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Summary:

Dagon and Cindy try and survive in a world where neither of them will be accepted by their kind.


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56253 Read Count: 144544
[Report This] Published: July 04 2015 Updated: March 26 2017
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such cliffhanger! Now I am so curious to see how it will be Olivia and Cindy interaction! Hope Dagon is okay...

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wonder if there are others male 'giants' like Dagon living among normal humans.

Summary:

A teenaged girl with a tragic and haunted past begins to experience startling visions and starts manifesting unusual abilities feeling something dark stirring deep within her...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45958 Read Count: 278514
[Report This] Published: August 11 2015 Updated: June 20 2016
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So surprised, and incredibly happy, to receive the e-mail notification of new chapters from this story! Really, really like the details on feelings described. Especially for Anna now that she has this absurd amount of power and superiority compared to all others. I feel frightened for those she loathe now, like Trent, which already has a doom clock on their lives; and also can't help but to tremble, feel a mix of awe, 'safe fear', love and protection for those she likes/loves/craves, like Velen or Jim. Things that Veronica seems to also be learning and experiencing now. Wonder how long the humanity will last, or if all she will crave will be the feeling on its own and what they can give to her, like a product, treating others as nothing more like precious 'treasures' of feelings to be harvested and consumed. Without any real feel for them.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review LJin, sorry it's been so long (vgiv gave me a nudge and reminded me there was still some unfinished business here). The real battle coming for Anna and Veronica will be not distancing themselves from humanity or the human condition because once they are able to objectify human beings, they lose he ability to empathize making it easier to do whatever they want. You may see some of that put to the test very soon...

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Date: June 06 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Poor lamb. So silly, innocent, fool and helpless. Can't take care of itself neither choose what is best for its own. No wonder its need guidance from a shepherd, otherwise it would simply jump out of a cliff without even realizing the danger. Now we have two wolves protecting and loving their precious little lamb, separating it from the rest of others that are just food, their little best friend they love it so much and so dear. This one is special... The silly lamb just need to realizes that. Silly, foolish humans can't even see the truth before their eyes.



Author's Response:

Very astute and keen understanding of this chapter as the 'girls' try to educate their small seemingly irrational friend. "You don't need to be afraid so why do you tremble so lititle one?"

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Guess that even some bullies repent from their actions at the face of death. Seemed sincere, maybe. Veronica is more merciful than Anna, not sure that she would keep him alive. Also not sure how long she will keep Trent. One thing is to hold in check the hunger when the little one is a loved one, like Velen, but if it was Trent probably won't have second thoughts about giving herself into pleasure as his life certainly would means nothing to her.



Author's Response:

Veronica is not nearly as affected as Anna so her threshold is higher. You are absolutely right about the difference between how she feels towards Valen compared to Trent. When messing with Trent grows boring she'll have no reservations about sliding him down her throat.

Summary:

This is the third and last part of the Side Effects trilogy.

Volume 3 takes over right after the end of Volume 2. 

After having been reduced at the end of Volume 1, Kelly, Lisa and Casey are giant again in Volume 2, this time in a big city. They are all 250' tall, but Kelly has known for some time what's the force behind their growth. Fearing that her plans of using her size to rule and have fun are threatened by her former friends, Kelly will make herself much bigger than them and lets them know that she will be the one in charge from now onwards. She is tired of Lisa's naiveté and Casey's mindless violence.

At the end of Volume 2, Kelly uses her newfound size to defeat an army attempt at her and destroy the research center that could threaten her power. Once she is done, she sets on a quest to take over the world. This is what she will try to do in Volume 3. 

Left behind, Casey will set herself on a mission to become as big as Kelly, to be the one on top again. In the meantime, Lisa will try her best to stop her former friends and protect her family.


Categories: Giantess, Destruction, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Side effects
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115533 Read Count: 170840
[Report This] Published: August 22 2015 Updated: January 02 2016
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7. Angel

I really, really like your writing. Since Vol. 1. It's more than just 'fanservice', as many stories over here that care little about writing, instead of making me want to stop reading or simply jump to the 'good parts' you make me truly enjoy the reading from the beginnig to the end. It's good, exciting and arousing.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I'm glad that you are enjoying the stories beyond the pure fetish aspect of them. When I wrote them I tried to write a story that would be heavy in giantess content but that would be primarily a story, with its storyline, characters and flow. Comments like yours make me really happy, since it seems that I achieved my objective!

