A man wakes up one morning to discover he has shrunk down to a few inches tall. Her wife must go to work so she leaves him in charge of her mother. This scares him a bit.
Seems to be going good for now. I don't usually have interest in females that old but this one got my attention. Pretty nice.
Any plans with Rosie?
I guess Rosie is coming back from school in the 4th chapter. And may be with some friend.
An 18 year old sister finds herself shrinking and must live through the embarressing trauma of shrinking smaller then her 15 year old, 12 year old, 8 year old and finally two year old sisters. suddenly she isn't the dominate one in the house and her mother just doesn't care. Can she survive her sisters as they realize the upper hand they have?
Keep the great work man, I love all your stories.
About what should be next, I will be happy with anything butt related.
With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.
A really good chapter. Hope you continue it soon. The only way I can see Stacy getting out of this would be making Rebecca puke.
I had like to see more of Rebecca playing with Kate.
A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.
Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.
Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.
Glad to see you back, I hope you also continue your other stories.
This is the story of a 20 year old guy named Paul. After falling vicitm to his Sister's black magic, Paul begins his descent into the world of feet.
Man, this story is great. I mean, I'm not into feet but I still like it a lot. 10/10.
When Lucy takes on a job with her team to stop a Dark Guild headed towards Magnolia things take on a turn for the worst when she's hit with some kind of strange magic.
Lucky for her Gemini know's what to do about it!
Anime Story - Fairy Tail
If you don't like anime this story is not for you.
This is a pretty good story, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
I'd really like to see something with Mavis. Especially something with sweat, butt, feet and armpits. Hope you consider it.
Will definitely consider it, am a huge fan of Mavis and i think i will enjoy writing about her. Thank you for your review
I just wanted to tell you that I'm really grateful that you listened to my request.
Sadly I can't read it that best way right know because of my roommates so I had to stop just before the good part but I will do it when I find the chance.
Thanks again.
Your quiet welcome, It's a pleasure and an honor to write for fans and i thank you for taking your time to review even under your circumstances :)
Fanfiction with shrinking. Characters are Cyan and Retoree from the anime SHOW BY ROCK!! Minor appearance of Chuchu and Moa from the same series.
Really good story, nice to see some content from this show.
Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.
Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.
D'awww, there's nothing more romantic than a room full of flying objects while someone declares their love~
No but seriously I found that part really cute. It's a really nice ending. Claire realizing the twins' true feelings and having a happy finale with them and the other girls, plus Kat's new addition to her family.
I'm eager to read the last part, still, take your time with it and have it done when you thing it's right.
Thanks for writing this story.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it KentaRyu. I'll probably have it up soon, but yeah. I need to be a little careful. There was a lot of information i had in mind to put in the story but i ended up cutting it down the line so i need to tie up any loose ends i may have left open.
It's the warmest day of the summer, the water company cut the supply for the whole city because of an emergency and now I see this final chapter uploaded to make my day.
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It was such a beautiful ending, Claire finally got to a point in her life in which she can have real happiness and a family that won't betray her, and so did the other girls. The relationship she has with them is sooo adorable, specially with the twins. I'm sure she can keep them through the good path. I hope only the best for them.
It was a really touching story, reading about Claire and the girls, facing their problems, being betrayed, gaining trust in each other, themselves and overcoming themselves, becoming a better person. It's quite easy to make me cry with fiction but not so much to make me care for the characters as much as I did for these girls. Until now my favorite is still Kai but I got attached to all of them. It's a bit sad not to see more of the girls at least for the time being but I think the ending gave them enough closure.
Thanks again for writing this and thanks to Franchise Writer for helping you. I'll be reading your next story too when you get to it. Take care.
Thank you KentaRyu for sticking with me till the very end. I've seen your reviews from day one, and you were one of the people who i got excited to see every time i posted a chapter. Thank you for always leaving me something to read. It really does make the world to a writer when we can see what people think of our work. and i'm glad to know my story made you feel the way it did.
I look foward to seeing what you think of whats to come. Thank you for supporting me. :)
It feels good to see stuff fall into place now with most, if not all, of the past revealed. I can see a nice constrast between the twins' attitude towards their friends before and now, saying things like "you must listen and follow us to the tee. If we say jump, you jump" in the past, which aren't exactly the most friendly words. It seems the twins have changed quite some in this time, for good I think.
What Claire and the other girls need now is time to process all this new information and see exactly how the twins have changed their life, specially Claire. Hopefully they can understand their reasons and maybe get to a good point in their relationship, I'm looking forward to see how all of this develops.
Now, sorry if this has been told before and I forgot about it but, Lily's wish hasn't been revealed yet, right? What about Lily's commentary on her and Claire being more similar than the older one thinks, was that because of both being part of the twins' scheme?
Great job as always.
You're always quick to jump to conclusions, and most of them time their spot on lol. On regards to Lily's hidden wish, it's not just hers. The Twins had each of the girls tell them their deepest desires, and wishes. And each girl gave them one. What they are, will be revealed next chapter. I can't give away everything now can I? ~
Thank you for the review KentaRyu, i always look foward to reading yours. You read deeper then most and that excites me XD
As for Lily's commintary however, it was more that instead of Claire being just any other adult, she was like her. She was hurt, had been hurt. She was abused. She tried to run away. And... other, incidents that haven't fully been confirmed just yet. Make no mistakes, all the girls still have a lot that had happened in their past that hasn't been revealed yet. Whether it all eventually will be or i leave it up to the readers to figure out is still...
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Again, that was fast. It hasn't really been long since my last message.
