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Summary:

James has been trapped in the world inside the Cardboard Box for as long as he remembers. Ana is a wicked goddess that likes to play with her tiny slaves.


Categories: Violent, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 877 Read Count: 2058
[Report This] Published: March 15 2022 Updated: March 15 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A very good start.

Summary:

In Felarya many tinies are hunted, captured and sold as slaves, sex toys or food. At the rate that these acts are happening, their existence is threatened. Is there any hope for these beings?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39404 Read Count: 7725
[Report This] Published: March 17 2022 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue part I: The Despicable Neko

This is a very good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks man

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue part II: Jon

This is pretty good. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it

Colossal by StarShot Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

With Colossal VR, Emily is able to bring her sizey fantasies to life, in ways she never could have imagined…

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this story contains destruction, depictions of simulated violence, female masturbation, and references to YEG neighbourhoods. This is a story commission! 


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9098 Read Count: 3030
[Report This] Published: March 19 2022 Updated: March 19 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Colossal VR

Very good.

Imzadi by The Lurkmeister Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A holodeck malfunction on the USS Enterprise changes the lives of a pair of Starfleet officers forever.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34096 Read Count: 38996
[Report This] Published: March 26 2022 Updated: May 17 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Tale of Two Holodecks

Not enough Star Trek stories on the site. 

This was good!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks! I’m glad you liked it 

Summary:

A typical suburban mother named Kristen lives her life as a busy and active woman, caring friend to others, and loving mom, but she also keeps dark secrets away from her young daughter until she grows up, the hidden mysteries locked behind a pair of doors in their picturesque suburbia home. 

Behind those doors, Kristen lives her other life as a judicious goddess ruling over millions of tiny micro people who find themselves existing in her household, occupying bustling micro cites and lands, holding the fate and future of the micros within her hands and at the whim of her absolute power.  


Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  This story will not contain incestual or underage sexual content.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 219186 Read Count: 231181
[Report This] Published: April 08 2022 Updated: April 25 2024
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess

Good so far, can’t wait to see where it goes!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  hopefully in a good direction.  

Summary:

A story about humanity's horrific fate upon being discovered by an advanced alien civilization that stands miles tall.

or

A story about a girl getting her first part time job, but the shop owner is breeding these tiny human things in the backroom and it's kinda grossing her out.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Entrapment, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20471 Read Count: 35753
[Report This] Published: April 15 2022 Updated: April 26 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Preparations

Well thats nice if her. 

Welcome to Hell! by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51] New!
Summary:

Aaron Smith died after being hit by a truck, due to a cosmic mistake he accidentally ends up in hell where a sexy giant demon has been assigned to torment him. Luckily she believes him when he says he's innocent, but even if she won't torture him now, where do they go from here?

A silly and comedic story about a man getting sent to the wrong afterlife, and a giant demon trying to make it up to him.


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78456 Read Count: 56977
[Report This] Published: April 21 2022 Updated: May 01 2024
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 Welcome to Hell

This was highly amusing. 

And you should totally do more giantess in tiny girl stuff. 


And here is a series for mythology, and several other afterlives : https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLDb22nlVXGgeoPb-HBWwzEeoAwDvckSrC. 

Bonus, Trope talk that also there and is very good. 



Author's Response: Thanks, I know I said one shot but I might come back to this with othrt afterlife drama at some point.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2: Divine Intervention

You know there could be some kind of sharing deal, he stays in heaven, but gets to visit hell or let Cydea visit. Or thanks to something like quantum entanglement and superposition, et him be in both simultaneously. 

Besides also highlighting that the auto-reap system needs tweaking or fixing. That or maybe have two or more of them running so that several have to be in agreement to make it go thought, simple enough error correction. 

Plus Arron could try out with Gabriella for a bit, let him also know what heaven is like, transfer doesn’t have to happen all at once. 


Otherwise, good chapter!



Author's Response:

Angels tend to be pretty absolutist and Heaven and Hell aren't on the best of terms, still they might find some common ground before the end.

Summary:

Our Hero, Ace, gets isekai'd into another world to have epic adventures, complete with amazing powers. The only cost is that he's about 2-3 inches. He will gladly make that trade. Being tiny is absolutely worth it if it means questing and fighting the powers of evil instead of being stuck on earth and having to continue his boring life. 

