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Underwhere by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Adam tries to get his girlfriend a gift that neither of them will forget


Categories: Humiliation, Object, Unaware, Butt, Couples, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4473 Read Count: 25863
[Report This] Published: June 21 2016 Updated: June 21 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfect. There's always room for more unaware transformation stories.

Summary:

A shrunken man tries to escape from a female scientist and her 12-year-old niece


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2709 Read Count: 7105
[Report This] Published: June 22 2016 Updated: June 22 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 22 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd do anything for this to get a continuation.



Author's Response:

I plan on turning this into a comic book, after I do I might make a sequel to this, and this version of the story will be chapter one. I'll post it at deviantART

Summary:

Alpha jock Biff is denuded and helpless in the clutches of his sister's friends.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7286 Read Count: 24101
[Report This] Published: July 06 2016 Updated: March 07 2018
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: July 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Tormentor

Really good so far! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I really should pick this up again. I remember enjoying it, I had the seating chart all laid out... one of those many adventures enthusiastically started and dropped for no good reason.

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 

Drake Dobson stumbles onto a strange object that his best friend has found. Unfortunately for Drake, the object was not so user friendly to him.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Unaware, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71285 Read Count: 492668
[Report This] Published: July 07 2016 Updated: December 30 2017
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: August 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Wake up bro!

Unaware asshole entrapment, my absolute favourite. Hope he has another chapter in there (^-^)



Author's Response:

Oh he most definitely will. I plan on keeping him undiscovered longer than any of the rest of the times. 

Summary:

Just as a heads up before you begin reading: this is a primarily feet centered story. If you like feet, then you're in luck. But if you don't really like it, then there won't be much more for you. Sorry!

Also, I've got a Twitter account, so follow me there if you want immediate updates on when I upload new chapters for my stories!

https://twitter.com/sheograth10

I'm also on Discord. Feel free to message me there @Sheograth10 #5326 if you want to chat or have any questions about my stories. I'm pretty active over there.

 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Shrunk at College
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48858 Read Count: 250974
[Report This] Published: July 18 2016 Updated: March 13 2017
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: July 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: 2nd Floor of the Library (Story Start)

Loving the amount of unaware sweat and sock interaction. Personally I'm hoping for some getting trapped between toes/in toejam in the future!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm not sure I understand the trapped between toes part of your request/suggestion though. I put a decent amount of that already. Maybe you could clarify that a bit more for me, if you don't mind?

And I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'll try and keep your ideas in mind for the future.

Summary:

James loves his life. Though, one day, his best friend, Yuna, and his sister, Faith, get convinced he is a perverted masochist. Will he manage to prove them wrong ? Will they let him ? 


Categories: Butt, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20434 Read Count: 128507
[Report This] Published: August 07 2016 Updated: September 29 2018
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Yuna

Really good. I'd be really happy to see more foot stuff, preferable with a focus on sweat and toe-jam etc), and some butt stuff. I was very glad to see armpit content, so thanks for that! Navel content is really rare, and I think that'd fit well - maybe the girls could do some sit-ups along with their jogging, haha ^^

Apart from that, just keep going as you are. You're doing a great job. My personal resuest would be to have a chapter or two where the protagonist is even smaller, maybe <1mm.



Author's Response:

Hey there! 
Thanks a lot for the review!

There will be more of foot content, do not worry! Although our dear giantesses will now start using other parts of their body, it does not mean this will be the end of foot torture :)

As for navel content and getting James <1mm, I'm sorry but I probably won't be able to write anything of that sort. Indeed, those are a not fetishes I'm familiar with, and me trying to do so would result in failure.  Hopefully, that's all right with you, and I'll manage to keep you interested in the story with what's to come!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: October 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Yuna

Re: below:

No problem. Thanks for the response. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'll always answer any review I receive, I think that's the least I can do to thanks people who take their time to share their opinion and ideas with me! 
I'll do my best, thanks! 

Summary:

A man is shrunk in a convenience store and the girl who works there offers to help him. But when a customer comes in, his luck takes a turn... 


