Alice buys a mysterious old locket and shares its 'special' power with her sister and her school friends.
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Grammar could do with a little check here and there, but what you have is great. The subtle reference to Alice in Wonderland is always pleasing, too.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review. Yes, you're dead right. It was the first thing I ever wrote when I was 19. It needs some heavy subbing. Glad you enjoyed it though!
Thanks for the nice review. Yes, you're dead right. It was the first thing I ever wrote when I was 19. It needs some heavy subbing. Glad you enjoyed it though!
[Reviews - 4] Cindy and her girlfriend Toni have hit a rut in their relationship. The passion just seems to have faded away. Neither is ready to give up yet though and Toni's physicist brother has lent her something that may bring the passion back.
This site needs more F/f sex scenes that don't involve weird shit like peeing or ass play. Good work, friend. Will there be updates?
Set in a sword-and-sorcery world, a giantess meets a female human mercenary with a very open mind and lustful eye...
Just realized the cut and paste I did on this is horrible and repetitive. I'll fix this soon.
Great work, especially with the mechanics of the sex scene. While conversation between the two does seem a touch... unnatural, and you more or less skipped the romance portion (no complaints here), what you've got is wonderful. The physical scale was very well worked too.
Aubrey and her younger sister Sophia struggle to live their lives. Between their dad working all the time and their abusive Step-Mother, they try to find happyness but things always seem to end badly.
Life only gets worse however as a viral epidemic soon spreads affecting young Aubrey. Now the roles of older and younger sister have switched, and what follows is still uncertain.
Interesting concept. Just how far will these two go together, I wonder?
Being an avid fan of both fictional incest and F/f relationships, this story has a lot of potential, far as I'm concerned.
Any ideas when you'll be next updating?
[Reviews - 2] It's here! It's finally here! The 2016 superproject, "Insect Nobility"!
Here's how this will work: I'm starting this story in January. GiantessLover writes Chapter 2 in February, makebelieve has Chapter 3 in March, The Shrunken Scholar is on Chapter 4 in April, WrittenVoreArt took Chapter 5 in May, DyingSanity is doing Chapter 6 in June, Thornton is on Chapter 7 in July, and while we haven't filled August to November yet, good old Choreo will end this story, somehow, in December. If we don't get 4 more writers to help out, Choreo will do August, and you guys will vote on which four return to do September through December's chapters.
ANYWAY, we each have to continue the story below: we have to continue as is, and our protagonist can't change. We will not stop following Lady Melissa, under any circumstances, which means she can't die for good until Chapter 12- just to let you know.
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Lady Melissa is but one of many corrupt, self-centered, and arrogant nobles of the kingdom of Ruhenne . . . but many would agree her abuses rank of a higher caliber. Murdering and sexually debasing her servants, setting peasant towns on fire for the hell of it, and now attempts in sorcery? However, the universe is the type to right wrongs, sometimes in the most bizarre of ways . . .
Interesting concept. Old timey setting, and a very prince and the pauper style relationship.
I'm by no means well known on this site (only joined a few days ago), but this writing style agrees with me, and the content, very much so. I might be able to help out for a chapter if you'd like?
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad to see you're interested! Of course, you'd be at the end of the current line (posting your chapter in August), but I hope that is acceptable.
Hello again. I hadn't noticed you'd replied to my review!
I was away for quite some time, but I haven't forgotten this site. Is this story still being worked on?
Author's Response:
I'd like it to be, but it seems most people have bailed. If you'd like, you can still join in and do a chapter. Maybe you can get the wheels turning and actually make this story worth something.
Yup, definitely a unique idea, I'll give you that. Who would've thought the devil had a size kink?
Anyway, this is interesting. For someone who speaks English as a second language, you're doing very well indeed. Couple of minor grammar mistakes, but they're nothing in the grand scale of things.
A bored, spoiled, rich girl has her way with tinies that are mysteriously appearing by her pool.
Plenty of potential. Here's hoping it moves on from foot fetish stuff soon. :)
When you have Dinkins Disease, arousal of any sort makes you shrink. You don't really suffer much except inconvenience when you get shrunk, but it's still a pain to attempt to do some things that normal people can do and it's easy to get trapped in inconvenient places. Naturally, you try to stick to mixers attended by exclusively other sufferers of your condition, so you don't have to wear yourself out pleasing a comparative titan.
Rythmear's prize for winning the bet we had.
This one looks like a lot of fun. Not so keen on assplay, but pussyplay always makes mine happy m looking forward to more. :3