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Tom's Story by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1033]
Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2405302
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2017 Title: Chapter 131: Nocturnal Emissions

Chapt 131 Nocturnal Emissions

"so caught up in Janine he had forgotten Tess was still there" Kinda sums up how Tom was.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 07 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Back at the School

Okay, 

This sort of feels like a  sitcom called "my idiot shrunken brother"

A sit com that would win an emmy, the dialogue is chrisp and witty.

I almost feel sorry for Janine, sitting all alone.  I wonder what she'll be really like.

Tess seems like she's the smart one, but I think she needs to learn how to say no and mean it, because Tom ....he's gonna get into trouble. 

Peace

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 07 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Janine

Holy shit!  Tom is such a little dick! (How do you spell double entandre?)

And Janine is a psycho! 

They kinda deserve each other. 

All Tom really has going for him is he's Tess' brother.  I really don't want Tess to feel responsible when the little dill weed gets his ass in trouble.

You really are creating an essential shrinking man story here.  Great dialogue and charcters that are fascinating, maybe not likable...I'll see if they grow on me.

Get it "grow on me?"



Author's Response:

LOL, Tom is certainly a twerp and Janine is CRAZY! I get it, like a fungus, grow on you :)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Tess

Okay, in this story I am totally with Tess.  The thing about Tess is I don’t really see her as an enabler.  I think at this moment, that’s how she sees herself, but that’s not really her motivation.  I think she sees here action through the eyes of their consequences.  She seems more motivated by sympathy (though she wouldn’t admit it) and as providing a pressure release for Tom, who seems to be a disaster waiting to happen.

She was probably feeling warned about this by his behavior during incest tease scenes.  And sees him as having a need to have things “his way” since he has so little control over his situation.

There’s a lot of chapters to go, we’ll see if I’m reading her right.

BTW...his favorite band is Injustice?  A band called Injustice?  In your stories?  HA!  Is one of their songs “Little Man Say’s That’s Not Fair?”  That is too perfect.

I do like how this chapter deals with real emotional fallout from Tom’s fantasy.  Great work.

The grandpa mystery really has me.  I gotta know!  I gotta know!

Peace, and thanks.

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Hi pixl8ed,

 

Tess will continue to be, for want of a better phrase, the 'tragic' figure in this tale. i realize you're still wrestling with early chapter and much has transpired in teh year plus this story has been unfolding. As for Injustice, it was a fictitious band created for my story Fan Girls, where the band gets shrunk. there will be twists and turns and explorations aplenty yet to come. :)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Misdirection

So the Janine, Tess, Sam lesbian orgy is off?  Damn...I mean "Don't do it Tess, stay away from that toxic bitch."

Ya know, I felt sorry for her when we first saw her, but now I know why Janine was sitting alone.  She's really in touch with her inner psycho cunt.

The insertion really works as a metaphor, cuz Tom's really getting to see how ugly she is on the inside.

Tess gave up and left the house a little too easy in my opinion, but what can you do.  (besides knife the bitch and check her panties)

Lina is a great character.  And it's great to see someone who makes Tom feel good, maybe even enjoy his perdicament.

And Tom...is that responsibility I hear...accepting that he caused his situation.  Holy shit...I never would have seen that coming.  Now if he could manage to imagine that Tess might be worried and maybe let her know he's still alive...then maybe he start to be less of a little dick.

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Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Janine

Damn!  Saw that coming.

Boy, smart, rich.beautiful, psychopathic...what more could a boy want?

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Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Hand Off

And now Tess is going to tell Tom like it is. 

And Tom will take her words to heart and actually be a participant in his own fucking survival.

And if you believe that....

I really like how Lina can be so dominant but so sweet at the same time...a well crafted character.  Amazing work.

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Date: March 08 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Tess

Uh huh...good girls like dumb boys.

That little fucker is gonna get (or be gotten by) every girl in this story. 

Sam is naughty...I like her.

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Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 40: The Enchanted Forest

Chapter 40 The Enchanted Forest.

Wait, fairy figures...in her sex chamber?  She seems to like Tom's size, but not his charm....hmmm.  Miss Addison is...is...an SW fan.

