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Parental Myrmidon by Invisible Ink Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

A rebellious girl ends up with the upper hand when her parents end up shrunk.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25141 Read Count: 574690
[Report This] Published: June 07 2010 Updated: August 23 2012
Reviewer: Takomaru Signed
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Before you read my review know that I am in no way trying to flatter you, this is my honest opinion:

 

 

 

     Your story is by far the best giantess story I have read. I even credit this as the reason I have stayed into this genre. I came across it about two years ago, and I believe it was one of the first that I opened on this website. In one sitting I found myself finishing the most recent chapter (which was chapter 12 at the time) and I as already looking forward to the next.

 

     I appreciate all of the effort you have put forth into this story despite the fact that I imagine you have little obligation to do so. Parental Myrmidon is a major highlight in the website and a privilege to all the members in this community. Thank you for writing this story. Thank you for submitting this story.

 

     I hope that you find inspiration to continue and complete this story with many chapters inbetween. Whether or not that you do, I will happily continue to check on and reread the work that you have already donated to us.

Sister's Revenge by Shrunken Mazerunner Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Brad is an avarage 17 year old that lives with his 13 year old sister Ann, 19 year old sister Suzy, and his mother. One night, while Brad is watching TV, he hears a noise out side his window. When we goes to check it out he is flashed with a bright light and gets knocked out. When he comes to, he finds himself only six inches tall. The only help is Ann, but will she help or will she subject Brad to the Sister's Revenge?

 

I will not be adding any more to this story because it is beyond saving. Please enjoy what it does contain.


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3861 Read Count: 66725
[Report This] Published: February 25 2014 Updated: March 06 2014
Reviewer: Takomaru Signed
Date: February 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Big Shrink

I really like this story! It has a lot of action and the way that you articulate the main character's thoughts makes the story seem very real, like when he could smell hampsters haha. I can tell that you are a very visual writer.

I could be wrong, but I feel like the 13 year old sister acts a bit old for her age. She doesnt seem at all shy about her sexuality and uses dirty language as if she was experienced. Maybe 16 would be a more appropriate age?... With that being said, I do think that she is a fun character and the way that you portray her is very over the top and exciting. Cant wait to meet the rest of the family!! Keep writing!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, i,m still new so and advice/ critics you can offer will be a great help. Her acting experienced was what I was aiming for, have see kids now a days. Oh and berfore you meet the family you have to meet her freinds right? ;) hint hint wink wink nudge nudge

A New Perspective by Darien Fawkes Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Peter Craft wakes up in the room of his best friend only to find he's now two inches tall. See through his eyes as Peter lives out some of his deepest fantasies, while also learning the reality behind being a shrunken man living with an actual giantess.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52749 Read Count: 295927
[Report This] Published: May 28 2014 Updated: August 16 2014
Reviewer: Takomaru Signed
Date: May 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really liking your story!

I can see that you intend to make the plot and characters as realistic as possible and you are doing a great job at it! It's very refreshing for me to read a story where the main character is shrunk and held in care by a friend and not by a sex crazed giantess (not that I dont enjoy that.) Although, I hope that you continue writing this story with an amosphere similar to what you've shown thus far.

P.S. Mutual love and romance would be a much better route than making his female friend a dominatrix, in my opinion.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

And Emily isn't really a dominatrix, she's Peter's best friend. Of course she's going to take care of him but she's also going to tease him a little. Nothing sexual, just something a normal friend would do.

Lisa by twentythirty Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: I don't know what to say... I think the best way of telling you the story is to, well, tell you the story. I still can't quite believe it myself.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3545 Read Count: 7880
[Report This] Published: September 23 2014 Updated: September 23 2014
Reviewer: Takomaru Signed
Date: September 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Lisa

I really enjoyed this story! It felt extremely real from beginning to end! To be totally truthful, at one point I forgot that I was reading a story and not actually in it. Partially because I had similar experiences as this student when I was in school. Bravo! I hope to see more.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.