For the twins even after getting all that knowledge to get to experience the human narute again, and see that that kind of behavior isn't just a limited case like with his father but a most frequent thing than we would like it to be should be quite shocking, of course it would make them doubt their effort. Though it's admirable that they still wanted to follow with their objective, even if not by the best means.
It was also quite interesting story to see the first interaction between the twins and Claire, is was really eager while reading. Sadly it wasn't in the best moment for them. Or maybe it was? Since it seems that'll open a oportunity for them to interact much more than they would on a regular situation.
The part in which Claire thought they finally would talk to her, when they were just leaving, that was quite sad for me.
Keep up the good work.
the World on the outside can be shiny and beautiful but when you see the hidden parts beneath it can get ugly. I was hoping this chapter displayed that, and showed that the twins weren't above playing by thier rules... even if it meant stopping the Monsters. As for claire coming int, it was a fateful moment which i hope i displayed properly. I'm glad you liked it and i'm working on the next chapter now. I hope to see what you think on the next one. KentaRyu!
I'm sorry to hear that, I meant to write a review sooner but was really tight on time there, though it seems like more people have left their impression since the last time, nice.
Moving on this chapter, I misinterpreted the last chapter and thought that Amelia was able to hear what happened in that memory, seems ike it wasn't like that. Is nice that at this point everything fell into place and now the family seems to be closer than ever, and that's really good, even inf the way until that point was really painful. Really well done.
I'm eager to finally now about the plan next time.
Thank you Kenta, i'm sorry if i gave off the impression i did. The Twins arn't as powerful as they currently are now. In the past, it was trial and error, as seen by Alexis showing her mother their memories. A new chapter should be coming up soon, so thank you for reviewing, you've consitantly done so and that really makes me feel better about my writing. I can't wait to show you all whats to ocme. the twins story isn't over yet.
Finally I could get free time to do some reading! It's been a while, really.
I'm really interested in the twins' past and how it'll go from here, since it seems far from over, and how will this end up with them meeting Claire.
It's really sad how it ended for them at this point since they didn't really have much of an option after discovering what Tom was trying to do with Amelia. Hopefully she can think this calmer later, though, what she did seems like a natural first reaction no matter how painful that sounds.
Well, that was a long one.
Good job writing Claire's past. She had such a terrible time, one can see where her strength when confronting the girls' problems come from. But, if this was just the calm before the storm, I can't even imagine what is to come.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, since it seems it'll be ful, of revelations.
Yah, i was worried it was to long. I knew where to go with this chapter but i kept having second doubts on how to play it out. It by far was the most taxing to write, but, i think it turned out good :)
As for whats to come... yeah, i shouldn't even hint at it. I think you'll be surprised my friend.
Hope to post again soon, but, it might be a bit. please be patiant with me >.<
New chapter, nice.
I found the start quite cute, with the drooling scene and Kat and Lily's interaction.
Lily's warning gave me a bit to think about so I was relieved to confirm again at the next scene that the twin's love for Claire is completely real. I still got no idea about their plan nor at what happened before the story began but as long as their care for the worker is real I think everything will work out, somehow.
I'm also happy to see that the twins gave the first step in the path to reconciliate with Lily. It might take a while but the hope is still there.
And not much to say about the final part. The little talk with Claire and the other three girls was heartwarming, and with everyone reunited again, it's time to reveal a bit more of the truth, looking forward to that.
I'm glad you liked it KentaRyu, and i will confirm, the Twins do in fact love Claire, that wasnt my intention of misguiding people with Lily's words :(
This was a relaxing chapter, compared to the last ones, not that there's anything bad with it, I think it's good to have some peace after the storm.
I'm happy to see that Lily is starting to get more control over herself and some calm, hopefully is just the start of the road for a more peaceful life. She also was adorable in this chapter, couldn't avoid being charmed by the little one.
Kat too was a nice surprise in here, she's also making some progress on her own, being able to befriend Lily like that. The two of the make a really cute and funny duo. Is also nice that she was able to see Claire now, should've been a huge relief for her after their last encounter and knowing that the '´pretty lady' was going to spend the night with Lily.
And of course the last scene with the shrinking was adorable, surely Claire is getting to enjoy this more since there's not imminent danger for now.
Looking forward to the next one, the questions about Claire and her past keep piling up and that just makes me more interested.
I'm glad i can keep you intrigued KentaRyu, things will seem to clear in the upcoming chapters but i hope for now you'll be patiant with me xD
Once again thank your for your review, it means the world to me to know your thoughts on the events going on. :)
I actually meant not done with Claire yet. I think the reason why Lily said she's like her will be another cause of sorrow for the poor worker.
Ahh, well i can safely say without any spoiling, we are most certainly not done, her past has yet to be truly discovered and with the upcoming chapters you'll soon find out just why that is.
Well, that was fast. I didn't believe it when I saw the next chapter was up.
This chapter was really good and made a lot of progress with Lily's character. We get to see again more of the extent of her powers as well as most of her past. Lily's life is really painful. In the last chapter it was already pretty bad but this one took it to a completely different scale. I hope she can manage to find some peace and happiness soon, maybe with Claire's help.
Claire finally managed to make some progress with Lily in her own way, though this time she almost costed it her life in the process. There was a little hint from Lily there about Claire's past, which makes me think we aren't done with her either.
By the way, I don't think the ending of the last previous chapter was bad at all.
Thank you KentaRyu, i appreciate that a lot xD I was really worried i pissed some people off with it.
As for us being done with Lily, i'd say we're far from it. That being said, we arn't truly done with any of the girls just yet. Many things still haven't been explained and i'm hoping you stick around to see what will, and what won't be revealed next chapter :)
Oh, of course I'll stay around, I loved the chapter.
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