Penname: Ancient Relic [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 281361
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 14 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Her World

So that's the big problem they had to cover up in Shrink Act Files. Delicious way to set up the next story. The best thing about this story was your ability to write people with major issues, and the most whacked of the bunch is now huge.

“No offense, but I don’t even trust you at that size not to get into trouble. Do I look like an idiot to you?” Prophetic, though I don't think Claire expected trouble on this scale. I didn't think Carly would grow twice.

I think we've taken a step toward Techilogic's founding. The MRD may be gone, but they know how that it works and how to build another one, maybe even a smaller one. For now, they obviously need to get Carly under control, but after that, they can start founding a corporation and gathering customers and supporters, some in very high places. Unless founding Techilogic is a part of how they subdue Carly.



Author's Response:

Yep, this is what TSAF was referring to. While I won't talk about it just yet, this story indeed depicts some of the seedlings that eventually grow into Techilogic.

Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2408972
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 29 2016 Title: Chapter 66: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Tom is definitely your most compelling character. Even at three inches tall, he's as irrepressible as ever and holds such power over women 24 times taller than he is. This last bit with Cassidy has been a delightful transformation, from innocent and unsure what to do, to equal partner in the eroticism.

Not that I expect their affair to remain undisturbed. Tom has charmed a lot of women, and they could well be fighting over a three inch man soon. Janine, Lina, Jessica and Serena when they really understand what's going on.

 

So how long until somebody decides to figure out exactly how Tom shrunk, and try to acquire a shrinker for their own use?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 04 2016 Title: Chapter 68: Back Home, Janine Sunday

Well, Tess made a mistake. Fortunately, Cassie, as a nurse, may understand the concept of a vulnerable person.



Author's Response:

Did she? Tess is pretty clever in her own right. Cassidy is certainly good natured and means well, but she's not as adept at the games as Tess or Janine. Things are heating back up

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 09 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Cassidy, Monday

@Tom: As I'm reading it, Serena wasn't ordered to talk to Cassidy, she knows something's going and is finding out on her own initiative. And Serena is going to fuck Tom at some point. Duggernaut said so by describing Serena's attributes.



Author's Response:

Serena is a determined professional and sensing something amiss is prompting her to investigate the situation further in order to prevent being blindsided. Whether or not she gets a chance at Tom remains to be seen. (:

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 11 2016 Title: Chapter 70: After School Deliberations

Seventy chapters later, this story shows no signs of losing steam. In fact, this could just be the beginning, if Tess decides to bring out the shrinker. Keep going, you've hit gold.

Also have you seen the Top Ten Most Read and Top Ten Most Favourited?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

Perhaps, as part of some kind of weird-ass, precedent-setting custody suit!

With recent events in mind, there are a number of ways one could interpret "weird-ass".



Author's Response:

Weird ass? Ass-tounding!!!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 17 2016 Title: Chapter 72: Tess and Janine

Author's Response:

I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.

Janine didn't seem to think so.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 18 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Serena and Lina

God damn, this is heading in a fascinating direction. Tess is thinking about the shrinker, and now Lina wants to lay the legal foundation to own a shrunken person. If the two were to intersect...



Author's Response:

Sooo many ways to go but I have to be careful not to get lost in it. I have become tangled up in a couple of my other stories which need to be corrected before completing them. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 24 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Janine

Right now I think Lina's the most likely to win. If Serena does figure out how to give her legal custody of Tom, then I'm not sure what the others can do to fight that. That would also force Tom's mother to become aware of the situation, as she'd have to find out that she no longer has legal custody of her own son.



Author's Response:

So many possibilities...  ;)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 29 2016 Title: Chapter 76: Tess

The dam's cracking now. Tess is about to shrink one or more men, and if the others find out...



Author's Response:

Quite possibly which could lead to whole other story...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 01 2016 Title: Chapter 78: Best Friends Forever

So I'm reading this and I'm thinking, "TomSpeedy in 3, 2, 1...". Then I check the reviews, and I see that down there. Now Tom gets to seduce yet another woman, while Janine, Serena and Lina all try to get him back.

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Date: April 13 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Student/Teacher Conference

Grandpa: Tess, does anybody else know?

Tess: Janine Lindholm, Carolina Lindholm, Jessica Lindholm, Miss Addison, Sam, Cassidy Lane and Katie Harwood, all of whom have had sex with him at his current size, and a lawyer doesn't know about him but is now laying the legal foundation for de facto ownership of a shrunken person, and now I'm thinking about shrinking and effectively enslaving another man for my own sexual pleasure, and...Grandpa? Are you all right?



Author's Response:

Garndpa: Funny that you should ask that...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 23 2016 Title: Chapter 93: Afterschool

If Lina found out that Ms. Harwood is engaging in sexual relations with a student...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 15 2016 Title: Chapter 100: Baby, I’d Fall For You…

Congratulations on 100 chapters! There's still enough life left in this story that it could go on for another hundred. And enough plots - we've got each Lindholm's scheming, Cassidy and Miss Harwood using their new toy, Tess was thinking about using the shrinker earlier, Raphaella is about to get involved, Donatella and Tom the Elder, Serena started to build a case to possess Tom, and there's probably something I forgot. It's been a marvellously fun adventure, though, so keep it going.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 104: Tess

Tom raised a hand and waved, “Giant Tess,” he greeted. Clever.


Otherwise, it looks like we're seeing people starting to rein Tom in, and put a damper on his adventuring ways. Let's see how that works out.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 20 2016 Title: Chapter 124: Mother Child Reunion

Well then, it looks as though this story is about to start winding down. But, then, Lina's here, and no doubt she's scheming to turn this situation to her advantage.

It also looks like I was wrong earlier: it looks like Serena won't have a round with Tom.



Author's Response:

It certainly has that feel doesn't it?

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Date: October 26 2016 Title: Chapter 132: The New Pet Rock

I bet this chapter is setting something up...



Author's Response:

Nah...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 133: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

If I had to guess, I'd say that Lina discreetly sent the shrinking machine to her scientist friend to have it fixed.



Author's Response:

I can say such is not the case, however, there is nothing saying the technology might not have been independently replicated by Lina's friend....

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Date: November 28 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Tracking Tom

The temptation is going to run high in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Absolutely right.  will desire override reason?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: November 30 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Tracking Tom

Calahonda: Fun fact: Duggernaut has really written something special here, but it was originally TomSpeedy's idea. I don't think a reader's idea and an author's capabilities have ever fit together as perfectly as they did here.

Carycomic: I have a thing for giantess lawyers, so I'd be quite happy to see Serena have a go.

Duggernaut: I think one of the best things about Tom's Story is Tom himself. He's basically a tiny sex god, supremely skilled, supremely confident, adventurous, constantly having sex with all sorts of women. The stuff that makes women want to have sex with him, and men want to be him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for providing some background context. I find it intriguing this story has been the one to get lit. I tend to favor capable protagonists who get in over their heads but you're right there is just something about Tom.