I wasn't expecting a new chapter this early, what a nice surprise!

I like the new kind relationship that Kai and Claire have now. The teasing between both of them does indeed makes them look like sisters. I specially enjoyed the idea of Kai being embarassed, the fact that it was because of Claire who's still the tiny one here makes it even more hilarious and arousing, I'm all in for embarrassing situations in this kind of stories.

And talking about arousing, I think that would be one of the bests words to describe the pheromone situation that comes next, the other word being cute. I wasn't expecting more smell related situations after Kai so it caught me off my guard. The way Calire reacted to the whole thing was adorable and contrasted good with the dominance of the twins, they do a pretty nice trio.

Moving on, Claire's "flashback" was well done, it showed the reason for her issues on love related problems and also the reason why she blocked some of her memories. At first her past might not seem as powerful as Kat's or some of the girls, but it was still heartbreaking. Being rejected in that way by someone who you thought as a friend and wanted to be more than that, being despised by your likes in love can cause more damage than it seems at first sight. While it was a harsh way to face the problem, I think the twin did well here, I also believe that problems like this one should be faced directly if after all this time the issue haven't been solved at all.

Anyway, glad that Claire finally could overcome her problem and is in her way to love again, she was really lucky to fin the twins. Well, the three of them were since as they showed her they have really strong feelings for her. The part with them praising the tiny and Claire acting embarrassed because of it drew a dumb smile to my face as well as a silly giggling, in the good way of course. Then with finally get an encounter with Claire's willingly doing it. Seeing the twins blushing again, well mostly one of them, was also a nice treat. I think this scene was well descripted and with a nice pacing.

Getting to the next sad part, I found this one more crushing than Claire's. Both the twins acting in a way full of insecurities contrary to their usual prideful and elegant stance, is quite shocking. The thing they did, I do undertand their reasoning and since I see them still as children, superpowers aside, I think that they are allowed to be forgiven to it, mostly because of how they blame themselves for it and suffer because of that. Then again, that should be a decision for the characters, whether the other girls forgive them for them (which seems they already did, except maybe Lily) and if they'll accept that fogiveness only time will tell (and you the author, ofc). By the way, when reading what they did with Lily the first thing that I had in my mind at the moment was whether they made her so powerful so that the twins could stop her should anything happen or not.

Getting to the ending, at the very least it seem like Lily won't be finishing Calire off instantly, either because she has some hope after seeing that the tiny won over Kai or because she wants her to suffer the most I'll have to wait to see. She also might've been moved by the twin's tears, that should be a really shocking sight. At least, seeing as she almost killed her back then a couple of chapters ago, I suppose this is some kind a progress.

As for the twins "greater plan" I don't really have idea. I thought for a moment that they might want to try and model the "monsters" minds after Claire's but after reading this chapter I thing that's highly unlikely, seeing as how special and unique they believe Claire is and how they should be reluctant to tamper with someones mind again, though this might not hold true for monsters and only for innocents. I felt somehow "cockblocked" by Claire when she stopped the twins from talking right at the last minute ;_;

Anyway, really nice chapter, as always looking forward to the next one, take your time with it. Hope this wasn't to long.

PS: Had to delete and post again because forgot the rating, my bad.

I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon, nice!

Now is time for my favorite girl, Kai. It seems the power that the twins gave her isn't useful only for defending againts strangers but also for "contributing to the twins". I'm intrigued by her behavior and hope to know soon the reason for it, also curious about her scent.

There's now the thing with Lily, it seems only the twin see her as a friend and maybe Kai, though I'm not really sure about the last. Also the twin's plan which is still a mistery is popping up more in the dialogue recently.

And it seems the twins had a "talk" with May about the ways shen handles the tinies, kind of amusing to see them flustered, even if just a bit.

Anyway, good chapter, really looking forward to the next one.

Another good chapter. It's nice to have some time with the twins before the next girl and also quite interesting see how different they can make Kat's cat bath idea.

What is the twins' great plan that hey have for Claire and what kind of "modifications" the have made to the other girls is something I'm looking forward to see.