He's defeated The Demon King, only for the magical green-haired-anime-elf-princess, Silvia to reveal that their adventures are far from done and that was only the first and by far the weakest of the seven Demon Kings and that above them is the Demon Empress. They've started a chain reaction and now have to either prevent more Demon Kings from coming from the underworld or kill them.


As their adventure continues, they will be joined by other party members(awesome and unique waifus with their own personalities and hair colors) in their quests.


Rating and tags will be updated as it continues.  




Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3031 Read Count: 3201
[Report This] Published: May 17 2022 Updated: May 17 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2023 Title: Chapter 1: A Hero's Epic Beginning

I really hope it can continue, cause there just aren’t enough attempts at a size Isekai. 

Theres exploring the magic system and trying to exploit it, learning about thats out there and discovering more. On top of the size interactions. 



Author's Response:

I definitely plan to continue. Chapter 2 will be the next thing I put out, which will hopefully be soon. I have an outline for it in my head. I definitely do want to think a lot more about the magic system and work on character relationships as our group grows. If you have any particular ideas for the magic system I'd love to hear them.

Summary: Feature

A young, seventeen-year-old giantess is forced to serve as an executioner for an evil lord. However, it does not fit her gentle nature. Will she continue to conform?

If needed new tags will be added in the process.

It seems like I have not really expressed my joy for the fact that the story has joined the 'Featured' section here, so having found some spare time, I decided to correct the many orthographical errors to make your reading experience more pleasurable. 

It's one of my first stories, and I never expected it to be acknowledged in this way, it really means a lot to me! Also: Thank you all for reading and reviewing!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18970 Read Count: 73847
[Report This] Published: June 03 2022 Updated: July 21 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Execution

Good start.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Summary:

Alison is just a normal mini. Lived with her mini family, went to mini school, even had a part time job at one of the stores that she frequented. All in her town, which was exclusively minis. But with college soon approaching, Alison wants to explore the world. She wants to go to a human college. 


Her family was hesitant, but after some persuasion and a nice scholarship from a human college looking to have diversity in their students, she was finally able to attend. Little did anyone else know that another reason Alison wanted to go to human college was because of her fascination with humans. How deep this fascination goes, Alison will find out.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28689 Read Count: 37845
[Report This] Published: June 06 2022 Updated: June 12 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Food and Friends

Pretty good so far. I can see them eventually getting some mini sized doll house for fun, or making a whole set of routs thought the apartment to make getting places even easier for Alison. Probably mini accommodation supplies, or at least a look at them, that’s a good source for world building. 

Then there of course all the humans and mini combo stuff, like wedge heels with a little compartment (bonus is sedges are easier to walk in), or shoes that obviously have a mini space, jewelry, and more such stuff. Besides also all the kink toys. 

So this is looking it be interesting. 



Author's Response:

That al sounds like a good idea! Definitely going to do a chapter soon where the two fill their dorm with useful stuff for Alison


And knowing Alison, she’d definitely like the idea of being in some heels like that, though it may take a little convincing for Emily.

Summary:

Just some old writing exercises I did back in 2019. Given it's unlikely I'll do anything else with these, I figured it wouldn't hurt to post them here for people to enjoy.

Scale factor relative to Lillis:

Lillis: 1x

Gullis: 72.66x (square root of 5280)

Brobs: 5280x

Basically: a Brob foot is a Lilli mile, and Lillis are as big to Gullis as Gullis are to Brobs


(Starting with only one: additional ones may be added whenever I feel like it.)

(Tags indicative of what can be in the shorts, not necessarily what's already "added" at the time of you reading this story.)


Categories: Vore, Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5314 Read Count: 22321
[Report This] Published: June 16 2022 Updated: June 19 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Lawyer of Little Ones

Very good set. Cant wait to see more!



I always recommend it, but some Brobs have got to have had wedge high heels that were container for Lillis or lillis cities, besides also being some smuggling containers for Gullis ad well, maybe even as a fashion thing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've still got a few laying around, none of them involve wedges though.

Toyworld by Inicius80 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

One corporation has discovered a way to provide the vacation of your dreams. Fulfill them in worlds of tiny people, known as toy-worlds.

