Penname: ASenpai [Contact] Real name: Austin Rapisardi
Member Since: February 21 2016
Membership status: Member
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An idiotic attempt by an idiot to kill me.


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Summary:

This story takes place in an alternate reality where an ancient civilization employs magic and potions in its everyday lives. The Metzakal Ritual is at the heart of the Huhmtakil Culture. Every year all men at the age of 18 are gathered to display their prowess and engage in a fighting competition to determine the strongest. Those deemed worthy become warriors and are given the right to mate with the most beautiful maidens. Those that don’t make it are assigned other tasks. Some, in accordance with religious beliefs, are shrunk and devoured by the maidens. This story follows Jumko as he gets ready for the most important week of his life.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52463 Read Count: 84300
[Report This] Published: December 22 2015 Updated: February 20 2016
Reviewer: ASenpai Signed
Date: February 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

I must say it was a well thought out and engaging story with a wide variety of characters each with their own quirks. I must admit I have mixed feelings about the ending. It was great of course, do not get me wrong. I just feel...bad for Jumko if that makes sense. Not the vore part, just the circumstance. Nadia was a little insensitive but other than that I understand her position. 

 

All in all, Jumko's overconfidence was his weakness...and his faith in his friends as well! XD

 

Keep on writing friend that hit the emotions deep and that's the best kind of story.