Reviewer: zura98 Signed
Date: November 30 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Couch
I have to say that i enjoyed a lot this story. You made a setup based on VR wich usually tends to be 'abused' but you kept it 'reasonable '.
I have a foot fetish, so the first two chapters are the ones i enjoyed the most. However, all the chapters are great.
And i really have to congratulate you for this part:
"The mage looked up to the sky,
now partially occluded by the light blue sole of their megaworld’s
supposed benefactor.
She found herself staring at the
foot for a few good moments of contemplation. The myriad wrinkles of
it seemed to rival her world’s rivers in width. She wondered how
many thousands of feet the ped was.
Ten towering toes softly
scrunched: another idle, thoughtless movement most likely. The mage
wondered how many of her world’s mountains could be shifted by such
a simple, thoughtless gesture.
It made the mage feel small. She
was very small, as a matter of fact. And, as she continued staring up
at that foot in a contemplative trance, she couldn’t help but
wonder if this was the best way to spend her time. She was in a
veritable bubble of a world, itself conjoined with a few others in a
slightly bigger bubble. All was under the careless gaze of the
powerful player whose feet were presently invading their sky-space,
yet even that gigantic blue brat was in a bubble of her own: the
normal game world."
I dont know why, but the way you wrote this made me enjoy it a lot. I even searched for POV images of giantesses feet over micro cities so i could visualize it even better.
I mean, the way we can see the perspective of a player under Euki's foot is amazing. We see how the mage feels insignificant at the sight of a normal young woman's feet. Euki is only an average brat girl but in this VR MMO her foot alone is capable to make fully grown women feel insignificant.
And i think it's even better because the contrast of the VR world with the reality. Euki is not a giantess nor a goddess. She is just a brat outside the game. But in the game, she is so powerful that players feel envy and awe when they see her.
And its not even intended. Euki displayed her extreme power so casually, not even on
purpose. Her smallest movements had so much impact on the players and she did not even acknowledged it. So humiliating for the mage and the other players.
Even later on the story, when Euki enjoys her power, the story remains great.
Anyway, i'm glad you wrote this piece. I enjoyed it a lot. Especially the foot parts.
Thank you for it!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I have dabbled in VR themes before and I do think it has lots of potential for fun.
I am happy you enjoyed that pov part of the story! I did want to try and capture the surreality I imagined looking up at a giant foot might invoke, along with other things given the mage's perspective.
That sort of casualness as well was something I wanted to capture too, so I'm happy you liked it.
I am not sure what else to type though, other than that I very much appreciate the detailed feedback.
I'm happy you liked the story, and thank you for sharing your thoughts!