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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1103423
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: March 03 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Front Lines

Between when they took off down the hole and the end of this chapter, I was actually feeling a little sorry for Julia. The level of betrayal she must be feeling at our hero's sudden escape must be off the charts. This is one situation where I felt some annoyance at the first person perspective of the story. I want to know what happened with her right after they escaped.



Author's Response:

Probably an accurate guess about Julia's feelings. It's fair to want to know what she was up to right after they ran, though the trade-off here is that the three (and readers) can't even know what kind of state the girl is truly as they get ready to escape. Some of that will be revealed in later chapters.

The Arte by L2K7 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

This story is a Shrunken Woman story about a Sorceress.  This Sorceress gets shrunk by her own magic and finds that she is unable to reverse the spell.  She eventually meets a young girl and the two begin to bond.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83430 Read Count: 352865
[Report This] Published: January 15 2012 Updated: September 12 2012
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

It's a shame this story was never finished.

A World of Breasts and Buttocks by ltltb Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

A college women's gymnastics team and the coach are hit hard by the desires arising from the Rebalancing of Sexes. It's made worse when their boyfriends and husband are kidnapped by a rival team, forcing them to grab the last male on campus to meet their needs.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Rebalancing the Sexes
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41351 Read Count: 240932
[Report This] Published: October 23 2012 Updated: August 12 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: August 26 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 22

And out of nowhere, a new chapter.

Bonaparte Session by edexdexx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Leala Bonaparte takes it upon herself to teach a select group of students a lesson they will never forget . .or perhaps never live.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 61011
[Report This] Published: January 22 2013 Updated: April 07 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Anderson

Gotta say that from the beginning I've been anticipating her reaction when she realizes that she accidently brought an innocent person in on this revenge of hers. I can't wait to see what she does in that situation.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: March 28 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Meridith

And now comes the part where she realizes that she accidently brought an innocent bystander into this chaos.

Birthday Wishes by The Lurkmeister Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

What happens when a girl makes the same birthday wish every year?  AND she doesn't tell anyone?

 

Why, it comes true, of course!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64345 Read Count: 313332
[Report This] Published: May 07 2013 Updated: July 23 2018
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Certainly hope you plan to continue this one. I really enjoy it.



Author's Response: Been too busy lately to write, but I hope you enjoy the newest chapter. :-) Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Glad to see a new chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks! Nice to know someone is reading. :-)

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: February 19 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Would love to see more of this one. Had great premise and left off on such a cliffhanger.



Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! I have another chapter mostly ready to go but it's just not gelling the way I'd like it to, and I've finally come up with a way to finish up this three chapter arc. All I need now is some time to write. :-) But knowing there are people out there waiting does mean a lot. I'll do my best to get some more out to you. Thanks again!

Snapped by MrSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A peek into the life of a shrunken slave girl. 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6340 Read Count: 33204
[Report This] Published: August 03 2013 Updated: January 12 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meet Milly

Plan on coming back to this story eventually? I find it to be most enjoyable.



Author's Response:

It's not dead just neglected. Blame this stories bratty attention seeking kid sister "Tales of the New World." Don't fear Tales is close to over then Trials and Snapped get the attention they deserve. They might even be better!

There is no I in Toy by ltltb Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:



An 18-year-old finds himself reduced in size by the Rebalancing of Sexes when his mother gives him to a 40-year-old neighbor. Even more challenging, he has to prove himself to her toys, which see him as just another member of the team. Read "Rebalancing the Sexes" and other stories in the series to get an idea what's going on when the protagonist shrinks. NOTE: Some editing to earlier chapters to add detail and clear up Mike's ambiguity about his situation. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Rebalancing the Sexes
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23290 Read Count: 155481
[Report This] Published: October 13 2013 Updated: April 15 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: March 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wondered how long it was going to take her to realize who those belonged to...

Not the sharpest tool in the shed, eh?



Author's Response:

Ehh... at first she thought it was a dream... until she woke up and smelled the honey. 

