Penname: tinyonej [Contact] Real name: TJ
Member Since: November 13 2006
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Summary: Two friends get shrunk at their friends house and try to alert her of their presence before its too late.
Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3138 Read Count: 23017
[Report This] Published: August 27 2006 Updated: November 08 2006
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: In the Bathroom

Would really like to read more is this a dead story or will you be continuing?

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Madisons Revenge

Well the last comment was a year ago is this story still alive cause i'd like to read more

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Madisons Revenge

awesome job on chapter 2! cant wait for the next one

Summary: Kate, a lonely college girl, struggles with the decision to finish her lunch. An initiation for something much larger.
Categories: Lesbians, Giantess, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore, Couples , Crush, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14050 Read Count: 87243
[Report This] Published: February 03 2007 Updated: January 29 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Kinks

awesome

Ishrink by Maki Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: While shopping for a Ipod a young woman ends up getting more than she bargained for when her Ipod accidentally shrinks someone in the park. However, will what starts out as an accident stay that way?
Categories: Slave, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1863 Read Count: 36805
[Report This] Published: January 08 2008 Updated: January 08 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome job can't wait to read more

Out Of The Blue by Chozo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

In the not too distant future, an invisible alien spacecraft has descended into the forests near the city of Pine Grove, where our story unfolds. The ship was a one-man science vessel piloted by professor Xeeklon, a renowned scientist among his people. Many years before Xeeklon's birth his species detected the detonation of nuclear weapons on this world and made contact in secret with the greatest powers on the planet. As part of this agreement, Xeeklon and his people are permitted to conduct covert research on the planet. No human outside Earth's upper echelon are aware of the aliens or these experiments...

 


Categories: Giantess, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8348 Read Count: 94930
[Report This] Published: April 29 2008 Updated: April 29 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Xeeklon's Arrival

is this story dead? it's one of my favorites and i'd hate to see it go unfinished

The Climb by Pixis Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Tiny soldiers scale their lady commander in this spin-off of Jamie Westwood's The Little People's Corps.
Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3372 Read Count: 15729
[Report This] Published: May 03 2008 Updated: May 03 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Climb

really hope you'll be writing more i'm interested to find out what happens with Cindy

Author's Response: So am I but I think we'll have to wait for Jamie's next Little People's Corps story. He created Cindy but had wanted me to mention the character in this.

Summary: Past Featured StorySeth couldn't let Kari go, and a beautiful stranger gave him the chance to be with her again. But sometimes, our wishes don't take us where we want them to.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Couples , Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Aphrodite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13328 Read Count: 146522
[Report This] Published: July 03 2008 Updated: November 09 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOOT i was hoping you would continue

Summary:

What was suppose to be a time for happiness turns to time a anguish when after selling his old car, he finds himself shrunk inside of it. Normally that would be enough constitute a bad day, however things turn for the worst when the young college student he sold it to swung by to pick up the car and unknown to her, the cars old owner as well.

Now, in a battle of survival against nature, man, woman, and now gigantic everyday objects his only hope for survival is a girl he hardly knows.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13403 Read Count: 118045
[Report This] Published: July 03 2008 Updated: March 28 2011
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AWESOME start. I hope you continue this one soon.

Author's Response: Thanks T1J, I do plan on completing this one. I just can't give a specific time.

Summary: Kevin has a girlfriend named Lucy... Little does he realize what will soon happen.
Categories: Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 376 Read Count: 18020
[Report This] Published: July 15 2008 Updated: July 15 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed half-star
Date: July 16 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well the two others pretty much covered it. This story reminds me of the interactives on writing.com where people put no effort into their posts and call it a chapter. My advice to you is to go here.

 

http://giantessworld.net/viewpage.php?page=tools

 

That is the writing tools page here on GTSWorld, read the guides. 

Accident by VoyuerFan Rated: R star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: To cheat on your wife is one thing to get shrunk and the woman  forgets about you is another
Categories: Scat, Feet, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 649 Read Count: 32006
[Report This] Published: August 15 2008 Updated: August 15 2008
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed half-star
Date: August 18 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

==I apologize in advance for the rant that follows==

 

OK so I read your story and felt I must leave a review. Luckily I read the other reviews prior to posting mine.

