Reviewer: combine45 Signed
Date: January 26 2022
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
First off, great work so far!
Secondly these are my favorite types of stories where the giantess is confident and proud of her power and not afraid to use it on the random hapless tinies yet has unique feelings for a certain special tiny.
If you are looking for ideas based on where the story is at the end of chapter 4. I think it will be interesting to explore her powers once she has full control of his soul. We don't know too much about him yet maybe he's had certain fantasies she can now help him explore to develop a bond. Of course she will always be the dominant one in the relationship but if it's going to be a loving one it will be cute to see her getting to know him and figuring out what he likes.
Now as to what I'd like to see. Maybe she can put his conciousness in different parts of her body. Like her toes, feet tits, pussy. Etc, and go on some galactic scale rampages showing him what shes can do.
She's resolved not to destroy his planet but maybe in a fucked up way as he falls in love with her he'll grow to feel bad for her because of that and tell her its okay to do what she wants because he'll be so over the moon for a gorgeous giantess goddess.
The play between fear and love is the sweetest of all for me in these stories so my advice is dont rush to him beeing all in love too quick but dont keep him a distant afraid whi er too long either.
Your doing great so far so I'm sure I'll enjoy whata coming next.
Author's Response:
Wow, these are all the ideas I could of ever wanted. Thank you very much!
Since she does have mystical powers I’ve walked thought of adding more tags and genres, like you mentioned stuff like transforming into body parts of objects come to mind. Anything can really fly too i guess as long as there is some justification for it.
Also yeah, so far it’s just been a prologue with getting his soul, the real fun starts after. Although I don’t wanna mess up that part so I may be slowing down my releases for that.
The idea of Rampaging through earth sounds great too, perhaps a little bit of fun would fly but I’d rather not turn her completely cruel when she doesn’t need to be. (Although in this universe civilisation outside of earth does exist so…. There is possibility of cruelty like that.)
and yeah, so far I’m trying to keep the play between fear and love. Of course since there is barely anything on our male lead so far he is mostly fearful for now.
once again I’m thankful for the review!