Penname: Carycomic [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 10 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm a Connecticut Yankee from the Northwest Corner of the Nutmeg State. I was born in 1959, which makes me a reasonably hygienic middle-aged man (as opposed to a dirty old one; lol!). It also makes me an avid science fiction buff, as I grew up reading Silver Age comics and watching now-vintage sci-fi TV shows. Also, a moderate collector of same.
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Summary: The first born always has it a little bit easier then the rest, but easy street ends for Jacen when he finds himself shrinking do to a electrical surge. He now finds himself a inch tall and forced to seek out help from his siblings.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 324829
[Report This] Published: December 20 2006 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Enter Miranda, Stage Left

All right! Now, Al will have to tell Jenni.

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Date: December 04 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: “Prove yourself faithful with the little things so that you may be granted greater.”

Well, I would say it half-worked. By this point, Jacen is no doubt feeling emotionally "blue."

LOL!

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Date: December 04 2007 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One: Gaining Hope

Ah! Nervous perspiration; the next best thing to "waist disposal" for ridding oneself of unwanted body fluids.

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Date: December 04 2007 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two: Reasoning

So, this actually going to have a concluding chapter? Well, that in itself puts this one point up on "Scent of Trouble." ;-D

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Date: December 04 2007 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty Three: Conclusion of Events

A little rushed-sounding. I mean; you could have made it an even two dozen chapters, by having Emma "toy" with Jacen for, at least, one day before informing Alyson.

But, the main thing is: YOU ACTUALLY FINISHED IT! HOORAY!!!

And, thanks for sharing it. :-D

Author's Response:

There is actually a epilogue too, that i am halfway through, but I had gotten repeated emails about the story so I thought I better post something, as the natives were getting restless so to speak.

The epilogue provides more closure and insight. As it takes place a few days after the final chapter. So you get to see what ended up happening to him and how things shook out. 

Spells by Steph Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Witchcraft is used to enslave men invarious ways.

Categories: Giantess, Transformation, Instant Size Change, Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28142 Read Count: 22671
[Report This] Published: January 16 2007 Updated: January 16 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Submitted for our approval: an epic one-shot tale wherein gratuitous sadomasochistic sex is nicely (if quite unusually) balanced with a well thought-out, and action-packed, plot.*

*Insert TWILIGHT ZONE theme, here. :-)

Spells 2 by Steph Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The cast of spells returns as the magic returns and kyle finds himself once again at the mercy of a young woman.
Categories: Humiliation, Transformation, Giantess, Instant Size Change, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39463 Read Count: 19936
[Report This] Published: January 16 2007 Updated: January 16 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 22 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Jim! I was really hoping he'd survive into the concluding story of your trilogy.

Spells 3 by Steph Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: The Spells Trilogy comes to a close. By this time you should know what this is about.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42927 Read Count: 14202
[Report This] Published: January 16 2007 Updated: January 16 2007
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Date: August 22 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, at least Jim had a happy ending. And, rightly so, imo. After all; he was one of the few non-misogynist males (a.k.a. good guys) in the whole trilogy! :-)

Delta by DX Machina Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Two months after the disastrous Laughlin raid, the Society begins anew. A man and a woman in experiment with their powers. A corrupt bargain is struck between bitter enemies. And every chapter or so, people have sex. Part five of the Change Trilogy.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Couples , Crush, New World Order, Violent, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Change Trilogy
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50173 Read Count: 106758
[Report This] Published: January 20 2007 Updated: July 28 2008
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Objects in Motion

Excellent! I cant wait for the enxt brilliant chapter. Whether here, or @GTSMF.

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Date: May 05 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Turbulence

Had to reacquaint myself with this story, first. Now, I'm off to the new chapter.

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Date: May 05 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Imaginary Numbers

Someone once defined compromise as an agreement in which two disputing parties get everything...except what they originally wanted.

And, that's why I feel so concerned about the Society. The Athena League is clearly over-compensating by seeking to establish an ultra-feminist dictatorship. While the cadre in Washington, DC, is just as misguided in their efforts to revert to the pre-Harrisburg Treaty status quo. Especially, when you consider that they now appear to have counterparts in Germany!

