It seems you're keeping a good rythm with this story, I think you said this one might be longer than PLD, right?

Abby seems to be becoming more open minded now, after what happened last chapter and her talk with Casey. At the same time that also seems to be of help with her relationship with the other girls. She's doing way better now and younger ones also seem to be accepting her more. The way Najia is recovering should also help to earn their trust I think.

I love Casey more and more as the story develops. I find her attitude really adorable. I'm really looking forward to the next one, since it seems to have some more of her. As for what she had to do to save herself and Abby, I'm not sure if she's a quick thinker or just let the urge inspire her. I'm usually indifferent about that kind of content but I found it rather nice here for some reason, maybe because of the characters. Also, it was funny. Just for curiosity, would covering her in sand would also worked or wouldn't be effective enough? Also, it seems Casey has some control over her clothes, I wonder to what extend.

There's also the bit of sadness she showed in her conversation. I suppose the reason they all look up to Najia so much must be because she helped them in some way in the past. I think it'll be interesting know more of that in the future. And about the other girl, Ivy, which I might get and idea about how she's related to Ebon by the pictures.

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No need to apologize for publishing a new chapter, it's not like you're forcing them to read or something. Though the interesting plot is indeed making me read it ASAP xD

The relationship Casey has with Abby is so sweet, I like a to their excahnge at the beginning and how the dullahan worked so hard to keep her out of danger, even if she failed at the end... Hopefully she can get back to the tiny before something bad happens.

This was more of a show of strenghts. Certainly the humans have a lot to fear if thoe species can do so much while being that young, even if they standards they're teenagers, I guess the only advantage humans have is numbers? And I suppose those are the twins that Casey mentioned before, maybe devil girls or succubus going by the pics. I actually thought that the twins might be harpies so I guess I was wrong on this one. I'm eager to see what they might do. Maybe in other scenario Abby wouldn't be as intimidated by them, since they're relatively short. Though after that display of power there're not two ways about it... I wonder if Casey would've been able to easily handle one of them? Maybe the reveal of their rank might clarify that, I'm a bit curious about under which criteria the rank is choosen.

And there's also the question as to who is her mistress. I'm a bit confused about what they were looking for. I thought it might be Casey but since they were curious about her in the end it might not be? Or maybe they just didin't get enought information from their boss.

Anyway, this is looking really interesting. Good job as always.

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Wow,This was a really good chapter, I'm impressed. Great job guys.

Eve is a really interesting character, seeing how she took a liking by Abby and went through the trouble of having the teenager brought to her, even getting some clothes ready. I wonder what she saw in her future to convince herself that she is, let's say, "worth it" to be by her side, even after Abby's outburst. I was a bit nervous at that part, after repeating it quite some times I didn't think Eve would hurt her but she could've used some more drastical methods to keep her there. Though, a part me me thought that she should've already deduced and/or predicted that was going to happen. Same by the time she massaged Abby's back, even if she wasn't going to hurt her I was curious what she was trying to do. Using her fangs for a massage is something I don't thing I've seen before but it was a great idea and very well written too.

I also liked the parts in which Abby catched Eve out of composure, like when the teenager told her the "mistress" thing, her unintentional joke,  or by the end while dressing. The constrast between her usual calm and well-mannered personality and those bits made me like her more. Casey is still my favorite tho. Anyway, I wonder if in the future maybe Abby would be able to provoke that on her on purpose? Though it should be hard with the clairvoyance, which by the explanation I suppose it works better the closer the future is? I mean, there're so many paths Abby con choose for her future but as time advances those branches branc themselves so it might be harder to guess then. Then again, there's magic on the equation so I wouldn't know for sure.

And being still about Eve's powers, while she said that she see and hears everything that happens at the cave, it might not be so true. She didin't realize that the imps called her "mistress" in front of the tiny, and also didn't seem like she was expecting them to get some of Abby's energy so there might be a limitation to it? Or another vampiric-like powers like the ones from her familiars interfere with her own powers? I'm eager to know the limitations of what she can do.

By the end the vampire said: “Yes… Anyone in this cave will know the meaning of this, so make any you want aware if you so choose. But Abby, I caution you not to speak to any of the others about what we discussed here today. They don’t need to know what I’ve done… or, what I’ve seen.”. I wonder about the last past. Maybe is because I like her bot I thought it might've to do with Casey's confession? The dullahan said, or well, thought, that it was something she didn't event tell Kari so I don't think she would be very comfortable with Eve hearing, much less with watching the girls' intimate time that happened after that. Or maybe is a thing that happens so much that she doesn't care anymore? I also thought about the possibility of Casey and Kari not knowing about Eve, since it would be too complicated to keet Abby a secret from her and the vampire said she's among the ones that hates humans the most, but because Eve said that everyone knows what her protection mean, I guess they should also know about her. Oh, and now that I mention Casey, I hope she's not the jealous kind, since Eve seems to have some powerful intentions wiht her new friend. Or actually, I kind of hope she gets jealous. I just feel she would bee to cute pouting about it!... After cursing a lot, most likely.

