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Home Survival by smallguy26 Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

This is the story of how family man John is accidently shrunk at work and must survive at home with his spolit wife and her bratty daughter. Join him as he fights for survival in his own home against his own family.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 517 Read Count: 29387
[Report This] Published: March 04 2014 Updated: March 04 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: John's Death

I do like the start of this it is very good (;. Like Wizard pointed out the started at the end aspect is interesting. The writing is actually very good and you are doing a wonderful job. 

 

I figured I will point this out  but I recommend using paragraphs rather than a single block of text it just makes the story easier to read. Overall it is a very good start (: you are doing a great job.

 

Just remember write what you find fun to write makes the story that much better. Okay I am done with my rant (;.

 

Love 

-Chloe

Kyra by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking.  Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199743 Read Count: 722082
[Report This] Published: March 06 2014 Updated: September 07 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Now for my review (: I will say from the start that I normally hate stories that involve shrinking slowly I have always found them very difficult to get into as nothing ever seems to happen no matter how many chapters I read.

 

Your story however is unlike any other progressive shrinking story that I have read rather than getting chapters and chapters of boring nothingness I get a wonderful dynamic father daughter conflict as the father shrinks. You describe things so well through the entire story which is something that gets more and more rare each day.

 

Lastly I will say I can belive the the personalities of your charcters something that I always find very important. It is always a better story when you can relate to the characters I think, anyway keep up the excellent writing.

 

-Chloe



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I agree about the need for a good progression in character dynamics over the course of slow shrinking; I think certain authors are really good at this and have certainly influenced my own writing, but if a story doesn't do this I get bored also.  For me the shrinking is pointless unless it leads to something new and different in the characters' relationships with each other.

Anyway, I'm glad you've enjoyed this story despite it being outside your normal interests.  Hope you continue to enjoy the rest ...

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed
Date: March 14 2014 Title: None

I am glad to be the first to comment (: a good start I am eager to read the next update along with the bios



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment. Updates on this story will be swift as I am not busy for the next week or so.

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2014 Title: None

Good work on the new chapter you are doing great so far (:  and like pasret said don't get stressed you are doing excellent for a first story by the way if you would ever like so help feel free to email me (;



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support, I think I have a pretty good idea on how this site operates. So (hopefully) no more incredibly stressed typing.

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2014 Title: None

Still doing well (: I am enjoying it keep it up. Also don't overload yourself



Author's Response:

If you read chapter 3 of my other story, you will know I overloaded myself. BIGTIME!!

The Normal One by VegaDestroyer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

The story of a boy's life with his giant family.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4925 Read Count: 35448
[Report This] Published: March 17 2014 Updated: March 22 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply fantastic well written and enjoyable (: I could say more but you obviously don't need my advice.

A Fly On the Wall by sickpuppies Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Join Nick, a boy turned into a fly, as he explores his new world. Filled with high school drama, girls, snails, food, breasts, other flies, and maybe even a bit of humor. Who knows?


Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30677 Read Count: 327290
[Report This] Published: May 08 2014 Updated: December 19 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Magical Snails

I have read quite a few tranformation stories and most normally lack the detail to make the scenario interesting. Your story is a little weirder since it is an animal tranformation which again is something you don't see much of.

 

I must say though that your story idea is well executed details are good the story is good and the things happening to our little fly are so well described that I will admit it has managed to exite me.

 

It is good different but good

 

-Chloe



Author's Response:

Chloe, thank you for the praise! Whenever I wright something, I try to make it as interesting as possible. I’m glad others are able to enjoy it.

Dying for Letters by Charper Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

There's only one way into the Omega sorority...all pledges must simply make it through one night hanging out with the current sisters. The only catch: each pledge is reduced to a quarter-inch in height. You leave the Omega House during pledge night only one of two ways...either as a member or as a stain. 

(Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.)


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, BBW, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7837 Read Count: 65603
[Report This] Published: May 21 2014 Updated: June 01 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hello (: I wanted to say that I am a fan of violent giantesses firstly and your descriptions are wonderful you are as good as many of the better authors on the site. 

