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Precious Little Demons by Sterben Klein, Franchise Writer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.

Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.

 


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196299 Read Count: 217095
[Report This] Published: February 22 2016 Updated: March 16 2017
Reviewer: Hyperian Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2017 Title: Chapter 19: What We'll Do...

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You know what, now's as good a time as any to say this. So I'll retire from 4 years of lurking and just come out and say it.

This is my absolute favorite story I've read on this site.

It's not in competition for the most sexually pleasurable, inventive shrinking scenario, or polished story (and I mean that in the best possible way; your talent is abundantly clear, and with a bit more attention to grammatical errors and sentence structure, your story could match the technical level of polish of some of the site's greatest classics). But regardless of all of those, it's still the best story I've read throughout my stay on the site, for one simple reason.

This story is positively emotionally charged. Every chapter I read strikes me so deeply on the inside, filling me with genuine warmth or sadness depending on its content. Even the sentences that are a tad confusing bleed a strong sense of emotion through them, and it's abundantly clear just how much thought you've put into developing them. I can't remember the last time I've felt so much for fictional characters as I have for Claire and the twins, and their plight has developed them into becoming so inspiring, likable, and, above all, human. Ironically, you've done a masterful job at making two superhuman, omniscient girls extremely understandable and natural, something I never would have believed was possible prior to reading this.

So, I wanted to say thanks. Thanks for writing a story warmer and more uplifting than almost any I've ever seen. Thanks for inspiring me to look within myself and try to be a genuinely better person, and a responsible, thoughtful adult as well. And thanks for convincing me to finally write a review on this site, because I'm always elated to see a new chapter on the Most Recent page.

I'll stop gushing now. But I just wanted to let you know how much reading Precious Little Demons has meant to me, and I sincerely look forward to reading all future chapters. You have a work of art here.

Author's Response:

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I, I don't honestly know how to respond to this...

You've put so much thought into this review, and your words... i'm honestly tearing up. T^T

It brings me great joy, and pride to know I can make you emotive and stir your feelings like this. Thats all i've ever wanted when i made this story. And i'm hoping i'll be able to keep those feelings going till the final words are written, and the story reaches its climax, as sad as that will be for me.

Saying thank you in return might not seem like much, i say it to everyone who reviews for me, but i mean it none the less each time i say it. When someone takes their precious time to tell me what they think, and give me that time, it makes me feel revered by them. So i'll say it again, Thank you. Thank you so much for telling me this. This, is one of the most sincere responce's i've ever gotten from this site, and it's really struck a cord in me.

I'm happy to be writing here, because it's people like you, who make me proud to be a member of this community.

Thank you, Hyperian.

Pay it forward by Sterben Klein, Franchise Writer Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

When someone does something nice for you, you return the kindness. Orphened and raised by her villages local Doctor, Abby struggles to do just that when she winds up in a circumstance she never thought possible. Faced directly with her fears, she now has to try and help the very ones she hates the most...

Monsters...

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 341499 Read Count: 225745
[Report This] Published: October 31 2016 Updated: April 10 2021
Reviewer: Hyperian Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

First of all, just wanted to say my sincere congratulations on finishing PLD with such an uplifting ending; it was such a pleasure reading and enjoying each chapter as it released! Moreover, I'm very impressed at your enthusiasm for writing and ability to quickly jump to a new story so soon after the end of the first one. I have a few potential story ideas for the site I have been brewing in my mind for a while now, but I don't have confidence in my ability to keep writing chapters in a reasonable time, especially since I have a fanfiction currently on the back burner that I haven't updated since 2013... yeesh! So, I can't express how happy I am to see you're showing no signs of stopping any time soon!

As for the story, I'm certainly intrigued at this point. I am a big fan of monster girl media (especially Monster Girl Quest, one of my favorite games of all time), so I'm very much looking forward to seeing what kind of society these monsters have built up and what their histories are. It probably goes without saying, but Abby is so far a much less sympathetic protagonist than Claire, even if most of that seems to come from the obvious societal influences and upbringing rather than any personal behavior on her part. But I'll be looking forward to seeing how her experiences with the monsters might change that for the better (or worse? Who knows? haha), and how the monsters will begin to change their respective views toward humans.
Lastly, just wanted to commend you on your technical quality of writing, which seems to continue to improve with each chapter. It's gotten to the point where there are very few noticeable errors or typos, and virtually none that seriously impede the flow of reading. So, on that front, well done!

