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The Dollhouse by MnDstGrl Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

17 year old Jessica has been at the mercy of the immortal 16 year old Vicki, who happens to be a giantess. One night Vicki brings home a new toy, and with her memories of her old life before she became a toy in Vicki's dollhouse.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6234 Read Count: 28456
[Report This] Published: March 11 2012 Updated: March 11 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: March 11 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Not alone anymore

Excellent, just caught up on all 3 chapters. Finally another story I can get into. I like the indestructble theme, offers unlimited scenarios. This is going to be a fun story!

Toy Teacher by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A mean-spirited and emotionally abusive school teacher finds herself shrinking due to a classroom gas leak and suddenly at the mercy of her vengeful students.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39021 Read Count: 401953
[Report This] Published: May 20 2012 Updated: February 14 2014
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: May 31 2012 Title: Toy Teacher

As usual, excellent character development. And I agree with your response to another poster, the detail does make the fetish aspect that much better. And you tease just enough so that when she finally put her foot down on June, it was totally satisfying. As opposed to girl walks in room, drops shrinkee on floor and steps on her. I've said it before, you write very very well.

 



Author's Response:

thanks for reading; i'm glad to hear my efforts to build up to the fetish moments are appreciated.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: October 16 2012 Title: Toy Teacher

Great chapter! You always do a very good job at making believable characters. Just caught up on this story, the cameo of Carly last chapter was a nice touch :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and for reading!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2013 Title: Toy Teacher

Oh man, double tease double tease! First when she didn't pull her panties all the way up and then the escape! You're cruel man, cruel. Hope Kayla captures her, lover her character and well, we know what will happen if she catches June again!



Author's Response:

Kayla is indeed going to get another chance later on to give her teacher a piece of her mind and/or rear end

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2013 Title: Toy Teacher

Nice, didn't see an encounter with a non student, I like it. I disagree with others though, i don't think June deserves a break, she never gave her students one. 

Great job!



Author's Response:

hehe i like your thinking.  a break is not really in the cards for June

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2013 Title: Toy Teacher

Wow, could we see a kinder gentler June, if she doesn't end up someones pet? Or meet her end? And if memory serves me, she still has a date with someones "end" :) Good chapter, nice twist.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2014 Title: Toy Teacher

Love it, can't wait to see what jackie is going to do with her! Good job making Myrna look like a drunken kook to the security guard, I like how Jackie quited June with the simple act of pressing her fingertip over her face. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  This story's almost up, but Jackie's got some fun stuff planned for the finale.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2014 Title: Toy Teacher

That...was....awesome! Perhaps one of the best breast scenes ever. I like this Jackie girl very much *weg*

 

So was that the ever famous Carly they were talking about? Also one of my favorite characters ever. That was a nice touch. 

 

I can't wait for the final chapter of this, great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks much for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed.  And yes, that was the same Carly.  She and the students of this story are in the same school, so I'm trying to maintain that somewhat.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: May 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Class Subordination

Great start, I already hate this teacher, excellent job fleshing out her personality. She's not going to have a good day in school tomorrow!

 

ps.. as per your last story, it was never my intent to see the story cut short, I was pointing out my distaste for those storylines to explain my lack of feedback. I believe an author deserves reviews on their stories. 

The Gilded Cage by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Lucy has been the pet of her Mistress for 3 years now, but how will she fare now another woman has entered her Owner's life?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 26412
[Report This] Published: June 14 2012 Updated: October 12 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: June 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Ceri's Little Pet

OMG! A new story from HarelequinEms! One of my all time favorite authors, cant wait to see how this story unfolds, you've set up the first chapter very nicely. And of course, knowing your stories the way I do, Lucy is not going to like Emma very much! Life isn't going ot be so gentle anymore.

 



Author's Response:

hehehe, yep, you got that right ;)  I'm really happy you enjoy my stories so much ^_^  It means a lot to me to hear when people are fans of my writing. If you're interested i have just set up a DeviantArt with some pics i've done as well : http://harlequinems.deviantart.com/

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: October 12 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

I'm stunned! A story by you that the villainess doesn't win :P Never saw that coming but to tell you the truth, I actually felt bad for Lucy so I'm glad she didn't get smooshed. Of course the wretch I am, I was thoroughly enjoying the scene while Emma was crushing the cage *sheepishly looks at the floor*. 

Loved the ping pong scene too, and the scene where Lucy set up Emma, funny :) Awesome story! Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

hahaha :P  I was very deliberate in my attempts to throw off the norm for this one. I wanted to keep people guessing.

 

The scene of emma stomping the cage was the -entire- basis of this story. It started out as just that idea that i worked around so i'm glad you enjoyed it as much as i did ;)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution

Oops, sorry Em, I always forget to rate! Thanks again for the great story :)

 



Author's Response:

hehe thats ok :)  Thanks for sticking with me despite all my unplanned hiatuses!