The Heinrich curriculum, is nice for me to get to know more about that ranking system and I'm also really interested in knowing what species are the others at A rank. Also, thay said there was a huge steep between C and B rank but, is it the same for B and A? Eve implied that Casey could do nothing to stop her, which seems logical seeing she barely could keep up with the imps, but maybe that's just because she's a vampire and the four not-as-powerful A species could somehow be defeated by a B class? Sorry, it seems this chapter ignited more of my curiosity than usual.

As I mentioned before I enjoyed the fang massage and the whole way in which Eve handled Abby, literal and figuratively. The gesture of nuzzling the tiny against her cheek is something one could see here and there but is so cute I couldn't get tired of it! Also because she wants to "free" Abby from her preconceptions of wrong and right so that she can enjoy herself, I can get an idea about where this is going by that ending. Just, hope tha Abby doesn't get mad about it... Not much at least. Oh, and it's good to know now what happened with the imps' magic last chapter.

Anyway, excelent chapter.

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Abby seems to be taking her changes better than expected, she ain't 100% into it but at least she isn't freaking out. The little bits in which Casey notices some closeness with Abby and how she kept pondering about her liking them now were adorable! And of course, the kiss! >.< Though the idea of them separating at dome point indeed saddens me a bit but that doesn't seem close for now so I don't think there's any need to worry. Casey of course doesn't know that...

Abby got a bit of a hint of how to get into "Kari's route" so I'm waiting to see what she does with that. I'm also happy that Nya's misunderstanding was cleared up, at least the kitty doesn't seem to mind much.

I think I got more clear the extend of Eve's powers but I'm not completely sure about seeing exactly 100% of everything, for the reasons I mentioned before, maybe there's still some more to it? There seems to be a lot more surrounding her. The other girls do have some powerful reasons to doubt her, if she even fought Najia, so it'll be up to Abby what to do about her approach to the vampire. Also I wonder if Abby's calling was enough or Casey with have to handle things for now. They don't have that many options from here on. And the chande she did to Abby is something else to thing about, rather than just "releasing" her libido it seem to go further, maybe as removing limiters on her attitude? Like self consciousness os something similar.

I'm not really sure about the change you mentioned... If I've to guess, is it the way things are developing? Usually Abby's encounters with the others had been 1-on-1 at least for the most part but here goes more for a group encounter, specailly in this chapter. If it is that I think it has shown little by little since the start of the story. Is something I noticed before, this one seems feels more of a group story than PLD. In here it isn't weird to be more than two important characters at the scene and I like that, I like the way they interact with each other and you can get either the fondness they got from one another or the friction between them. I'm not saying a "group" story is better than a "close encounter" one, they're just different, they get handled in different way, but I really like the way this one is going. Then again it could be you were talking abput something else and I totally missed the point ;_;

Just and extra thought, that monster ranking from before, does it include eastern species? Or maybe is just the ones found at Ireland.

Also, “Of all the girls that Najia looks after, there’s only three who could actually hold a candle to Eve if it came to a fight, and that’s just a theory.", Ebon, the one "they don't talk about" and... Did Abby just overlooked something? I wonder if it's one of the other A ranked species, or maybe the one Ebon is taking care of...

Anyway, as always, I'm eager to see more of this, but take your time to have it done in a way you're pleased with.

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Is good to have a calm chapter after last one's actions. I think is more clear now what Eve's intentions are, she seriously feels something for Abby and won't let anyone get on the way. The way she took care of the pain for Abby should be more than enough proof, gladly it seems that won't have big consequences it seems. Also, I find it really cute when she's taken by surprise and end ups blushing.

But Brook is the start of the chapter. I really like her smug attitude, seems like an interesting adition to the story. Her powers are fascinating, I wonder to what extend she got control over the water and what else she can use it for. At least being able to transform her body into water is not something I remember seeing before, is nice to have some novelty. By the way, I think her entrance was cool.