Looking forward to what's coming up next!

P.S.: Definitely wouldn't mind seeing a gallery of the inspiration artworks for PLD if you still have access to those as well.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your words Hyperian. I'm glad my stories are having an impact on you like they are. :D

If you want to write for this site, i'd definitely say give it a try. It's really impacted my life. But, i do get where you're coming from with the whole time frame thing. I was worried about that to, which is why a lot of my earlier chapters were spaced a month or more at a time. Something i would recommend though is, if you need help with planning, or writing, give Franchise Writer a message. He's told me to tell that to people who mention it. XD

Thanks to him, he's really helped me improve on my work, :)

I'm pretty sure he does Fanfictions to as well... but i'm not sure on that one.

As for Abby being different then Claire, i did that intentinally. As much as i love Claire's altruism, i don't want all my stories to just have the MC being like that. It would be repetitive and unrealistic... well, more so in stories that involve people in situations such as these. But yeah, each of the characters aren't going to be carbon copies of other characters. I like when mine stand out from others and that includes past characters i've already written.

All i can really say is expect Abby to have a profound impact on the characters and to them on her as well. Things may seem black and white for now, but that will be changing as time goes on.

Thank you again for leaving me such a detailed review. I hope F.W. can help you if you do message him. I'm looking foward to any stories you write. :D

 

P.S.

I also love Monster girl Quest~ xP

 

Reviewer: Hyperian Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2017 Title: Chapter 4: A Deal With The Devil...

A (quality) double chapter release in just 2 days?! I'm starting to wonder if YOU'RE a monster too! xD

Apologies if my previous comment about Abby's characterization seemed generalizing; I was certainly not trying to suggest she's just a less sympathetic Claire! Now that she's calmed down and isn't screaming at the mere sight of monsters, I'm really enjoying the dynamic she shows for her new "companions." The medical scene with Kari was a perfect example of that; Abby's struggle of maintaining her Hippocratic oath and wiping away the tears of the child clashes wonderfully with the disdain she holds for all monsters and their deeds. Love the internal conflict, and I'm very interested to see where it'll take us next. Wouldn't be terribly surprised if Abby nurses Najia back to full health and then, upon regaining her size (if Kari is able to pull through with the request), leads a witch hunt against the "monsters." Not out of any particular malice, just because it's what people do. And it's a lot easier to hunt a creature down when she doesn't look like an adorable child before your eyes! :p But of course, I could be wildly off-base with that... just a thought!

Thanks for the writing suggestion! I could definitely stand to have another set of eyes take a look at some of my ideas and let me know if they're worth expanding into actual stories or not. As for your experiences, did Franchise Writer provide guidance on particularly developing the basic ideas, characters, and themes of PLD into the full story, or was his advice geared more toward plot details, pacing, etc.?

Anyway, I greatly look forward to the next chapter. And as for you right now, get to bed already! xD Pull too many all-nighters, and it won't be just Najia who needs those echanasea and dandelion extracts!

Author's Response:

No need to aplogize, i take no offence to you finding diference or similarities in characters. There their own characters after all. :P

I'm glad to see you're getting into it. :D

I'll try to update soon, but it might be a couple days lol. I'm pretty tired.As for whats to come you're just going to have to read and find out. ;)

On reguards to Franchise Writer's help, he kind of helped with everything. "Rubs back of head sheepishly" After reading some... or, most all of his stories except some stuff i didn't know about i noticed he mentioned on his bio that he helps people with writing so i just messaged him, and it all took off from there. The idea i had in mind was kind of odd but he honestly didn't act weird when i mentioned what I wanted my story to be about. So, I wrote the first three chapters with his guidance and posted them but about midway into the fourth he really got involved and made me think more on my own story. He's helped me with plot, characters, funny scenes, grammer. He's been like a fun teacher I guess i should say. :P

I hope I didn't rant, I just really appreciate his help and all.

 

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