Twins by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Two twins with special gifts play with an unfortunate innocent.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16594 Read Count: 24582
[Report This] Published: July 08 2012 Updated: December 05 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: December 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always root for the Giantesses but these two are just beyond evil, I hope thay die horribly, really really really hate these two! How was that Sam guy dumb enough to fall for that trick, he should have ripped that cunts throat out. Good job at creating such evil characters. Now kill them already would you.



Author's Response:

This series is going to get very very messy before it's all over. Will the Twins reign supreme over the victim that is humanity? I can't say. What I can say is that it's much more exciting writing for them when they're in danger, rather than when they're just dominating with no chance of failure.

Re: Sam, I think there are people in this world who don't believe that anyone's unredeemable. Sam is one of these dreamers, and unfortunately he put all his chips in on probably the worst people he could have, out of everyone on the entire planet.

Project Re-Growth by tinyman91 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

The year is 2,300 and life for the male species has evolved them to the point that they're now the "weaker sex".


Hey! Come check out our discord!

https://discord.gg/2H8BRd8rmN


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14396 Read Count: 159191
[Report This] Published: July 22 2012 Updated: September 22 2015
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: November 23 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Back to school

Wow, that's some cliff hanger, cannot wait for the next chapter! Well written story, you do good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you, cliffhangers are a specialty of mine. And I'm glad taht you enjoy my work and the next chapter will be out soon.

Friend or Foe by edexdexx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After being shrunken by a girl, Franky has to find a way to get his freedom. Will he be able to collaborate to get out of this mess or end up manipulated himself.


Categories: Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Friend or Foe
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27400 Read Count: 109321
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: September 27 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: August 29 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Meet and Greet

Good start, like how you've set it up, this story has a lot of potential, please continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I already have some more chapters pre-written so I just have to type them up. I'll have some more chapters posted within the next couple of days.

Prom Night by FTV Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Lisa is a globe trotting, jet setting child.  She cute, she loves her life, and she seems fulfilled, that is until she returns to the states and finds a high school prom going on in her hotel.  This party opens a hole in her heart, but will filling the hole cause her pleasure in which she wants?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11704 Read Count: 24810
[Report This] Published: November 03 2012 Updated: November 15 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: November 03 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Lisa's Fun

Great start, interesting concept, I liked the twist at the end there, very sexy that she was turned into her underwear. Look forward to more of this, good job. 

The Tiny and her Princess by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Joy, a tiny person who lives in the  the kingdom of Arcken during the Medieval era, has to find a way to survie from the rest of the world.  Can she trust the princess of the lands, or is she as bad as the subjects that live there?


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Unaware, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40261 Read Count: 102670
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: April 14 2013
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: November 16 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it, please continue, loads of potential here! Would be great to read a full F/f story by you.

A Matter of Taste by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

!Furry Story!

Two ex-school pals meet up to see if they can spark up their old friendship and decide to do it over lunch at one of the friend's workplaces. Things don't go so well between them however.

The first part of an experimental story idea, kind of like a Choose Your Own Adventure kinda story. The next chapters will be split between TWO stories because you will get to choose who is shrunk, Harley or Aylia!

Now Finished with ALL options available - up to 6 unique stories in one, you get to decide which one you read! :D


Categories: Furry, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22101 Read Count: 81352
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: November 24 2014
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Shrunk Harley - Life Ending

I can't tell you how happy I am to see this continued, haven't been on here much lately and came on to check some other stories and saw this sitting at the top, soooooooo happy!

 

Love both endings, I'm not even a hard vore fan but I absolutley loved that, you make everything awesome. 

 

Slave ending was great too, making her a dish rag, very original and oh how far Harley has fallen, subjected to a life of a dish rag :)

 

Oh, an of course, nothing better than being sat on, great scene and described very well, all the descriptions, fantastic, puts the reader right in the scene.

 

You are absolutely the best, thank you so much for finishing  this!



Author's Response:

really glad you enjoyed this so much ^_^  Other than myself you were the one i was really aiming to finish this for lol :P

 

I had loads of fun with the giantess CPR thing, but as you well know, my main thrill with this was the butt crush haha ;)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Shrunk Aylia Life Ending

Awesome! Liked the slave ending better, loved how she turned her into her ankle braclet! I liked the other ending too but would have went with the meat tenderizer instead and let Harley enjoy her burger *weg* But definitley liked the slave ending better, now Harley gets to have fun with her over and over! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, from hearing the various feedback i've had so far i definately should have gone with the tenderiser but i thought the salt grinder was too 'unique' an idea to pass up :P  I'm just in the process of writing Shrunken Harley's 'life' or 'death' endings at the moment, but it will be at least a week till they are posted because i wanna give people time to read these two chapters first. Cool to hear your favourites though :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: November 16 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Reunion

Great start Em! I like the idea about the dual endings too. Not sure which one I want to get shrunken down yet, looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Coolies :D  Glad you like it!

Good thing is you wont neccesarily have to choose because I am actually writing both endings lol, so you can just skip to the chapter with the ending you wanna see :P

Will be interesting to see how many veiws the different versions get compared to eachother :)

Nice to hear from you again though! ^_^

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