Oh my god.  You're using this incredible story to make us SW fans look...look... well, pretty damn good compared to Janine. 

Did I get some hint that Tom might be considering Tess' feelings...will wonders never cease.

I find it kind of cute how these women try to humiliate Tom and he just doesn't get it.  He's like "you got the pussy, so I'll do what you want."  Or if denied a choice he just looks at it through the filter of "I liked that" or "I didn't like that"

Great read so far.

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Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Alpha

See, SW fans agree.  "Evil Cunt."

I gotta say, as much as I hate her, Janine's plan was brilliant.  She seems to have a firm grasp of "the system."

If she could turn that insight on herself she'd probaly shudder.

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Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Backdoor Man

Chapter 47 Backdoor Man.

You know, life has been nothing but kind to this litle bitch.  She's had beauty, wealth, security all handed to her on a silver platter.  So when life hands her someone completely at her mercy she treats them, litterally, like shit.

What's not to love?

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Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Lazarus

Chapter 50, Lazarus.

Okay, I like Tom enough that it's not worth it to see the bitch choke...but only barely...and only because it would hurt Tess.

So there.

Actually it's good to see Tom actively trying to escape.  Making him a more active character really adds to the story.

 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 53: 911

Chapter 53, 911

Okay, car accident got my hopes up, but the bitch skates again.  I dunno, a nice facial scar might add character...maybe some missing limbs.

WTF happened to Tom...probably some sexy nurse or doctor has him in heaven right now.

Poor Tess...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Search

Chpt 55. Search.

Not for ONE SECOND do I buy it.  She's faking it.  She's faked being a human being her whole life, she can fake contrition.  Or it's the drugs.  She's probably just sorry she lost her "toy."

If Tess got to really give it to...Kidnapper! Slut! Abuser! Liar!  Every word hitting her like a hammer blow.  I might see something in her reaction.   But Tess, (best human being on earth) is too busy thinking of her brother ( and it's not his fault this time)  and trying to solve the problem.  Wow. Way to go.  You are the real hero of this story.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed
Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Tom

Wait, what?

Tom is actually being considerate?  Of Tess' feelings? Wow dude!  Good on ya!

But dude, there's something really wrong with you if you take one nanosecond thinking about Janine's well being.  Consider her reaction during the accident the definition of and the best way to end your relationship: "her goodbye piss." 

Really dude, grow some self respect.

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Date: March 11 2017 Title: Chapter 132: The New Pet Rock

Chpt 132. The New Pet Rock

I kinda gotta wonder, how many of those girls are imagining a tiny girl in there?

Give your little doll tits and long hair and you're good to go.

I bet Miss Addison did, only her's have wings.

Just sayin'.

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Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 104: Tess

Chpt 104. Tess

Alright Tess!

She's standing up for herself.  She's done being an emotional punching bag.  Good on her!  She has bourn the brunt of everybody else's craziness and she's done.  I say good!

And she seems to be inspiring the nutty women around her to see Tom as a human being. (I'm not sure in Lina's case.)  Good going girl!

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Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 106: Four's a Crowd

106. Four's a crowd

Ya know, it's Tess who's right here.

Tom don't have the sense god gave a worm.  He's been in danger, not emotional, and what saved him was luck a big part of the time.  Miss Harwood may be able to master the art of hyper-rationalization but the truth is; if Tom winds up killed or cripple or something worse, a lot of them are going to have their own "Janine moment."  Tess most of all...she's invested the most in keeping him safe.  She gets to spend the rest of her life thinking she failed her little brother.

So, no.  Miss Harwood can preach her "erotic existencialism as an excuse for objectification" till the cows come home, but there could be real consequences.   And none of them are prepared to live with it. 

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Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 116: Thursday Night - Heavy Petting

Tess and Janine having "good girl sex."  I don't know what to say to that.

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Date: March 10 2017 Title: Chapter 102: Lina

102. Lina.

Ya gotta admit...when your own mother is suspicious of your tears...you've been a cunt.

Good luck Janine.

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