Jason Jackson is supposed to be away on a trip, but unbeknowst to his girlfriend Abigail and everyone else, he is much closer than they think he is.
Another awesome chapter to build up! I love how she's putting him in such danger without her even knowing! She seems like such a cute sweet girl but now she's a giant tormentor. I can't wait to see the other characters you have ready for this story!
-Cheers!
Author's Response:
That's my favorite part of unaware stories!
That's my favorite part of unaware stories!
Welcome back! I’m very excited to see where this continues... I had an idea of maybe putting him inside of a Ped Egg? You know one of them eggs the girls use to get their dead foot skin off... he could be inside there and such forth. Just a suggestion lol great work my friend!! Keep it up!
-Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm excited to finally get back into continuing it. That ped egg idea...I've never even thought of that, ever. I kind of like it. I can't make any promises, but I might have a place to put it in the story...that won't be for like 10 chapters though so it'll be a while. Thanks again!
INCREDIBLE chapter!! I love all the characters that we got introduced too! The chip and dip scene is a classic can't beat it! Now Jason gets to go back home? Does Melissa live at home with her mom and etc? Can't wait! So far this stories been perfect!
-Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I put a lot of work in the chapter and the characters in it! We're going to be seeing a lot more of all of them in the future!
1st things 1st, welcome back bro!! This story seems like another masterpiece waiting to happen! I'm 4 chapters behind so expect a lot of reviews from me! I feel you're the best unaware writer on this site. Can't wait to continue this story!
-Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks! There's not much unaware stuff out there so I try to do the best I can!
Wow! Work must've been so hard! Jason is going through hell and I feel like it's only getting started! Can't wait to see what Melissa his own sister has in store for him! This stories been amazing so far! Keep up the great work!
-Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, there's still a lot left to go with this story!
Being a parent is a hard job. Being the step parent is a even harder job. One step mother finds her job just got that much harder when she takes some medicine which isn't perscribed to her and finds herself shrinking.
I don't wanna keep sounding like a broken record but HOLY SHIT!! This is an incredible chapter! I'm hope ing they turn that drink small with his daughter so she can teach him a lesson! Or have Peyton do it! You keep up the great work! I'm getting sad cause you said there's only gonna be 19 chapters so we're nearing the end :( keep up the great work! You have a fan for life!! Haha cheers!
Author's Response: I don't remember giving a specific number. However regardless of how long this tale is. The plan is build a universe/series. So you should see more of these characters over time. Along with some.new ones. Peyton is the main character so she would be involved in any future stories obviously. As I really enjoy writing her character along with a few of the others like Sabrina and Nancy/twerp
For one thanks for the shout out bro! For two what an amazing story. Just incredible from start to finish, you have a very special talent my friend. Keep up the great work, I'm forever a fan and I can't wait for what you write next!
Cheers!!
Wow! Peyton is just the most evil, awesome, greatest girl in the world!!! Holy crap what a chapter!!! This is amazing and the only bad thing about this is knowing it ends soon :( lol keep up the great work my friend! Cheers!
Wow! Peyton is just the most evil, awesome, greatest girl in the world!!! Holy crap what a chapter!!! This is amazing and the only bad thing about this is knowing it ends soon :( lol keep up the great work my friend! Cheers!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it. I was worried it wouldn't come together how I wanted it too. It may be ending soon but I'm sure you will enjoy the ride
Sandra is amazing!!! I hope we get to see more with her! The Ex-Wife having the wife small is such a fantastic idea (hint hint ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up! Cheers!
Author's Response: Good and bad news. Nothing else is planned for Sandra in this tale but you haven't seen the last of her
Okay it's official my friend, you're the goat! Lol Goat = greatest of all time btw and man this is hands down now my FAVORITE story on this site. Thank you for writing this! Keep up the fantastic work and always remember u have a huge fan! Haha cheers!
Btw can't wait to see how they humiliate twerp some more! Okay, cheers!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the last chapter so much. I was a bit skeptical on how it would go over.
Okay let me start this offf by saying I LOVE SABRINA like holy shit!!! That was just amazing!! The fact that she made her chew off her foot skin cause she couldn't lift the rock was incredible!! Dude you're doing an amazing fucking job! (Excuse my language lol) but I just can't wait for more!!! 10/10! Excellent work! Keep up the great work!!! Cheers!
Author's Response:
I really like sabrina too. She's mean and kinda a bully. But shes fun to write. She has more scenes later too. Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter. If i remember correctly thats the chapter where shit gets real...or it may be the one after.
OMG! I can't wait to see what Sabrina has in store for twerp! I love how she finally accepted he fact that she has no say in whatever Payton wants to do! How many chapters would u say are left? And would you ever do an alternative version where the step-mom is big and the other 3 are small with her? Haha just an idea! Cheers!
Author's Response: I probably wouldn't do an alternate version of this story. As I have other stories I'd like to finish. Plus other stories I'd want to write. I just finished chapter 11 today. Not sure how many chapters overall there will be. The next chapter is all Sabrina . I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Forgot my 10:10 rating! Lol.
Awesome! The way you write bro is so incredible! I just love it! The way Pey gets her friends involved is a breath of fresh air! You keep this up I'm gonna start paying you for stories!! Lol keep up the great work! Cheers!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Definitely more chapters to come. Probably today or tomorrow
Wow! What a chapter and what a story man! Bravo! So far this is turning out to be one of my ALL TIME favorites on this site. You keep up the amazing work! You have a fan in me! Ha, get that reference? Lol cheers!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it. I may finish editing the next chapter this weekend or I may start chapter 10 we will see which way things go. But a chance at a early posting.
Very nice build up in this one! This chapter is gonna set us up for something EPIC! Keep it up man and let it be known you have one big fan right here! Lol anyways take care and keep up the great work!! Cheers!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. It makes writing seem more worthwhile. There are definitely more to come and a few more action packed chapters.!
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HOLY CRAP!!!! Dude this is easily becoming one of my favorites. Keep up the great work, you have an amazing skill in this style of writing I could imagine the horror Peyton is putting her mother through just incredible! 10/10 keep it up man! Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Hopefully you will continue to enjoy. I've been working hard to illustrate the horror of it all. The next few chapters after this one will hopefully convey some of the humanity of the characters as well.
This is an AMAZING start! I hope you continue this! The feeling of this story makes it one of the best StepMother/StepDaughter stories on this site, but unlike get others I hope u continue this one bro! I'm a big fan of your writing! Cheers!
Author's Response: I definitely plan to continue this. I already have 30 to 40 pages written. So a lot more has happened then what's posted here. Thanks for being a fan and taking the time to review and leave feedback.
After a woman unknowingly swallows her shrinking son on a birthday cake, a second size-changing accident occurs and threatens to bring down her family and half the neighborhood.
A sequel to Birthday Surprise, done as a commission.
Awesome! Now we're moving into the good parts of this story! I respect the build up and now we get to see what's gonna happen with the couples. I love the detail of how big Michelle is to them. Great job as always jack. Keep up the amazing work! Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks. The next chapter will be pretty action packed.