I wasn't expecting her to tell about her past already, really sad what she had to go through. At least Najia was there and arrived before things turned to worst... I wonder why Eve didn't tell her about Abby taking care of her, though maybe she was simply in a hurry to get the energy she needed and didn't deem it necessary. Anyway, it seem Abby got herself another fan there.

Oh right, It was also quite fun to see Abby getting carried away by the younger girl. Is relaxing to have her back as new now that her injuries are a thing of the past.

I'll be looking forward to the next one.

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Hey, really nice chapter, some new info but a lot more new doubts and expectation.

Eve again shows hew feelings for Abby, being mad with her at the start of the chapter and with Casey later on. Should've been really painful for her the whole incident with Ebon, specially not making it in time. Also, more focus on her being dead than before. I was thinking that maybe that's the way vampires appear? Rather than reproducing among them, transforming recently dead hominals or something like that. I'm eager to know about her past though it doesn't seem to be coming any time soon.

The whole discussion with Casey was fun, you two did a great job with that. I guess that shows that the dullahan has her own ways in which she excels. The whole "lovelorn" part should've hurt though

And well, even after what she did I still feel pretty bad for Ebon. The mention of her bringing back herbs each time, even if she didn't know if they helped, hurt me a bit. Her reasons for what she tried to do to Abby is something I'm really interested in.

Damn, Kari seems special. Kind of har to believe her problem after seeing the other girls being so open about getting energy. Also, I wonder how a shadow feels... Anyway, Casey holding Abby (L).

The whole feral thing sounds really dangerous. As Abby said, if they were to go on rampage it would be quite hard to protect the shrunken teenager from the, and Ebon. I did thought for a bit about her being used to feed the other but was unsure if taking so much energy from her would be fine or have any bad implications for her. But if Eve had the same idea then it should be fine I guess. Sounds a bit hard to think the she could be able to give energy to all of the girls but I suppose is more of an issue of efficency? Abby having a special "fuel" that she can't use but works wonders on the other girls, while stuff like food works better on hers. By the way, she wasn't mentioned but I suppose they're also hunting food for her? Though it shouldn't be much effort to feed someone the size of a doll. Also, I didn't think as far as befriending the other girls. I suppose they would fight for against Ebon for their source of nourishment but I wonder if they can make Abby see like more than that to them. Hopefully...

Eve brings more foreshadowing with the reasons that Najia's recovery is direr now and there being someone that hates humans more than Ebon. I guess that should be the hardest one around to deal with. I'm really curious to know who could it be.

And well, with that kiss I guess Eve is taking the lead in the race for Abby. I find Casery specially adorable but also like ve a lot. Wathever the result is between the three of them I hope they end up on a good note. I guess polygamy ain't an option with those two hominals involved? lol.

I'm really looking forward to see how this goes. This seems to be the start of the introduction of some other girls and getting to know them more and I'm really hyped about it.

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No need to apologize for the wait. I hope everything gets better on your side.

Well, that's a nice start. I always appreciate more of Cas. Is fun and charming seeing her jealous and trying her best for Abby. Though, I don't think I would mind some of that "rancid breath". Quite cute, pouting when the teenager got distracted.

And he rivality still goes on. I guess Eve got the upper hand in this round, she seem to be able to mess with Abby easily and the teenager seems to be more conscious around her. Though maybe the tiny feels more at ease with Casey? Anyway, whatever Eve has to do now seem intriguing. I'm at blank in this one, it might have to do with the way she gets energy but she said she would tell Abby about it later so that might not be that secretive. Also, since they're far from Casey by now, that means Abby is naked at this moment? By the way, typo with "ladder", I think.

So, Poppy. Since there's someone else that can shake Eve out of her usual behaviour. It was fun seeing her getting that frustrated while trying to give her message, even sending her flying. Good thing she's okay. Though, Abby might need some time before seeing that act again. And the little speech she gave about going against her if anything happens to Abby was amusing in many ways, showing her passion towards Abby, another aspect of her personality and simply the way she said it made me smile. Though, again, Abby might need some time to process what happened.

And about Poppy herself, I like her already. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, got high expectations for her. The personality she seems to have just looks quite fun, same with her speech pattern. And finally, I would like to remark, I want to believe that Abby fell face first into Poppy's navel :)

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This was uploaded just after my last day at my job, feels quite freshening to read ^^

Abby did her best to keep up with Poppy's drinking pace, quite impressive for someone her size. The girls drunken antics were fun, the teenager trying to get off the dish, Poppy grabbing and dropping her back, got some snickers out of me.