 

Next I wanted to make a suggestion you may wish to include different personalities among the girls rather than just making them all cruel. It always helps to have variations among the content but I suppose that only really matters if you intend to keep the story going for a while 

 

Expect me to keep reading good job.

 

-Chloe

BFG: Limbo by Nostory Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Jessica Snape finds herself in a world after mysteriously disappearing from Home whilst on a picnic with her good friend Tucker Martel.

 Where is she? Is she alone? Will she get out? Read on to find out more.


Categories: Sci Fi / Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Big Friendly Giantess
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15519 Read Count: 37554
[Report This] Published: May 29 2014 Updated: July 01 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios Page

First I must say that I have never read any of your stories. I enjoyed the bios getting a visual  representation of the characters is always great something I think should be included in every story. From what I read you have an interesting plot line in mind so I am looking forward to seeing more chapters (: 

 

I will admit I do have a preference to violent giantess content but I am certainly going to give this story a read each time you update.

 

Also it may take me a while but I intend to read your other stories so expect reviews on them by sometime over the next few days.



Author's Response:

 Thank you for reading and reviewing, I hope to read more from you!

The Adventures of Steve the Speck: Big Beth by tyeight Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Once upon a time, an intern stumbled upon an opportunity of a lifetime: an opportunity to shrink down and explore his colossal 6'3 coworker. Needless to say, typical size fetish antics ensure...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3695 Read Count: 40765
[Report This] Published: June 02 2014 Updated: June 02 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well where to begin what I have read thus far I have enjoyed reading your story. You are doing a great job at making detailed sentences  so I have enjoyed that especially your most recent chapter.

 

Next this is only a suggestion but I suggest making your chapters a little longer just because it leaves your reader more satisfied after reading a chapter of nice length. When they are short you don't get the hook that you need to pull your readers in.

 

Overall I  think it is a good story soooo keep up the good work.

 

-Chloe

Reduction (Working Title) by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

A mysterious virus sweeps the planet, ravaging humanity and reducing the infected population down to just under an inch in height. Civilization shuts down. Members of the small portion of humanity remaining uninfected feud with one another over control of resources crucial to their survival.

Meanwhile, as the years since the initial outbreak pass, factions of the infected work industriously to develop the means to improve their chances of survival in their massive new world. 

NOTE: Just because a tag isn't present currently doesn't mean it won't be added to the story in the future. I like to avoid spoilers, and to be quite honest, at this point I'm not entirely sure of everything that will and will not eventually make it's way into this story. 


Categories: Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1909 Read Count: 10746
[Report This] Published: June 04 2014 Updated: June 10 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed
Date: June 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I will admit even though this is just the intro you have me hooked I really wan't to see what you have planned for this world of people both normal size and shrunken. I will admit I enjoy your word choice through this it varries a lot which is great.

 

Anyway I really would love to see another chapter soon. Less a request more a demand, I am kidding.

 

-Chloe



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for giving this story its first review! I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to reading more. Also glad to hear you enjoy my word choice. I try not to use the same wording often. Saying practically the same things over and over again makes things boring to write, and if things are boring to write, I believe they'll be boring to read as well. 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

The Morning Routine by zumi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

On the set of a reality TV show of the future, participants are shrunk and submitted to the unaware whims of a giantess drudging through the tedium of a daily ritual. Watch the various stories of each of the twenty individuals as they try to survive the unrelenting danger.


Categories: Insertion, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Toilet, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3254 Read Count: 20744
[Report This] Published: June 04 2014 Updated: June 05 2014
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed
Date: June 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I love the idea so you can add me to the list of your readers (:.

 

I won't suggest anything that I would like to see since I don't want't to influence your writing too much. It is always great to see another unaware story they are like candy to me.

 

Anyway good look and I will be reading each update of this so be sure to update.

 

-Chloe.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Hope I can do the idea justice for you.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.