small quirks to the Atlasian culture that would cause them to be misread by others, based on their unique sets of issues. One thing I thought about… if every generation of females is bigger than the last, there has to be some concern about resources, mating, or other issues for the future. They certainly thought the size would level off generations ago, but it’s done anything but that. The size gap is becoming more problematic every year.
So...
This chapter finally officially introduces us to Roxanne!
What do you think of my theories and predictions Mr. dzlkidd?
Please leave a response!
Your theory is way too accurate for my comfort.
I feared building her up too much, but I went with it….
what didn’t make it into this chapter was an introduction to a nemesis of sorts, someone who was much bigger than Roxanne, being a full grown graduate still on the surface. I was doing that to take the heat off, but changed my mind.
the Next chapter is being reworked…. Where you’ll get to see more of the quirkiness that has made her somewhat infamous.
Would you please return to writing this series!?
I really want this story to continue!
Audrey lived in a minor Reserve all her life. She's never seen a MAJOR and doesn't want to leave her home... and yet she craves to see the world beyond its borders. When she's selected to become a Border guard, with a partner she hadn't expected, her life is changed forever.
I really like the pairing here:
A minor girl who has never met a MAJOR before meets not just any MAJOR but a CYCLO.
Also, Megan being so adamant about withholding Audrey from the outside world makes me wonder just how much has changed in the last, I guess, 100 years it took for this reservation to be set up.
With Megan calling normal MAJORs "small" (even if it's from her perspective), maybe the number of CYCLOs has increased and it's now normal to see them walking around. In addition, I have this personal headcanon about a whole new subsect of MAJORs called "GIGANTs" who have evolved in this period and are at least twice as big as CYCLOs!
A fanfiction derived from the manga/anime series "Witchcraft Works," in which the statuesque Ayaka Kagari mysteriously begins to enlarge over time and her classmate/housemate/love interest Honoka Takamiya tries to figure out how and why it is happening. Oddly enough, Ayaka seems to act like nothing is out of the ordinary as she slowly becomes bigger, taller, and more ravishingly beautiful. Though she does appear to be increasingly bewitching and more forward when it comes to romantically pursuing Honoka over time. Takes place after the events of the anime, post-Weekend arc for those who have read/watched the series.
I'll give some character backgrounds in the start for those not familiar with Witchcraft Works, but for more details, either consult Wikipedia or the Witchcraft Works wiki on fandom.com.
Alright!
I was wrong about my theory that reality would change to where everyone, save for Takamiya, would think that Kagari was always THIS tall.
However, I do like the idea of her magic power increasing with her height!
With her mother growing as well, I now hope that Kagari will overtake her at some point.
Or even better: due to Kagari embracing her growth and her mother rejecting it, the other half of the sealed power transfers itself into Kagari, causing her to grow even more while her mother shrinks back to normal; if not shorter.
As a result, Kagari's mother steadily loses control of her daughter as she is increasingly utterly outmatched in size, strength, and magic power.
Interesting theory. I don't want to spoil it for you by giving away what I have in mind for Ayaka's mother in the midst of all this, so I guess we'll find out what you think about it once I post the next few chapters.
Yes!
The ending was certainly amusing!
I now wonder whether Kasumi will end up SURPASSING Ayaka and her mother in height!?
It would certainly be interesting if the two reignited their love rivalry over Honoka now!
Glad you enjoyed it.
Interesting theory you've propositioned. Dunno if you'll find what I have in mind to be amusing or not, but I guess we'll find out either way. Thanks for the review.
Let me guess
With this chapter devoting a whole section to it, I'm pretty sure that Kagari's mother's half of the seal will not hold, causing all of Evermillion's magic power to go into Kagari alone and turn her into a goddess-like being while her mother shrinks back to normal.
Kagari then uses memory-altering magic to make all of humanity believe she was ALWAYS like THIS, causing everyone to worship her in a similar way her classmates do now.
