long time reder first time poster
A story about a girl who can be shrunk by anyone.
hi, Sorry for late review, I've been meening to comment on your stories since the early weeks of the size discord but i kept getting side tracted by work and school, and general laziness. Waiting for ispiration is quite the pitfall. But I do plan to get through the stoires of realitively soon. Anywho I registered an account just or the sake of reviewing, creative types do need encouragement. First of all I like your scearios and your focus on keeping all the interactions giantess foccused. That can be hard to do with shrinking since it makes giant guys exist by defualt. it really muddies my enjoyment of shrink stories when they mix both giant girls and guys into the plot/ interaction. it de sexyfies the story for me and turns it generic.
overall I find the main character someone I can really empathise with, the way she tries to keep to herself and make herslef as low key as possible, avoid the eye contact, cliques, any dense social areas. Maintaining that critical balance of appearing neither overtly friendly or unfriendly. Its all the same way I handeled school. I certianly had aspects about myself I couldnt change and made dame sure to keep them hidden. The social/cyber bullying is unavoidable. Classmates can definetely be bitches and screw you in the back if give them oppening to. I could totally see myself being born a Shrinker. Does the mian chracter have a name by the way?
My favorite chapter is definetly 2, for one reason the realtively innocent betrayel by her curious nerdy friend was cute. its escpecially fun becuase them having an existing relationship made the impact and himliation more personal. I will say youre directly responsible for making me heavily into feet again.
Theres some minor grammar conlficts i bumped into but nothing major. In chapter 2, paragrahp 1, line 2 , it goes something like "she didnt have many friends so she tried "not" to keep me around" it seems like nerdy girl "wants" to keep her around becuse shes IS lonley.
Also chp 2 , paragraph 2, line 2, the line goes something like "the library was safe place"at" "during" lunch time. " it seems like you only need one or the other. Thats all. im not a writer though.
