Penname: Truegamr5 [Contact] Real name: John Star
Member Since: September 07 2013
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Summary:

my first story, it will follow jack after he is shrunk to the size of an ant in the middle of his high school.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2986 Read Count: 37301
[Report This] Published: April 01 2014 Updated: May 31 2014
Reviewer: Truegamr5 Signed
Date: April 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: the beginning

The story looks really promising,  but really, your grammer needs to improve. It's the little things really like proper capitalization and paragraphs. Other than that good story. 



Author's Response:

sorry i am using MS word to type the next chapter so it should be a little better.

Summary:

Tucker Martel's life is in tatters but all that turns around when he meets a very gentle giantess. (Re-write of popular writing.com story)


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Big Friendly Giantess
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327990 Read Count: 476340
[Report This] Published: April 19 2014 Updated: October 23 2014
Reviewer: Truegamr5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beginnings

I loved this Story on writing.com, good to see someone's rewriting it here. :D