I hope that you will continue enjoying what you read. Please, keep letting me know what you think. Feedback like this is what keeps me writing and posting.

Cheers!

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Loved it, this will be one of my favorite story!

 

Do you plan to also add an illustration for this 3rd volume later?



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Did you like Volume 3 better than Volume 2?

 

I have no idea on what will happen in terms of illustrations. I'm still commissioning renders to SorenZer0 for Volume 2. Once I finish illustrating the Vol. 2 chapters I would like to illustrate, I will need to think what I do. I love the renders, but the cost is not precisely low...

 

Anyway, thank you very much for the feedback. Getting this type of input is what drives me to keep working on new story ideas for the future!

 

Cheers! 

Summary:

A man finds himself losing his wife to a growing Amazon!


Categories: Couples, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20502 Read Count: 155048
[Report This] Published: December 15 2015 Updated: September 04 2017
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved these chapters more than you could ever imagine. It's so difficult to find such an amazing story involving giantess and muscles.

Summary:

Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.

Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.

 


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196299 Read Count: 216267
[Report This] Published: February 22 2016 Updated: March 16 2017
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Rewarding good behaviour

From the bottom of my heart and soul, thank you so much for writing this story.

I thought I'd never find this fantasy of mine written; and casually before going to sleep I happen to find this one that is so well written and I can see and feel that truly has a lot of effort put on it. Ended up spending quite some hours reading. Still at the part after Kat and have more chapters, and even if you won't finish the whole story someday, I'll still be more than happy to had find it and be able to keep in my memories.

Love so much these ideas, discussions, thoughts and kinks that mess with beliefs, morals and dark themes. Lately been discovering about corruption kink (maybe I was corrupted, anyway). But, especially, that doesn't treat affection and love as something exclusive to '100% naive gentleness' as I like to say, because even 'Precious Little Demons' can have these feelings.

And by far, the biggest and most special thing for me, that I probably wouldn't keep reading if this wasn't present was Claire being a 'special one', loved and protected by all the impossibly powerful and superior girls. This isn't just a simple kink for me, more like truly mess with my feelings whenever I see or find something involving this. I love this feeling of helplessness and protection/safety/love at same time. How the twins and Kat say they won't hurt Claire, and she will be always safe, while still witnessing them treating others they believe that deserves, 'cruelly'. Might not believe me, but I am sincerely happy reading this. Also love this slowly corruption, that they can see what truly lies beneath the traumas, beliefs and morals; helping her to be sincerely happy together with them, and not against them because part of her unconscious mind and thoughts try to promptly lead her 'wrongly' at the first sight of every 'unacceptable' or 'cruel' act.

I loved this sense of utter fear, helplessness of all the things the twins and the others that received the gifts causes while reading; like Kat when 'snapped' and showed her little toys, when controlled Claire's body and actions. Brought plenty of fear and anxiety wishing for Claire to find a way to help her, to change her mind; not just selfishly trying to find a way to save herself. But to help Kat. Drama and tragedy is also keeps me so deeply fascinated and always ending up putting myself in the characters place, which sometimes make the reading quite overwhelming for me. Forcing me to take a rest. Poor Kat...

Thank you again, and wonderful work, you are very good in the dialogues and description.



Author's Response:

Wow... where, where to begin...

LJin, this is by far, the longest, and most sincere review, i have ever been previlaged to recieve. When i came back to check them tonight and i saw this long master piece my heart was a aflutter. Thank you, so, so much, thank you, for taking your valued time out of your day to review in such detail. There is no greater joy to a writer, or in my case an aspiring one then to get such thoughtful insight from my readers on my work  (TvT)

I can agree with you, a lot of feelings, as many as i can muster i put into this story. But the feeling that makes me the happiest is knowing others truly appreciate my mind... my corrupted mind xD. I don't plan on ending this story on a cliffhanger or just dropping it entirely I assure you. No, i came into this story knowing full well from start to finish it would need to be completed and even if it takes me weeks to try and get everything readable, (i have a lot of trouble with english) i will endever to keep it going till the final letter meets the paper.

I hope the emotions from here on out arn't to much for you, i promised this story when it began would be dark, and there will be many more emotional scenes to come, but i hope you stay and enjoy the ride all the same. It's a pleasure to write for you!

 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Broken chains...

Finished reading the other chapters. If I had read each one separately, I'd probably put one review for each, in this case then, a very BIG review for you! HO HO HO Take a deep breath...