This first part is the story of the men and women who first made it all possible. The first harvesting expeditions to the Toywolds to capture specimens, the decisions they had to make, the treatment of the captured population, the experiments conducted on them and the fate that awaited them.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Crush, Destruction, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33650 Read Count: 51003
[Report This] Published: June 21 2022 Updated: January 06 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed
Date: June 29 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Prologue part 5

Dang it, the links didn’t work.

Here: https://images-ext-2.discordapp.net/external/_4Xbc58_hPNjH84cIELNKOINWadFUrUooDyK4-HRR8s/https/saucenao.com/userdata/tmp/P5hQpoi1C.jpg

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/267857496952012800/991787589998747771/IMG_0365.webp

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Prologue part 8

So some toy worlds are in an earlier technological and culture state, with the mention of a 50s-60s look, made me think that some will be in the victorian age, would really let the someone play with destruction and not have any worry as to the locals really fighting back, and prevent mass knowledge that this is happening. 

Could even try and steal some sea ships for ultra easy collection. 

And it goes future with toy worlds that are still either in the medieval or earlier state, a whole resort could get made on one of those with the ancient Greek aesthetic to stone age, everyone visiting being the gods and the tinies make whole culture for their use.  


And with mention monster films in the 60s part, a woman can put on a full swimsuit costume, port out into the water, and to and attack as city like classic Godzilla, or multiple. Plus imagine how scandalizing to that culture it might be if its two women go on sexy rampage for their honeymoon. 



Author's Response:

The idea is that the further away in time the toyworlds are, the more difficult it is to locate them both in the future and in the past, although you have had some interesting suggestions.

The point is that before locating a Toyworld the quantum computer opens thousands of microportals to worlds where there is no life or if there is life it can take forms unimaginable to humans.
There was a scene in the briefing in which Dr. Niven commented on that, that he had seen worlds with things he wished he had not seen, and that it changed the way of examining each new world, because his whole team had felt that one of those things had seen the microportal, but in the end I didn't put it in.

If you go to my user, you will see my Deviantart page. There I've put pictures of how the characters of the story could be, although I still can't find people suitable to the features I've more or less imagined and I might still change some pictures, feel free to give your opinion.


Best regards and thanks for commenting



Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Prologue part 3

Something I always suggest, purely cause is my thing (someone else might be annoyed by now with how many time I’ve done it): when other products/accessories/additions start being made (wether by the main corporation some third party), some of thens is wedge high heeled footwear for the rampage sessions, and for other activities. 

I say wedge cause, beadies IRL being more stable and healthier then stilettos and other apparently, the larger footprint not only give more stability but also means any tinies/dolls can’t escape the crush, if thats the intent, and cause more property damage. Plus, wedges could have a full compartment to store them in. 

There is also the entire cos/roll-play thing people can do. Dress up as invading giantess with form fitting sexy armour. Or with medieval boobplate and having elf eats and pretending to by that. Or having a full scaled suit and being a dragon. Or as an aliens like Asari or some other one. 

Then theres the possibility of people making a competition out of the toy worlds, having to destroy, kill or capture a certain amount of tinies and city scape against some opponent that came fro the other side of the room. Theres other potential games. 

And of course, someone people will use them slave just because, like a team cleaning their shoes, or their mouths, some actually trained to be inserted, so thats a whole other bullpens if taking the toys/dolls/tinies and training them to do things. 

And then theres the media an culture effect. Combing with the costumes mean some shows will happen that could only be filled in the toy worlds, whatever it is, so thats a whole other thing. 


Hope theses are interesting. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your interest and I hope you continue to enjoy each chapter of the story.

The thing is, when I thought of this story I didn't think that the details of how the situation came to be would be so interesting. That's why I'm putting in the prologue parts.

The wedge high heel boots are already being tucked into the next chapter, as they seem to make less noise than heels and don't dig into the grass when a female member of a collection team is collecting specimens in their homes.

As for the other recommendations, the story is not yet advanced enough to know what will happen. As time goes by, we will see.

Thank you very much for commenting and don't forget to tell me what you like about the episodes.



Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Prologue part 5

Another good chapter. 

Good mention on what hazards can happen during the collecting process. 