Don't get all upset with DXM because you quote unquote "rushed" your story. Now personally I understand writing a rough draft of a story and "rushing" through it, but I can't understand why you would put anything up as "finished" when you yourself admit that you half @$$ed it.

Then when someone calls you on it you get defensive, and "coming from you I don't care" what the heck does that mean? Go read "Less Than Nothing" or "A Moneymaking Opportunity" then may be you'll have a little respect for other writers.

And furthermore I have read your other stories sir, and they show no more promise than this one that you supposedly "rushed". So I suggest you be a little more open to advice and a little less snippy with those trying to assist you in bettering your writing.

Now that the rant is over my advice to you is this.

1. Go here: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewpage.php?page=guide  read everything on that page it will make your stories a million times better. Trust me.

2. Go here: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewpage.php?page=jdguide if the first link didn't make your stories a million times better this will make up for it.

3. USE SPELL CHECK! If you happen to have Microsoft word (which comes with most windows computers) it has a grammar/spelling checker built right in. I'm sure Macs have the equivalent if you're not a windows person.  

Both of the links above are writing guides found right here on giantessworld.net if you really want your stories to be all they can be then follow my advice, and seriously don't rush art if you have a story idea let it have a life of its own or you'll wind up with 6 paragraphs of plotless words that wind up getting terrible reviews and no stars.

I sincerely hope this helps.

 

-Tinyonej

Summary: A paranoid girl thinks her boyfriend is cheating on her, and does a 'little' something to keep an eye on him. It doesn't work out quite the way she planned.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Giant, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6937 Read Count: 241389
[Report This] Published: May 05 2009 Updated: September 23 2012
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I havent actually logged in to gtsworld in a while but i had to after i read this just to add it to my favorites and ask you to KEEP WRITING! great start.

Summary:

A tiny high school guy finally loses his virginity, with the help of a friend.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Couples , Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2371 Read Count: 39973
[Report This] Published: July 17 2009 Updated: July 17 2009
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL

Author's Response: Haha very well the demand for a sequel has been made and as soon as I have time I will be more than happy to provide.

Summary: Nobody ever really thought Haley was a mean girl.
Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4381 Read Count: 161136
[Report This] Published: September 25 2009 Updated: November 03 2012
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

moreee!

Summary: your ex and yourself broke up and has a kid with your best friend, she thinks it'll be a great idea to share you with kid and her boyfriend.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Butt, Giant, Insertion, Vore, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1627 Read Count: 33914
[Report This] Published: April 22 2010 Updated: April 24 2010
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed half-star
Date: April 25 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The being of the end of Cathie

English isn't your first language is it? Like safety said good idea but getting past the poor grammar and sentence structure is frustrating.

Summary: A teenage girl is just a bit different from the rest of her family, and her aunt is coming to visit.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Humiliation, Maternal, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4605 Read Count: 27471
[Report This] Published: August 15 2010 Updated: August 15 2010
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Family Matters

amazing story as usual hope you'll continue this one soon

Author's Response: Unfortunately I probably won't be continuing, but thanks for enjoying!

Summary: A young high school love triangle changes when a young girl accidentally destroys her crush. An unaware story with disasterous consequences of loving a girl in a committed relationship.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples , Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3704 Read Count: 68914
[Report This] Published: October 16 2010 Updated: February 13 2011
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2010 Title: Chapter 3: She Came from Above

2 thumbs way way way up I cant wait to read more

Summary: James and Samantha were quite adventurous in their sex life, but when fiddling with her Dad's shrink ray sends things awry, things take a turn for the worse.
Categories: Feet, Incest, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2349 Read Count: 38572
[Report This] Published: February 15 2011 Updated: February 15 2011
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

way to leave it on a cliff hanger dude... cant wait for more

Summary:

A young girl shrinks herself to spy on her older sister's new date, and finds out a lot more than she could have expected, or wanted to know.

 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4735 Read Count: 43915
[Report This] Published: November 15 2011 Updated: June 02 2012
Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What Sisters Are For

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2012 Title: Chapter 1: What Sisters Are For

Thought for sure this was a dead story. Very, very glad to see it back on the recent page and the 3rd chapters is great. Hope you continue it.