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Tom's Story by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1033]
Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2405183
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2017 Title: Chapter 161: Family Affair

Holy hell!

Even the aunt can't resist....what ever Tom's got, they should bottle.   I'm not saying put him in a bottle...he's been through enough. 

How can a scene be that sexy....and that wrong...with no sex?  Must be the master at work.

Great work again Duggernaut.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Lol Tom is an agent of chaos and the author of his own misadventures. Next chapter Tom will ruminate on what just happened between him and his aunt. Thanks for the props!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2017 Title: Chapter 162: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2

What was the middle part?

I have to disagree with Tom Speedy, it is very necessary to reach 1000 reviews.  Very!

I would love to see the story continue, especially in light of the hints about new directions.   When in doubt, the answer is always "more Tom's story."  And more cowbell.

If you're done, you're done.  Really, you should feel free to go as you like.  My vote is continue, but really, my vote is "be happy Duggernaut."  You've done plenty for us fans and I can't ask you to do more than makes you happy.   

My real vote is a vote of thanks. 

Peace

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Much appreciated. I am torn with tom, as with other characters from other stories, I find myself invested in the character and while I could tie this up, part of me what to keep going. "Easy, guys.. I put my pants on just like the rest of you -- one leg at a time. Except, once my pants are on, I make gold records."

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2017 Title: Chapter 163: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...

And again Tom demonstrates his resilience.... fortunately he's being held by a woman...let's see if his charm stil works under these circumstances, whatever the they are.

Great stuff Duggernaut. Mysterious giantess and mysterious situation.  Gotta love it.

Peace,

 

pixl8ed

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2017 Title: Chapter 164: Where There's Smoke

What is the nationality of the device?  And the chemical agent?  Custom?  What other incidents has it turned up in?

So the perpetrator left it behind....and didn't take the time to kick it under the bed.  That means they were in a great hurry.   Didn't have night vision and didn't want to risk getting the distinct scent on them.  Sounds like security is mostly in tact, one or two well placed traitors at best.  Since they had to pull it off with limited equipment.  It might also mean they are close, or had an unrelaible means of egress,  since they are taking steps to avoiding being trackable by dogs.

Better hope Serena is as good at this as me.

hehe.

 

Pix



Author's Response:

I modeled the device after once by the russians when they attempted to retake the theater. You do seem very adept at sleuthing which means I'll have to elevate my game. And here we go...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2017 Title: Chapter 165: Destination Unknown

Oh, man!  I love Tatiana. 

I'm guessing the innocence I love might be the problem.  At least I hope.

Good villians showing up...bond girl flavored...my favorite.

Loving this Duggernaut...just loving it.

Peace

 

Pix



Author's Response:

Should I or shouldn't I? Is Tatiana actually a cold hearted calculating b*tch destined for inclusion in the Omega Pi sorority? :0

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2017 Title: Chapter 173: Tit for Tat

Ya gotta wonder, is there some side effect to Tom Sr's gadget that makes the subject like super desirable.  Knowing Grandpa, that was probably the original intent.  Now he's just gotta find a way to make it work without the shrinking.  Or maybe not.

Alright, we've been all set up for the battle of the century: Nasty Anastasia VS. Hedy H-Bomb Smith.  Who will win and claim their tiny prize? 

Of course it might be a mistake to just view Tom as a pawn in this game.  He's gotten really good at this being tiny stuff.  Also, he know's there are some impressive reasources being brought up on his side.  He probably know's the smart move is to wait and watch and learn awhile, cuz help has got to be coming.

I kinda hope there's a nicer outcome for poor Natalya.  She at least was nice to him and looks to be a victim in all this. 

Super cool chapter Duggernaut, and a great, cheeky title by the way.  Oh,wait, I should save "cheeky" for a chapter with more butts.

Thanks,

pix




Author's Response:

Grandpa is a bit of a horn dog, so maybe he did it on purpose, or maybe tom junior just has that je ne sais quoi, either way, he is certainly an X factor.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2017 Title: Chapter 180: Epilogue

Okay, I have to admit being a little disappointed at not nabbing the 1000th review.  Good job Superfan Carycomic!