And seems the alcohol was strong enough to make Abby more forward than usual. I suppose is fitting, they both deserve a reward after getting rid of Ebon for now. I really liked seeing the girls get along so well with each other, it really shows they had a fun time even before the feeding time started.

I think Abby got it rougher than usual this time? At least since her first encounter with Nya. Poppy is related to a lot of stuff that I like so I really, really enojed this. I found it specially cute how she thought Abby was licking her because she liked that and just kept rubbing her around (or maybe inside? Was it inside?) her navel. The oni's breath, tummy, navel, sweat and other fluids might be something Abby hopes the alcohol makes her forget. Having the shrunken girl bite because the oni wouldn't feel any pain from it was clever.

And I guess Eve time is next. Though, she might want to bath Abby first, I can't imagine she appreciates how she smells now as much as Poppy. And also, yes, pain in for of headache is coming for Abby at this rate...

So yes, it was shorter than usual but really sweet! Poppy might be my second favorite by now, or even at the same level as Casey, have to think about it a bit more... The oni is just too adorable! and really has a lot of affinity with my tastes. I hope she come backs to te story sometime. Once more, I really enjoyed this, thanks for writing.

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Well, this was certainly unexpectedly fast... I actually read it the thay it was uploaded but couldn't review until now, sorry for that.

Eve and Abby get to know each other even more, I found it a bit fun how the small one thought Eve was drinking blood and it was rather cute the vampire reaction when asked if she was the one that cooked. Also, Eve surely know how to set the mood.

Then the twins come in, poor little ones. Though, they might have enjoyed the ride...

The song part was a bit sad but I'm sure Abby is really thankful for that, Eve hit bullseye there. But, not so much with the next part. It was a really powerful scene, showing a side of Eve which we only saw in glimpses before. I know for sure Brook didn't mean to get the vampire that mad, I suppose not even she expected the Eve to be that... Nervous? Anxious? She certainly was very expecting about the date and Abby in general.

I wonder how she got to the state that Abby means so much for her, why is it that the fact that she can love a human is so amazing... I suppose this might be revealed in the next chapters but I'm certainly intrigued about it, about how she became that... Wary? With other beings and specially humans.

I couldn't stop reading after Eve snapped, I was worried about Eve, about Abby and about Brook. I hope the mermaid doesn't gets it too hard after all this. I mean, surely she'll be fine now but Eve might get her revenge somehow lol.

I liked how Eve revealed her red eyes in the dark, for some reason.

And now Abby knows some more of Eve and it seems she will even more revelations later on. I wonder if she feels relieved somehow? At the start of the chapter she talked about Eve as if she was in a totally different level than her. Now that she knows the vampire isn't almighty and that even she has flaws, I wonder if Abby thinks they're even closer now.

So yes, great chapter.

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I've been wanting to read the chapter since it was uploaded but it was a really tough week ;_;

Have to say, I didn't really feel much for Caitriona in the previous chapter so I didn't expect to feel so bad for her now. The poor lady might've been Eve's biggest ally and got it really bad. It was so satisfying to see her trying to get her master to see Eve, yet it was so sad... At least she's safe, I suppose. By the way, I have a bit of trouble picturing her, I wonder how old she's supposed to be.

As for Ventris, seeing him acting so shaken... The who guy stood up to a vampire with almost total composure was acting nervous. That gets to show how much he actually felt for her daughter, and that the fear and hate towards vampires took priority, making killing her the only viable option. At least that's what I want to think, that even if she was an heiress for the most part, some love as there. It could've been the frustration of losing his heiress but, that's even sadder...  I wonder if he was looking for any other alternatives all this time or just stalling the inevitable...

Is really a world without any intention of communication within species. Seeing Eve's wonderful recuperation, it makes you wonder how much more could be done if all species worked together. I also think of how much everything could've changed if the vampire had managed to take Eve under his wings.

And of course, Eveline is the one that had it the worst. Left in the dark about her current condition. Gradually being separated from other human's contact. Every day being treated more like a best instead of a human. And finally being betrayed by her own family... Man, why did it have to be so sad ;_; And depending on how much Naija knew about vampires, the poor girl might have had to learn the down of her conditions by painful tray an error, just as when trying to enter that building in this chapter.

And seeing Naija in action is nice, she strikes as someone with a big heart from the start. Also, must feel nice to be embraced by a fluffy tail.

As some other have pointed, I was curious about Eve's past length. It's been great of course but having these much screen time feels as if she's on a protagonist level higher than the other girls. Not that there's anything wrong with that if that's the aim. N-not that I'm saying I want some more insight on Casey or anything...

Excellent chapter.

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