Made me feel so happy to see you replied to my review. About hoping the emotions from here on out aren't to much for me; I expect quite the contrary - break me! Hah I'll stay until the end, and probably will be trembling and sobbing through the way.

Anyway. As also a non-english native, I know the struggle, and through the reading I found very few errors that caught my eye. Overall it was quite comfortable and great to read for me.

About the length. Personally, I adore the length you choose to use on each chapter, it feels like a real novel with chapters that have beginning > middle > end; I have nothing against short chapters, however long ones are much more impactful and stick much deeper into my mind and feelings. Especially writing that have more serious plot and dialogues together with kinks, like yours, can fit every part into the chapter with plenty of room for every one to be good. Usually start slowly, nice, you build up tension, a lot of tension or trade the tension for affection and love, with also grows the same; until the climax. This makes the chapters much more amazing and stick in the mind to think and ponder more later. I really like how you use the affection/love, corruption, lewd kinks and dark themes together with the plot, not sounding like simply 'fanservice' (there will be a beach episode/chapter with all the girls and Claire?) Hah~ Also, a nice detail, you use _ _ _ _ to separate scenes, which I found wonderful for the reading.

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Was quite a ride until now, I had time to breath and calm myself already~ :~

One of the things I feel that affects more, when one of the girls speaks or acts, is that we know they don't lie. They aren't like adults that hide their feelings or try to please other Egos so they won't feel bad, they are simply sincere and pure, in their own special way. And this, causes a very potent blow whenever they are sad, loving, angry or happy, because we truly know these are what they are feeling right now, no if or buts. Making the scenes way more frightening when one of them believes Claire is a 'mean lady', or heartwarming when they say they want her with them forever.

Some thoughts.

Deaths, dark themes, killing - Amazing, you really have a corrupted mind for this. Hah Many times when the 'monsters' are killed causes goosebumps and shivers, I try my best to not put myself in their places, thankfully is easier as I identify myself with Claire that is my safe beacon (usually, because she goes through quite a lot!!). I love this kind of horror/dark reading, it's scary, frightening, causes cold and shivering; but somehow we can't turn our eyes away from it, there is that fascination to keep looking at and continue to see the end. And after it ends, you know that it may had changed you in a bit. Claire may had not realized this yet, or did, who knows... but I have the impression she doesn't look that absurdly horrified like the first time she saw them killing a monster. 'Monsters', she is starting to see and feel what this word mean, if it's truly means those adults, how evil, mean and horrible they are and all their crimes; Claire is even starting to feel anger towards them, like the one with May and at the last ones with Kai. Wonder how long it will take for her to not feel sorry for them, to not think they are innocent. The twins know how naive and 'pure' Claire is in some way, how she believes in everyone and how she thinks everyone is good in some way, or just that she is so kind hearted that she wasn't fully tainted by the society and morals. Something like this... my thoughts tend to get confuse whenever I think too much like this Hah.

Kat - Until now, she is my fave. Especially because I always have these motherly feelings; when she unconsciously said 'Mommy' and ran away crying I thought my heart would stop. As I was discovering her sad past, how it deeply affected her whenever the subject of her parents were brought up, I was getting the hint deeply there in her heart she may desperately crave for a motherly figure in her life, to take care of her and love her. The twins even said she liked receiving 'orders'. As much as heartwarming and loving, she seems also extremely protective, it's even scary whenever she gets this serious to say nothing will hurt Claire; at same time so heartwarming. Also frightening the collection of toys she had there, wonder if that man she held so furiously was actually her father, or just another random 'monster'. I can only imagine one thing about tying losing ends though, scary! Hope she continues living in Claire's home, and both get even more together.

May - I found adorable and happy, and at same time so sad and depressing, not to mention scary that she can be so damn dangerous by simply forgetting where Claire was... It was reading full with constant mixed feelings, high and low, happy/laugh/love, fear/sadness. How she is unaware of everything in the bigger picture, too young to understand - and at same time aware of bad things and lies happening all around her. Though I believe it indeed would be much worse for her if the twins didn't had give her this power. This caused even more tension, because you knew that every word Claire said needed to be sincere, her feelings and thoughts pure otherwise May would see through everything. It was interesting to see the part with the sick pervert, especially thinking before how Claire felt sad/guilty/dirt and Alexis told her to not ever compare herself with them; how Claire could had the chance to/or not to realize the difference in her sincere feelings and those selfish ones full with lies which unfortunately May couldn't see because it was his 'truth' (if she asked he liked, he would honestly say he liked). Even the 'commanding voice' later, which I think is absurdly powerful, even frightening to think about how much control she can have on others (what if she says 'you want to kill yourself'). But this fear is at same level with the sense of safety and love when you see how kind hearted and pure she is, she just want hugs and friends that don't think she is a monster and won't leave~ I'm sure Claire will never leave her.