Personally, part of me still hopes to see a scenario where Kagari's mother tries to scold her daughter only to have the tables turned on her as she finds herself hopelessly outmatched by Kagari in turns of size, strength, and magic power.
I'm amused by how you think this story may or may not play out, though I fear I'm probably going to disappoint you in the long run. I already have a set path (more or less) for how things will work out regarding Ayaka's (and Kazane's) stewardship of Evermillion's power, and I honestly don't intend to diverge from what I have in mind. If you're looking for a brawl or clash of wills between Ayaka and Kazane, I'm afraid to say that's not what I have in mind, so apologies in advance if that becomes a major turn-off for you regarding this story. Still, I appreciate that the chapter intrigued you enough to post a review.
Sooo...
Kagari does notice her growth, in a way. She just does not seem to care.
The only question now is: how will other characters react to her growth?
Personally, I still think that, other than Takamiya, no one will really take notice of Kagari's abnormal growth and come to revere her more and more as she gets taller.
I also still hope that Kagari's mother will not take notice of anything being wrong (since I do not want her to throw a wrench into things).
Personally, I hope that, as Kagari grows, her relationship with her mother will begin to change, with Kagari slowly becoming the dominant one while her mother increasingly becomes uncharacteristically intimidated and submissive toward her.
I hope you don't end up hating this story, given that you're interested/invested enough in it to post these reviews. I say that in advance because chances are good that I'll have plot events and characters reactions that you may very well take issue with. Regarding how other characters react to Ayaka's growth, it'll be something of a mixed bag (given that I don't want to give plot points away and that it'll take forever to list how each character may react).
As for how things go between Ayaka and her mother, it's not going to be exactly as you're hoping for, but probably not the exact opposite either. Being that they're both witches, Ayaka's mom is practically guaranteed to notice her "not-so-little" girl growing up, and there's likely to be some amount of clashing between the two of them (more figurative than literal, so to speak). I have a general idea of how things will pan out between them; whether you'll like it or not, I I honestly cannot say. Hope that doesn't bum you out too much.
Let me guess!
Except for Takamiya, no one will notice Kagari's growth and think she has ALWAYS been this tall, even Kagari herself.
Also, with how uncharacteristically obedient Takamiya's sister was toward her, I'm guessing that, as Kagari grows, others will come to revere her, even those who normally don't.
I'm most excited to see the new Kagari interact with her mother!
Personally, I would have her grow A LOT more before introducing her mother! However, when she finally does appear, I would have her not notice her daughter's growth just like everybody else and actually have her become uncharacteristically intimidated by Kagari.
Interesting theory on where you think the story is headed. Given that I don't want to spoil the surprise, I'm obviously neither going to confirm nor deny your guesses. I do hope that you're amused by what I have intended between Ayaka and her mother.
A revolutionary height transfer technology gives Paul hope that he can shed his gangly, lanky frame. However, when he meets the recipient for his height things begin to get complicated.
Is she more than meets the eye?
I like it!
I hope you make more and that this does not just become yet another few chapters that never get a follow-up.
I fully intend for this to have a conclusion! This story will probably be a little shorter than my other one, but I already have an end in mind! Although, I will have to fill in the middle a bit 🤔
Let me guess
Paul's developing GTS fetish for Ae Ri will cause him to give even more height to her during the intended final transfer.
Afterward, the scientists will try to fix it by transferring some of Ae Ri's height to Paul. However, again due to Paul's fetish, along with Ae Ri not wanting to shrink, Paul ends up shrinking even more each time instead!
Not at all 😅
Okay, I'll take another guess
Either Ae Ri will seduce the doctors into giving her more of Paul's height than he promised or the man will have some sort of physical condition to where height just begins leaking out of him.
Regardless, the doctors will attempt to fix the issue only to make things worse (or it's just a cover to give Ae Ri more of Paul's height)!
I almost responded to this with a spoiler, haha.
I can't say why but so far you're not correct. If you want details feel free to DM me and I can tell you why and elude to spoilers!
