Penname: LaurieLuv [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 23 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

This is a blatant pseudonym.


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Summary:

After the world was invaded by a giant race,humans were forced to survive scavanger their houses and fight these monstruosities,that mistaken them as merely ants.

However,when a young soldier enters in the battle,he lights a small flame of hope in the hearts of the brave population.


Categories: Maternal, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1768 Read Count: 13663
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 18 2014
Reviewer: LaurieLuv Signed
Date: June 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Since you're imploring for criticism, I figure I can help. It's good to see that someone is willing to improve. I've copied your text into a google document and will be editing and commenting as I get the time to work on it.

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19aQRNQ3VHZesBTCxwYaBKeySjqw4qXub8ZOYmo50fq4/edit#

 

I've left comments open on it for viewers if you'd like to respond, or you can always just email me. ^^