Kai and Lily were the ones I thought more dangerous.
Kai - This one caught me by surprise. I was kinda sure this wouldn't be so sad and more of a 'battle' to show Claire was sincere and prove worthy. But at the end I ended up crying with the final hug! Thing that didn't happened before. I'm too emotive, I feel silly. Hah Anyway Surprised me even further, because, personally I never truly read anything or sought stories/kinks/RP involving smells. And all this humiliation, torture and dark use of it was really interesting and scary, especially how Kai could manipulate other bodies in this way. I don't even want to imagine what that man down there felt... It was interesting to see she had a family, though so depressing and made feel so angry. Indeed, there are plenty of ways to have a sad childhood, unfortunately... And thankfully there are people like Claire that sincerely cares about Kai. I'm really glad she believes in her now. Glad because now she can be happy.

Lily - This one causes me shivers... I really have no idea what to expect. Neither her powers, which just the fact of nobody desiring to share, and how few say she is real mean and 'evil' makes even more scary and curious. All I can think is I have to wait for one hell of a ride... At the intro with her using her foot I have this feeling will be focused on this kind of kink, maybe, or others, or many others. You are using so many! Amazing. Anyway. Lily seems just so, deeply and honestly angry, extremely angry with all the adults (bugs). I keep wondering what may had happened to her, to hurt her trust and feelings in this way. And if it is this scar is that deep far, almost enough to not be healed, I tremble and shiver more with the thought of how difficult may be for Claire to prove she is different. But also deeply wants Claire to find what happened, and try to help Lily, Hope she manages to! Don't to this with meee! :O If it happens, I can't help but to have this image of all of the girls holding and hugging Claire lovingly~ I'm going to faint...

Alexis and Sophia - I have no more doubt about their feelings for Claire, I can see and feel how they are so attached to her now; It's so adorable and loving, the way they hold her, how they pet and caress her, how they handle her as if she were precious. Compared with the start, where they weren't that attached. It's cute to see how they were nervous waiting for Kat to arrive with Claire, they were so restless, even said they were in the night. And all the affection they give to Claire is really heartwarming and adorable. It seems so much, much easier for them to see through Claire feelings and heart, though for Claire she still has to do it in a humanly way but it's so adorable they actually are trying to 'corrupt' her and 'helping' her to understand more and more her feelings. 'Even if they have to do it every single day~' 'She will belong to them~'. About their powers, it's just so... powerful, but at same time they are so in control of both mind and body that I can't feel scared for Claire -- unless -- at the beginning when she needed to be sincere about her feelings, becuase the twins don't seem very merciful for those they can see aren't good hearted for the 'monsters', after I saw how kind and good hearted Claire was, I stopped fearing the twins because I somehow knew that they wouldn't do anything to Claire, other than adore her more and more. The problem now lies in Claire starting to believe in this, that 'gift' they gave her even implies this. Also It's so difficult to understand their intentions many times, especially in the big picture of the plot, you are very good in just giving the hints to get more curious, and not hints to outright give the plot and spoil things. Make us think, make us create theories, this is good to keep the reader waiting for more. For me, I... don't know; why Claire is special in their plan, other than being one of the few adults that truly cares about them and not see them as monsters. Maybe they want to prove there is a chance for few adults in the future they want to make, like their Mother, to give them this chance to change their beliefs and morals that may cause such suffering for the children. Which makes me remember about their past, what could had happened with them, their birth and their Dad which they seem to hate. Who knows. The plot thickens...

And Claire - Usually I'm 99% of the time in her character when I read, then most of the feelings I feel are caused because of her reactions. I really identify myself with her, so maybe this is why I'm so fascinated with the story maybe. Anyway, what got me more curious is about her past, I can't help but to keep wondering, since that even the twins are so curious to know more and more about her, and even Alexis struggled a bit to delve deeper into some trauma apparently. Even more curious was to see that Claire seemed to not be able to remember certain things about her past, is this because of her own mind locking things she don't want to remember or maybe something the twins did... I have this uneasy feeling Claire may be the one with the most tragic past. Hope this is just a guess! And if if this is true, and the story delves into this, hope for her to have the help of all the girl as much as she loved and helped them.