This does not bode well at all.

Which is why this story arc is still so riveting. ;-)

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Date: July 28 2008 Title: Chapter 15: The Mandelbrot Set

Is that true? Do Minnesotans really over-use "there," like Californian teens over-use "like" (and Canadians supposedly over-use "eh")?

Seriously, though: it's great to see you back. And, this chapter more than made up for lost time! :-D

Summary:

A college junior is reunited with her brother, years later. However, the older brother in his misguided attempts to protect his family is now a very different man and finds himself in need of his younger sister. How will the Siblings learn to adjust to the changes that come from their new relationship?


Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6058 Read Count: 61758
[Report This] Published: February 01 2007 Updated: March 14 2009
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: March 16 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Getting Settled

Yep! It's confirmed. Something happened to the version of chapter 2, here. Even hitting "refresh" doesn't help make it reappear. The story still jumps from chapter 1 to chapter 3.


???????

Author's Response:

i dont know what the heck happened because i read fine in the edit mode! i seemed to figure out a way to fix the problem, sorta. It seems ok right now but i dont think i solved the problem for good. Time will tell.

Im glad you are reding it carycomic, no one else seems to be interested in my writings anymore.  :(  oh well. Just when i get a little time and some writer's inspiration, my fans seem to have gone away. Oh well.

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Date: March 15 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Arrival at Jenn's Room

Hey-hey! Nice to see you revived this story. I thought it was doomed to remain an unintended one-shot, never to be completed. But, now you have renewed my hope that it will eventually have a legitimate conclusion. Including those two little words...

THE END

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Date: December 01 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Getting Settled

Yep! This chapter is now one hundred percent perfect. I just wish more people had read-and-reviewed this unsung classic. Ah, well1

Maybe my self-parody drabble @ Giantess City wasn't that much of an exaggeration, after all.

Summary: A young couples relationship goes under a massive transformation when chris finds himself shrinking.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: The Slow Shrink Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66209 Read Count: 185674
[Report This] Published: February 04 2007 Updated: February 04 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: June 19 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nearly eight years later, and still no chapter 17? Then, this story is legally dead. Which means you really should change the completion status to "yes."

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Date: July 13 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

A suitably suspenseful cliffhanger. But, an unacceptably long interval since you posted it. Please, dude! Upload chapter 17, already!

I have so many questions I want answered.

Does Lisa keep her promise to return the little guy to Oatmeal Drive? If not, does she let Jennifer in on the secret without telling Aimee? If so, will Jennifer come to Neil's rescue and reunite him with his family? And, if not, will she turn him over to someone else for a monetary reward? Like, say, Neil's boss, Jessica Wilson?

Please, please, PLEASE get cracking!!!

Summary: A father and husband finds himself slowly shrinking, while he and his family are forced to adapt to the changes.
Categories: Body Exploration, Slow Size Change, Humiliation, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: The Slow Shrink Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93884 Read Count: 120956
[Report This] Published: February 05 2007 Updated: February 05 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstar
Date: January 19 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dear Kim: freedom of speech does not give one the right to falsely yell "Fire!" in a crowded theater. And the so-called feminine prerogative can be equally abused with needless cruelty.  

Summary: A man named Zack finds himself shrunk by his friend who asks him to help with an experiment, which he agrees to. He goes through his mission shrunk trying to find the person who had shrunk him. But in the end does he find her.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3992 Read Count: 124214
[Report This] Published: April 05 2007 Updated: September 05 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: July 21 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes! Hit the "enter" key (aka the "return" key) whenever you want to separate your paragraphs and/or separate your character's quotes from the main narrative. And, for each time you hit the key, you get an additional space.

Just

like

this.

Author's Response:

Thank you I will input paragraph spacing in my stories next time.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed half-star
Date: September 06 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sorry, dude. This was even worse than the first chapter!

Author's Response: What do you mean? Can you give me more of a detailed response. I really appreciate it.