And of course finally the wedges heels, so I applaud you for that. Didn’t know she had them until the first mention, and easy writing strategy is for the first descriptor of some section you could describe it in detail that would then be carried in after, like that they were wedge boots earlier. But you could also describe the wedge hight, it is a short half inch, or is it 3 inches tall with a an inch platform and two inches from toes to heel (there a certain conformable and walkable angle for high heels), or are there variations, say higher ranked get taller ones for their collection suits. 

Plus there actually describing that all of them have this, some new intern or employee could be shown around or given their uniform, so they ask why there wedges. 

Then further from that, not everyone is good at walking in wedge heels, or at least at first, so there could be some mini course or training class/classes to do that. Or maybe engineering, or getting it from an outside dedicated shoe company, make heels that are like this:(Image 1,Image 2), but many more and thiner blocks or slices that are still connected so its on continuous but flexible wedge. Maybe even breaking up the tow part into even mallet squares and get even more flexibility. 

And since crushing tines is goes and soft, there could be some simulator made to get interns and new employees used to crushing them, and use collected cars for crushing as well. Or those tiny vehicles and some of the course could takes and crushed in commercials, or sold to those youtube giantesses that make car crushing videos. 


And way later, if the tinies could be gotten even smaller (some new smaller toyworld is found), and the toe platform of the wedge boots would be taller then buildings (or even skyscrapers), tinies/dolls from now who have not only been broken, but wound up joining the company and helping convert or manage new tinies, could then go into the even smaller world and collect for the company. They could even have normal sized employees cary them in the wedge heels and deploy out of the compartment them.


Your doing great so far.👍



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. They are always welcome.
The story, in principle, is long, so I don't know everything that will or won't come out, but suggestions are always welcome and maybe some ideas will come out of it.

Regards.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Pretty good start!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. If you have any suggestions, not related to the hellish online translator review, I'll listen to you.

Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 81474
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations


Makes sense about the mass usage (besides the expense) of shrinking to decrease resources would not be popular idea. The robot tabletop farm could still go, needs only some simpler terraforming shelf/table terraforming to make work and get a good amount of shrunken seeds without needing more shrink ray. Then unshrink  the food. So there probably some labs working on that specific thing in the background, and when everyone’s the tech will be there. And maybe shrink ray tech in general, for science and tech’s sake and no other reason. Maybe there some proposed plan somewhere for an emergency shrink storage to save the civilization, not that implementing it would have been a priority or method liked. 


Fair about the armour compensating itself for the balance and posture. What kinds of things would Jolene want but hasn’t been able to get so far, both for practical and fashion. 

Wonder what would be considered truly ridiculous for the power armour fashion circles. 




And I probably should have said it in an earlier review, but you did a great job giving Jolene a cowgirl/old-west ascent without even accessing the spelling and grammar, somehow. Thats just an achievement. 



Author's Response:

Power armor for the military is probably sleek and professional, same for law enforcement. Jolene's power armor is built slim because she wears it under her clothing a lot, it's comparatively pretty weak to more professional models, but it works well for what she does. Armors worn by royalty and rich people probably look like something out of Fire Emblem, huge obnoxious shoulder pads and capes included.

I'm glad Jolene's accent translates well, apart from a few select instances I don't like to lay it on too thick, mostly it's her choice of slang (to the point where Zetan translation software gets confused) and fashion that hopefully tells the reader what she probably sounds like.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Besides the obvious for Jolene to have her mansion, enjoying her days with her zetans and have a normal colony to runs some businesses in the side (the latter makes sense), but with everything I’ve said better, being self sufficient able to sell food even sounds also like a good business, and Jolene could have some enjoyment from developing that ‘small’ part of her colony (even miniature habitation modules to have volume, space, and food, and not the other things)   

A whole side story could be made of the zetans, maybe some humans that eventually came along, trying to develop new things to entertain Jolene and make them practical for her uses (in both meanings). She already has a military shrink ray, give her engineers some more engineering equipment and time, and I be they could make it more practical for her (even if not to mass produce), then use it for her own purposes.



Author's Response: I'm sure she'd like to play goddess to some micro sized people, at the very least her four crewmates will probably end up staring down some time at ant size or smaller.