Reviewer: Odysseus Signed
Date: August 29 2019
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: "The Day the Klown Kried"
Don't have an easy way to respond, so just going to leave another review.
Definitely like the idea of Killer Frost! Livewire would be fine, Copperhead is a little obscure for me personally but would still read it for sure.
On the hero front, I could imagine a situation where Harley or Ivy caught Batgirl, and tied her to a chair, but before doing so dropped a tiny guy on the seat. Maybe they did this while she was unconscious so she feels him when she wakes up and has to be told what it is she is sitting on. She would believe Harley was lying until she saw Harley pull out and eat a tiny person herself, then realize that the more she struggled in her seat the more she was beating on the tiny man turned seat cushion. Then when she escapes or is saved she could find him and be gentle. Maybe it's even someone Batgirl happens to go to high school / college with.
Anyway, just an idea, because I'm excited at the prospect of what you could pull off with heroes as well. Loving the stories so far though,so anything more would be great.
Author's Response: Killer Frost I definitely want in because, well, Popsicle tinies. Livewire I'm not sure what to do with her power in relation to tinies, but I definitely want someone with her personality in my works. Copperhead I want in because she's a hottie with a body and a snake theme. That's just a free in for vore right there, lol.
I think I could cook up some fun scenarios involving Harey/Ivy tricking Batgirl into sitting on and/or eating a tiny. Like put one in a dissolving capsule, force her to swallow without knowing what it was, then all of a sudden she feels a tickle in her stomach. Haven't put much thought into, but that's the first thing that comes to mind. Your idea of having her unknowingly sit on a tiny while tied to a chair would be really good, too. I especially like the idea of Batgirl having to care for a tiny, but recognizing him as someone from school. She would then have to operate under the assumption that he could one day be regrown, and if so then she has to protect her identity from him - while still having him under her care. A neat dynamic.
I don't want to throw any heroes at it too soon, though. Only because the more heroes are aware of the situation, the sooner they would be able to shut it down.
Right now, the plan going forward is to not focus on the DC-Licious stuff, but instead focus on Overwatch as well as an OC series I'm working. I've scripted some chapters and done some worldbuilding. Now I just need to think of a good look for the main character, an ice giantess, and I'll be set to start!