Anyway, things are looking good for the next chapter

It's really nice that we have time for all of the girls. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Great chapter, I hope we get to see more of Kai since she's my favorite now, anything with sweat, smell, nose or something tomboy-ish would be fine with me. Unaware is also pretty good.

Of course I'm also looking forward to what you have prepared for the other girls. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Excellent job on this one. I found the teasing in the dialogues really well done as well as the descriptions of the situation, specifically the feet part. The butt portion might be a little lacking compared to that one, although still pretty damn good. I guess that's understable since it's not the focus in that scene. Also, I loved the personalities of the characters, specially Alice's.

By the way, I think there's a couple of lines in which you inverted the Alice's and Ana's names in the middle of the story.

A complete fan of this kind of scenario, hopefully there will be more of Alice in the last part but I'm sure it will be a good one regardless.

Really nice start and is a good little twist to know that the main girl enjoys being bullied like that, also good to know that there's some unaware coming.

I'll be looking forward to see the different ways in which Kelsey bullies a normal size girl and a tiny girl. If they're in some way similar to the examples you wrote in the chapter, then I'll certainly enjoy it.

Just finished reading all the chapters. This is a really good story and I'm so happy to find lots of things that I really like such as armpit, odor, sweat and soon butt content. I'm particularly happy that the last one is happening with Faith too, as she's my favorite. Any hope for some armpit content with her in the future?

I feel quite bad for James and would be a lot better if he indeed enjoyed, hopefully he will get to make them understand his true feelings someday. Maybe he can get to enjoy it at some point or get to some agreement with them in the future ;)

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Yu is pure love! I fear she will make it more difficult for me to choose a favorite now since I was already having enough trouble. I liked doppels a lot already but this girl was just totally adorable.

Though, lots of mystery surrounds her. I can't conclude too much from the current chapter but it does seem like a really tragic past. Also, I wonder why she's helping Abby. Maybe she looks like her previous mate or something similar? Or maybe she's allied with Eve in some way. I suppose it should be really important since she's going through a lot for the tiny. Did she have some plan in case Abby didn't allow her to get her energy...? It's also uncertain for me if the other girls know about her.

Also, very interesting and mysterious way for her to collect energy. I wonder if Yu was just with her eyes closed or maybe took a different form...? Also from I can gather I think she vored Abby in some way to extract even her saliva or something similar to that.

On that note, is she really healed? I hope she's not just transforming and fooling Abby into believing she is indeed alright now...

Anyway, interesting chapter. Really does makes me want to know more about Yu in different ways. Though I also wonder what's going on on Ebon's side.. Whichever you're doing next, I'm sure it'll be interesting too.

As for the secrets, I don't know. Feels a bit frustrating not being able to guess some stuff in a bit. Though, if related to the imgur, maybe "..."? You might understand if so.

See ya~

The weekend is here and that means free time!

Cute act between the twins, Casey and Abby. Nice to have more background about Amy, I wonder when we'll get to hear what happened that night since that info seems quite limited. Also, who would have thought that Amy wasn't on the dumb side and actually was pretty intelligent for her species standard lol.

I didn't expect Ebon here at all, to be honest. It was a nice action scene, is pretty cool that Casey now was more useful when facing off the dragon, hopefully, she's not too hurt... Same with the twins, they had quite nice moments to shine on this one. Though, Ebon keeps showing she's a beast. Hope Emma gets better soon...

Now, I wonder if Eve knows Abby is safe. Ebon's health might depend on that. Also, what measures will take the vampire about Ebon. The option to kill her is there of course and she should be really mad right now but she knows that would upset her little Abby. Maybe she'll hurt her to a point she can move? Shrinking her doesn't really seem to be an option but I have to say it would be funny to have a tiny Ebon, maybe being captive by Poppy.

About the next girl, I'm unsure about her species but her powers seem pretty cool. I feel a bit frustrated that I forgot about her previous appearance in chapter 8... For the one in chapter 13, I have to agree that it might be when Abby was saved from the flames. I wouldn't have noticed if I didn't read your comments though. Eager to see what happens to her.

Also, very cute how Casey kept calling Abby her storeen.

See ya~