Penname: Alman01 [Contact] Real name: Alex
Member Since: January 07 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just your average reader that  enjoys good reads of simple yet inovatively stimulating stories and such.


I pretty much made this account here so I can read/fav/review however there is a part of me that wouldn't mind giving contribution a try once I buck-up enough confidence & time as well as pick up on some useful techniques and skill development :)


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Reviews by Alman01
Bang Your Head... (Mo's Story) by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

When heavy metal loving, pot smoking seventeen year old high school junior Morris Jablonski cuts class to sneak out and blaze up, he unwittingly witnesses the school’s three hottest girls shrink down another student. Trying to sneak away quietly, he coughs, inadvertently drawing their attention…

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20974 Read Count: 205219
[Report This] Published: September 03 2015 Updated: December 02 2015
Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

you know, thinking about it many would assume that chapters containing roughly 1000 words per chapter would be hardly worth reading and less engaging. But going over all your works, you've somehow managed to produce a very effective style out if it. Every chapter is brief yet still well detailed. If anything its clever as the brief paragraphs of action and content always lead off on a quick and effective cliff-hanger leaving the reader hungry for more. And luckily since the word count isn't too demanding for you, you're able to update it so frequently that it becomes a rewarding series to keep following. It's brilliant. You are an impressive writer sir xD

 

as for this chapter and the one prior, excellent! Tom's perdicament totally called it but wasn't let down at all. Hell I found it clever how you introduced his situation via dream-sequence. Coincidental or do these girls have some magical genes in their blood there :D
I'm also loving the mounting tension now as the impending victim is slowly becoming more aware of the slowly tightening noose around his neck



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment about my writing! Tension is certainly beginning to mount and there aqre many different possibilities to consider. We'll see how these girls are able to do what they do fairly soon. Hope i can keep your interest piqued!

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 539178
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Thinking Outside the Box

Good god, I'd only just finished at chapter 2 before taking a few days break. I come back and suddenly there's 4 more epic new chapters to read! Dude do you even find time to sleep with all this writing you do? xD

 

I meant to say from the start, that this is a great concept you got going. A shoebox of toys under a bed. the premise alone is exciting so I'm super keen to see how this cast of characters are gonna get around such a giant prison-style setting :D

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Julian/Faith & Cadence

Epic chapter as usual mate! 
I especially liked how this one included sections of both team's actions. Almost felt like a double post rolled into one! :)


And it's exciting to see that the girls are finally getting round to playing... I sure hope that Carver gets a good long run though. While he's evidently not one of the main protagonists of this game, he's a nice guy. It's just too bad he doesn't have as much courage or confidence as the other two, ya know?

 
Hopefully his cute charm will inspire Candace to keep him around long enough :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review. Yeah it was kind of a double too short to throw out by itself so I put them together. As I mentioned in another review I'm toying with direction which may play into Carvers favor. Not sure yet. As for courage maybe Carver just has more to live for... 

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02 2016 Title: Chapter 54: People in Glass Houses

Great bunch of chapters :D
Though they're individually short, your speedy updates mean that I need wait only a week or so to enjoy a good cluster of reading material ^_^

Gotta say, while Josh and Julian are probably the main tiny heroes of this tale, I do still find myself siding a lot with Carver.
I'm just hoping that the guy still manages to catch a break with what is to come, he's way too likeable and sympathetic. I hope he comes to enjoy his shrunken situation as Candace's potential favorite ^_^; 

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed
Date: October 04 2016 Title: Chapter 55: Subterfuge

Nice work in adding to the sisterly-love between the characters. Seriously, the cookie teasing was well put together and really helped color the sister's love/hate bond in a stronger light :D

 

Also looking forward to the next chapter. My fingers are crossed that Carver will at least find someway to enjoy whats coming to him. The first step's always gonna be the hardest right? ^_^;



Author's Response:

Thanks, trying to show a broader depth of character and establish the nature of the relationship. I hope you found the next chapter chapter up to snuff regarding Carver. :)

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2016 Title: Chapter 57: The Killing Field

Oh damn!

Well this is a review for both chapters tbh!

First of Carver's turn: that one was great! I feel like you did a good job in capturing the reasonably shy psyche of a tiny unconfident man brought between two colossal beauties. And I like how his treatment isn't necessarily cruel so far for him. So maybe he might come out of this having enjoyed it a little or at the very least for his sake they enjoyed him well enough to wanna keep him around long enough.
Who knows? Maybe his relative 'largeness' provides enjoyable benefits for Faith & Candace's pleasure that could give him a unique edge over the others that he'd have never expected?  ^_^; (A fan can dream right?)


And as for this latest one.
Holy hell Faith setting up a trap like that! Totally didn't see it coming! A real tense chapter you've written there now that Josh & Jullian are stuck with Faith on the hunt! o_o
It's not hard to feel the tension from this twist. Hopefully for their sake they can outlast her searching long enough for a intervention to give them a way out ^_^ 



Author's Response:

It certainly could have been much worse for Carver. I assume you're referencing Julie where you've written Faith. I was hoping the characters were fleshed out enough to be able to instill the tension you've mentioned and because you have I can assume I have :) 

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