Sushi in America by Casanova Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Chuxi Zhao (pronounced "choo-shee") is a Chinese scholar studying for a graduate degree in America when he suddenly shrinks in the library.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22510 Read Count: 94093
[Report This] Published: December 28 2013 Updated: September 01 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm hesitant to feel sympathy for her. She's been putting him through some horrible experiences.



Author's Response:

I definitely agree with you there, but Chuxi seems to be more magnanimous than you or I! Then again, I would probably relish the opportunity to switch places with our little protagonist (pervert that I am).

You also should write a story so that I can review it haha. (Looks like my offer isn't much of an incentive if nobody reviewing has their own stories; maybe authors on this site tend not to review others' work?)

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I will give him this: He was smart enough to not just wander over to her room to talk to her. Most stories the main character is just an idiot with wanderlust.

"Stay here where you're safe."

"I'M GONNA WANDER OFF LOL! OH NO I'VE BEEN CAPTURED!"



Author's Response:

I decided early on that Chuxi would have an IQ two standard deviations above the mean. That doesn't mean that he can't be an idiot though!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That would certainly explain why she's been abusing him. She was desperately looking for some way to regain control in her life, and this miniature man just kind of falls into her lap, helpless and at her mercy. She controls him by taking out her frustration and anger on him, and in a way she's giving control of her own life back to herself. Only now does she start to realize what she's been doing, and what she nearly lost by doing it.



Author's Response:

That's pretty much it; I just hope that it's believable. 

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's nice to see reconciliation. I've never been a fan of the "cruel for no reason" or "drunk on power" concepts that float around. "Drunk on power" is just lazy writing, IMO.

That's why I'm glad to see this kind of character development.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Jimbob. While I was actively trying to avoid it in this case, I'm definitely guilty of using the "drunk on power" trope that runs rampant in our fetish. Sure you could argue that it's lazy writing, but, y'know, it's sexy as hell! (And kind of the whole point, haha.)

In any case, I'm glad you appreciated the character development. I wasn't sure if I was too heavy-handed with it (or maybe not heavy-handed enough), but certainly the process of trying to think things through helped me improve as a writer overall. With the finish line in sight, I also think that this might be one of the few stories I've ever actually saw to the finish, so I'm happy about that as well. Thanks for feedback, and also for sticking with me!

The Sin of Pride by Hollow Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

After perfecting his life's dream, an actual shrink ray, Jake can't wait to show it off! However he unknowingly makes the mistake of inviting his mother, sister, and aunt, and girlfriend to his private cabin in the hopes of surprising them with the device they all said could never be built. He arrives earlier than stated (hence the surprise),only to accidentally shrink himself. And his invited guests won't expect him for another week. Will he survive? 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Watersports, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8834 Read Count: 121880
[Report This] Published: January 02 2014 Updated: May 22 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hey a new chapter. Glad to see you didn't abandon this, like what often happens to stories around here.

Omega: Consequences by Ackbar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 303]
Summary:

Three girls must face the consequences of their actions after they assault a member of a smaller race.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94864 Read Count: 291919
[Report This] Published: January 10 2014 Updated: July 03 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Sisters - Part 6

That was the most amazing arc of character development I've ever read. Absolutely amazing and heartwrenching at the same time.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

I was almost expecting Stephanie's facade to finally crack here. It's so close now...

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: June 23 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Meeting

I find myself hoping that Naomi and Jenna become friends. It's kind of a far-flung hope, but it just seems kind of like there might be something there.



Author's Response:

It's certainly not an idea I'd dismiss out of hand. Thanks for commenting!

Back to the Universe by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Nick and Sam go to visit Jasmine, but something is wrong… things seem different.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Mature (40-49), Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72036 Read Count: 228234
[Report This] Published: January 18 2014 Updated: June 27 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Think Jasmine realizes that the daycare she leaves her daughter at serves up buggies as snacks? I'd think she'd be a little upset at that fact.

Scandium Trifluoride by OneDayFirefly Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A woman shrinks men to torture and devour them whole. There's no stopping this femme fatale, or is there? 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2001 Read Count: 5763
[Report This] Published: February 04 2014 Updated: February 04 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Whatever happened to this one? This initial chapter was fantastic.

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