Categories: Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3591 Read Count: 13126
[Report This] Published: August 14 2016 Updated: August 14 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was superb!

Summary:

I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11143 Read Count: 168691
[Report This] Published: September 06 2016 Updated: November 10 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: September 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

Love the concept! As another commenter said, different areaa would be great. A mixture of uncaring and unaware, and armpit, navel, nose, ear, stuff, along with the usual staples for feet (toenails would be interesting) and lady garden, and of course for me, a healthy dosage of ass and asshole action!



Author's Response:

I plan to explore several areas on these lovely ladies before the story is over. This is definitely a body exploration story and we are going to see a lot of things! I certainly plan to hit neglected parts too. I too am an ass man so we are going to see that too, of course ;)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

This is already one of my favorite stories here. Your descriptions are great, and having him so tiny and having to subsist on her bodily fluids erc is amazing. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks! There are going to be plenty of other fluids for the lil guy to interact with too ;)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

For me, ending up elsewhere on Mei's body would be cool. Maybe have him stay the night in the mouth, then be placed somewhere during morning fun.



Author's Response:

He'll be getting some more mouth fun eventually, don't worry about that ;) 

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: November 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

I agree with the reviewer below on armpit and navel action! i'd add a few of my own with:

In ear (too small to be heard, overpowered by the tiny hairs and tiny amounts of wax)

In nose (small enough to be trapped against the walls, too small to be really felt)

Asshole (Trapped in wrinkles - truly insignificant)

Summary:

Loke learns about some strange words that when used by other people will shrink him down. Together with new friends and enemies he is forced to find out what being shrunk means...


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22694 Read Count: 58071
[Report This] Published: September 23 2016 Updated: October 01 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Really good! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: September 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I happen to agree with FTFeet below. Personally I have no interest in stories that try to be novels. Lots of action, interesting and varied situations, detailed descriptions, and fun characters - that's what matters to me.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to live up to these criterias as good as I can :)

Himeko by Franchise Writer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Bullied, humiliated, and tortured, Himeko and her sister live alone, their parents always away on business as their constantly harassed by other schoolmates. That all changes however when Himeko soon learns of her mothers origins, and what the future soon holds for her and her younger sister.


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9934 Read Count: 10380
[Report This] Published: October 05 2016 Updated: October 05 2016
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Himeko

Good stuff. Butts, entrapment, sisters, excellent. I'd be interested in reading more.



Author's Response:

Well TechniMIND is planning on rebooting his story so i'd say check it out. I think this as far as it will go for me :)

Summary:

A girl wakes up, unsure of where she is or how she got there. However, she soon realizes that she's not as big as she used to be.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52510 Read Count: 372598
[Report This] Published: October 09 2016 Updated: April 13 2017
Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

That. Was. Amazing.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

More brilliant work. Your story has combined the best of aware and unaware to make a fantastic read. My thoughts are with you and your family. All the best, be strong.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

If it's to end, I'd personally love for Sara to be reduced to a miniscule dust scale and condemned to spend the rest of her time on either Jeanne or an unaware Krystal's feet or asshole, gradually being forgotten about. Just my 2 cents. :)



Author's Response: Not sure I'll have her shrink below 1/2 inch, as this is going to be a limitation of the amulet in future stories. But an unaware death at Krystal's hand might be fun...

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

My suggestions would be:

Toenail cleaning/entrapment

Navel entrapment (the girls are active, so sit-ups?)

More unaware asshole stuff

Somethink with urine (maybe even urethra insertion)

 

Re:the death vs captivity thing, the lattee would be preferable by far. If you have somethink you enjoy playing with, you wouldn't get rid of it.



Author's Response: Toenail - maybe. At Sara's size it's not really practical, but then again, she IS Jeanne's slave. Navel - Oooh! That's a unique one, I definitely will see if that one fits in somewhere. Ass - That's already in the works. Think Sara tied to one of Krystal's toys. Urine - I'm not sure that will end up in this story. Most likely, I'll end up doing a more violent/nasty story that would include it, among others.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed
Date: November 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

Superb! Having her be trapped in there all day is amazing. Can't wait for more!