Penname: Dudemanguy [Contact] Real name: bob
Member Since: November 28 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a storyteller, who knows what it is he wants.


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Friend or Foe 2 : Geez Louise by edexdexx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

After surviving his near death experience, Franky finds himself in the care of new folks. However are all of them in it to help him? Will Maddison or Liza find out he's still alive?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Butt, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Maternal, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Friend or Foe
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37129 Read Count: 145739
[Report This] Published: November 27 2012 Updated: February 03 2015
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

Franky needs another meeting with Liza. This time they need to be on equal terms.

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Date: January 12 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Meltdown

I don't know, but I think Franky just about won the fight with Louise! Good job man! Now he just needs to beat Maddison (and Liza.)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed
Date: January 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

One more thing, (looks around to see if anybody is watching and whispers) when he mentions Liza, to Louise and Elise, something big is going to happen because I'm PRETTY sure that Liza is (looks around again) related to them.

 

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Date: January 15 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Red Flag

I knew that Liza was related to Elise and Louise. And for some reason, it seemed like your sentences were split up at a lot of parts which made it really confusing to read at some points. Do you know why this happened?

But once I understood everything, it was an excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry the first part of that I wrote on notepad so when I pasted it into a spell checker the formatting probably got screwed up. Let me try to fix to make it a more readable.

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Date: February 13 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Bonding

Louise is his friend? What other unbelievable events do you have left to reveal in what seems like the home stretch of this story?

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Date: March 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

Saw it coming

Time-Out 4: Boot Camp by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 125886
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)

Don't know why I waited to read this. Maybe because I've been too busy. Anyway, here's my review.

Not much to criticise I guess. Another fantastic story to this series. I'm all up for spin offs of Janie and Scott mostly, but can agree with most other people for the next story. I read that in story 5, Maggie, his mom, and Ella were going to be characters. I guess that would be straight up for F/f? If still F/m then still very interesting to see where you take it with Ella.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review/rating.  it's still going to be F/m in the next one.  i've got what i think are some pretty fun ideas for Ella

Young Love by Firestone Rated: X [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Giants vs. Tinies with predictable results!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Entrapment, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6481 Read Count: 10423
[Report This] Published: December 01 2012 Updated: December 01 2012
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed
Date: December 01 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

mmmmhmmmm, that was very nice, very nice. I like how you let Malcolm be a giant along with Renee. Different than 99% of all giantess stories. Very unusual and very good.

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Does that make couples stories the 1%? If so I approve of this assessment.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed
Date: December 07 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No, no, iI mean, that most stories, a guy is never a giant and almost never has any torture parts. But this is different. Making it one of the best stories here. 

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Deleted by Deelann Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:



Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3387 Read Count: 12295
[Report This] Published: December 02 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: No One Special

I really enjoy your stories. This was another enjoyable short story and he survived(?)

Whatever the ending, you sir are a good author. You deserve more views.



Author's Response:

Thanks again Dudemanguy.  I've read your bio.  Our styles are different.  I curious on how you like my style of writing and the content of my stories since our tastes are different.  I don't know why I don't get the reviews and reads that other writers are getting. From what I'm seeing is that others who have more than one chapter and keep adding chapters on incomplete stories keep readers interested and get more views and reviews.  If you have any advice on how to acquire these please let me know.

A Shrinking Condition by sm7in Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

A story where one young man grows up, finding out that he has a condition that makes him gradually shrink while excited and though he may find means to help regulate it, so do women who may stay around him too long.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, BBW, Toilet, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17992 Read Count: 440498
[Report This] Published: December 05 2012 Updated: December 29 2012
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Swallowed Down

Ahh, the aunt is the one taking advantag of the situation the most. Good job Maria!

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Date: December 29 2012 Title: Chapter 13: E-mail Assault

Uh oh, I hope he doesn't have to face Jocelyn. But knowing how you write, he will.

I actually would like to see that interaction.

Still waiting for the Alesha scene. 

And yes, my reviews are love. Just, ummm, different love????

??



Author's Response:

Knowing how I write? Yea, what makes you feel so sure? lol

 

Still waiting to get to the Alesha scene too... le sigh.

 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 12: The Long Walk

Well, I can't wait to see the Alesh/Steve interaction. So far it's a great story!

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 11: In Trouble With Mrs. Adams

The teacher says Gawd and comes later on. Great example teacher.



Author's Response:

This was my favorite review. This one had me cracking up quite hard, lol! I think it was the build up.

 

Appreciate it man! I'm going to keep trying to write more, and although you can expect Steve to have that Alesha scene... it may be a minute before it happens. Maybe.

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 9: An Escape to Normalcy. Almost.

All I have to say about this is

...

 

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 8: To School

I woder if Alesha will take any advantage of his condition. All I can do is read on!

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 2: In the Morning

Ahh, the sister is taking advantage of his condition. Just like any good sister would. 

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 3: An Early Morning Prank

Now the mom's in it too. I really like this story.



Author's Response:

You might like my other story better *wink* *wink*

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Mom's Mouth

Wow, they're one helluva family, that's all I have to say.

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Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, I can't believe I waited until now to read this story. A great intro, and you are very descriptive. I like it so far.

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