Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed
Date: August 19 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Bury
Kayla off in the cosmos, eh?
All I could think about at that moment was
“In the ether doing, like…”
Good chapter but it just left me with just more questions.
Like…what is the alpha government response to this is or the local government of whatever city they are in? Let Aegis handle everything? Do local enforcement defer to Aegis in all cases involving betas? I mean it would be a great show of unity if the alpha government and Aegis worked to together to stop the biggest domestic terrorist event they’ve probably had in a long time.
To be honest the Omega series is strong on characters and not so much on world building and that’s fine since every Omega story up until now have been really self-contained stories but this story has a lot more going on and we only have a really limited pov. I hope we get to see more of how the Omega world works in this story.
Author's Response: Aegis is basically in charge of larger-scale criminal justice issues. In this case, where it's essentially terrorism, there isn't much the Alpha authorities would be able to offer. Though certainly there are people of all classes working together within Aegis.
The scope won't broaden significantly from where it is now (I prefer to leave those wider viewpoints to Ackbar to show in his own universe), but we will see more of the inner workings of Aegis in future chapters.