Reviewer: Shaman Signed
Date: February 23 2022
Title: Chapter 2: Break Off
Again, great work! I can tell this story will probably be a killer one. The thing I like most is that there seems to be a proper focus on the characters themselves and they seem to act and react relatively realistic given the situation. And without that realism, I wouldn't really care about any graphic/lude stuff that comes next (anyone can write semi good lude stuff alone).
I hope you continue with the realistic approach to the characters, cause if you get that right, you're bound to have an amazing story!
Author's Response: Hah! Great to see you've stuck around! I'm pretty happy to see someone appreciate the effort I've put into the realism as, I was assured it would be my downfall. Didn't know if the development of the characters would truly interest anybody, or if they'd rather a story that swiftly gets to the point, but as you can see I'd opted for the former. As I see it, getting a feel for their personalities is what makes the further lewd interactions that much more intriguing. I hope not to disappoint with what I have in store for the future of this story~
- Ellenoire <3