Getting over 1000 reviews is like having lines for your movie around the block.  Super hit. And this tale earned it.  Duggernaut gave us fun and despicable characters, Janine managed to be both, and compelling situations that could be knowable and exotic. 

In a sense, this is the Star Wars of size fiction.  Tapping into the primal need for simple, quality storytelling.  The complexity comes with a viewing of the piece as a whole.  Tom and Janine’s complex and strange character arcs, contrasted with Tess’ much more subtle changes.  All three becoming better versions of themselves as the story progresses.  Then sprinkling in the foils and pitfalls of the other characters along the way.  Making this a concoction that is positively heady.

I’ve always appreciated that Duggernaut appreciates his fans right back.  Having loyal, active fans that give quality feedback has got to inspire.  So those of you who gave of your time to read and review, I know, helped to give our favorite author the energy and enthusiasm to create this cornerstone piece of our favorite genre.  Even the best writers need a little encouragement,and here the relationship was mutual.  Quality storytelling lead to quality reviews lead to quality storytelling...etc.  So, great job Duggernaut and fans.  Thanks for making the scene a little more fun.

Now, I gotta say I loved the epilogue.  Tess was my favorite character and seeing her take the curtain call is super rewarding.  And she really earned it, being the voice of wisdom and reason throughout.  Even when her logic lead to trouble, she tried to steer a course that made sense.  Smart is sexy, Tess. And if there is a follow up, she’s gonna be a great central character.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Thanks Pix, you've been a great support throughout this story. If I ever find the formula on how to write another story of this magnitude, maybe you'll get the 1000th review then... hmm sounded more clever in my head.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2017 Title: Chapter 179: Back to School Blues

Oh my god!  Tom gets coated in...everything.  Across the globe.  And he calls Janine a nympho?  Why am I thinking something about a kettle and a pot?  Hahaha.

Yeah, ya gotta love the new Janine.  She’s like ginger beer...she’s sweet, but she’s got bite.

I’m pretty sure Miss Harwood and Tom are gonna flirt forever.  When he graduates they’ll be exchanging flirty e mails.  Their grandkids are gonna be flirting with each other.  The chemistry is that strong!

The scene with Miss Addison was super sweet.  I’ve always pictured her collection as ceramic or porcelain, Tom’s gift was crystal.  It will always stand out.  Always draw the eye.  Always serve as a reminder.  Always be special, and hopefully always make Miss Addison feel special. 

This is Tom showing some real poetry in his soul.

It really is wrapping up nicely Duggernaut.

 

pix



Author's Response:

Throughout the story Tom is essentially a man who're would gets bounced around from woman to woman.  Yes he will always have fond memories of high school and a special place for Miss Harwood. You are correct I too envisioned ceramic or resin cast pieces in Miss Addisons collection and I wanted to demonstrate Tom's capacity for a feeling other than horny. 

 

 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2017 Title: Chapter 178: Homecoming

Woo hoo!  Party at Janine's place!  Again!

It's really great to see these two get together fianally.  Ya gotta love love.  Super romantic and sexy...what a great scene.

Awesome payoff Duggernaut.  Worth the wait. 

 

pix



Author's Response:

After all the things that have happened in this story it harkens back to chapter one when Tom says he's fated to be with her well in her panties anyway

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2017 Title: Chapter 177: Back to Normal...

Dang!  I hope Tom hasn't joined the messed up for life club.

If dream Janine is like that, what is the real deal gonna deliver?

Good stuff Duggernaut. Thanks for sharing this.

pix

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2017 Title: Chapter 176: Back in Friendly Territory

Oh my gosh!  I can't believe how relieved I am.  Tom is restored and now we can see how he's grown as a person, yes I went there.  But really, that's what it has always been about as I've read this.  The characters have really made this piece and Tom's situation has been a fascinating catalyst for change and for revelation.  I really want to see what happens now. 

Awesome work Duggernaut.

 

pix

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17 2017 Title: Chapter 175: Snatched

Miss Smith has some style.  I like her even more now.  She has a natural bit of curiousity and Tom didn't really give her the full Tom Treatment, but she didn't dive on him like (insert hungry cat reference here.) 

Of course, story's not over yet...heh heh.

Nice stuff Duggernaut, we really get a look at Tom's level of fatigue without him really getting his victim on.  He's the Rocky of living sex toys.

Thanks Duggernaut,

pix

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2017 Title: Chapter 174: Ekaterina

Ekaterina seems genuinely sweet.  What a refeshing, surprising character.

I love body exploration, so of course I like her.  And this the real deal.  Tom's ability to look deeper at people makes for a lovely perspective of the whole encounter.  Inspite of her vast physical adavantage he is moved to tenderness and .....

Wait!  What happened?  Hey!  Oh my freakin god!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2017 Title: Chapter 170: Siberian Tiger

Well,  @pete445 no, not really.   No surprises, do dramatic character arcs, no interesting contrasts between characters, no laughs, no suspense, no cool variety in characters, no entertaining dialogue...and certainly no raunchy to sweet sex....

But,hey, in the reviews section, sometimes some smurf with nothing to contribute will show up and make snide comments...so there's that.

 



Author's Response:

Cheeky

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2017 Title: Chapter 166: New Digs

Since we are freely discussing multiple works in the same review:  This has been a great phase for tiny heroes.  First Oliver show's the 'Megs up and now Tom has an escape plan in like 10 seconds.  He's really getting good at this.

I also have to note, based on Tom's observations of her, Natalya seems to be an object of Tom's compassion.  While I have to note that it's interesting that he can feel sympathy for someone with so much potential power over him, because he's so aclimated to being his size, it also speaks volumes about him as a human being.  Maybe he is becoming a better, more compassionate  person.

Loving the mysterious phase of the story.  Thanks Duggernaut.

Peace

 

Pix



Author's Response:

More intrigue coming up...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2017 Title: Chapter 168: Fish Bowl

Hmmm...some kind of experiment?

Tom has been "used" before and come out okay.  I hope he can gain info that can help him....it's good that he knows he's being watched.  He can use that to feed them fake info.  

How did Tom go from being such a dumass to being a compelling character?

 

Great stuff Duggernaut.



Author's Response:

How's this for some.cosmic irony. For Tom to grow up he needed to be shrunk? Deep.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2017 Title: Chapter 169: Meeting a Ghost

Oh!  I like her.

Great bit of suspense building.  Hedy seems like a real intellectual juggernaut.  I really think this is a character I wouldn't like in real life, but can't take my eyes off in fiction.

Plus, I want her to save Tom.  Who knew?

You've done it again Duggernaut.

 

pix

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2017 Title: Chapter 166: New Digs

Author's Response:

Should I or shouldn't I? Is Tatiana actually a cold hearted calculating b*tch destined for inclusion in the Omega Pi sorority? :0


Reader’s Response:

You fiend!



Author's Response:

I say Fiend? Why sir, that doth happen to be my middle name   :)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2017 Title: Chapter 171: Trans-Siberian Express

Okay, this is getting strange (yeah, I know, what’s new) but where are they getting all these appointments?  Wouldn’t you imagine there would be some need for secrecy?  They’ve just committed an international kidnaping of a super rich kid, wouldn’t they be worried about that getting out?  They might be “special clients” of some sort, who can be counted on to be discreet.  But wealthy (what is the girl version of a “johns”) ...customers might be people you would only have limited leverage over.  So that looks risky. 
It could be these are all the women who financed the operation.  I don’t think so, but that is the best possibility I can come up with at the moment. 

A mystery in Tom’s story...who knew?

Great work, Duggernaut and thanks.

pix



Author's Response:

No worries, glad to continue as long it stays interesting

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2017 Title: Chapter 172: The Finder of Lost Sheep

Oh my freakin god!  I love it!  The scene where the master investigator gathers everyone together and lays out the case.  Great! 

You've made room in this story for so much fun stuff to happen.  That's the reason it's been such a hit.  It's great fun and a great story.

Thanks Duggernaut. 

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input!

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