Again, thank you for replying and writing, as you can see, I kinda really liked the reading. Hah~ Can't wait for the next ride, hope my heart can take it.



Author's Response:

'Sits down and takes a long sip from his drink.'

'Open's up reviews and notices a new one.'

'Begins to read it over while simultaneously spitting out his drink in shock.'

 

Holy crap, thats a lot o_o

My heart, it's aflutter T^T

Such a long review, so detailed, so descriptive. Every action covered. Every chapter read. This, this is the best thing i have ever received, be it in writing or in life  ;-;

Thank you, so, so much for reviewing once again. I love reading your thoughts. This, this is indescribable really. Your words, there like fuel making me want to write with gusto! I love every second i've read this. Each character, so in depth, nothing over looked, everything laid out bare to see. It's the feelings i wanted people to feel before i began this story. It's beautiful. I cannot express how much it warms me to see this. I know i've said it already but just, thank you. Any time someone takes their time to tell me their thoughts i feel honored, but this isn't just thoughts. No this is much more.

I'm exalted by this. I'm thrilled you feel this way about my story and i hope i'll be able to live up to your expectations. This story is far from over, so for the remainder of your stay, enjoy~

I'll be waiting for the next review you make if you so choose with just as much fervent awe as you've given me today.

Thank you, just so much, thank you  TuT

 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Cut the cord...

Wah, so fast another chapter! Amazing. Thank you!

More of my thoughts, theories, silly thoughts and maybes.

Kai's gift was more than it seemed in the end. She really wanted to make something special for Claire, giving her a way to be more intimate with the twins. So lovely. She found the sister she was so in need in her life. Both for friendship, love as for to annoy each other. Hah

One of the things I found so adorable, and arousing was the way of smell and scents were used. Especially at how enthralled and amazed Claire acted as she felt this whole new world. You really made me feel that this was something breathtaking and new. The pheromones part was both surprisingly sexy and cute, how deeply attracted Claire felt.

Since the twins, at first, didn't count Lily afraid of what she might do to Claire; after Kai had given her vote they only needed the most important one. Claire itself accept her and accept the twins's love. To not be afraid of her feelings anymore, and to keep running. It was sad and heartwarming how desperately both tried to comfort and help Claire, to let her open herself for them. How they simply gave her love and comfort desiring nothing in return. Because real love is like this, not selfish, simply give and give, while the other side also give without expecting anything in return. To let them come into her heart and life. I believe would be much 'easier' but wrong and dangerous to simply 'fix' Claire's fear and trauma. Because even if they went inside her mind and heart, they still would be 'intruders'. She needed to accept their help, to take that leap of faith, and even if the mind unconsciously tried to resist it would be in vain because Claire already had opened the doors for them to help her.  Which would be impossible if they had simply forced their way in. Claire's trauma was so sad, it's something so sad and it hurts so much when your sincere love is turned into a disgusting thing that the other doesn't accept or acknowledge. It hurts in so many ways possible... no wonder she was afraid to let her love come out again for the twins. Made me so incredibly happy to see they managed to help her. And I'm certainly they will make wonderful new memories. From now on, between the three of them, will be only good ones thankfully I believe. They already did quite sexy ones in this little time they got after the help. Hah~ Claire will start to discover the real pleasure of giving herself fully on her feelings and love, without anything holding her back anymore. And this will be amazing.

It's sad to see how they see and are scared of what Lily may become, or almost is. Maybe the twins are afraid to do even another mistake trying to help Lily further. Especially at how much feelings Lily seems to carry towards them or the others. She probably knows how everyone thinks about her. And this only emphasizes her view of herself taking the role of 'outcast'. Which may fuel even further her hate.  And it's so sad to think about this, how others see her like this. I'm really happy Claire did that. I really don't know what to expect in her past or what will happen. However must be something hurt Lily so deeply, and the moment the twins helped her at first, maybe she could be fully aware of how her life was at that moment. And this might have been something far far horrible. Maybe hating life for being like this. Usually a form of hate and suffering comes from 'not accepting things as they are'. Lily just hates all the bugs do deeply, she seems to be 200% sure they are all useless, arrogant, greedy, evil.

I wonder if she is even curious now with Claire, since she got past even through Kai. Claire might be something like, a needle poking her beliefs of the bugs, that doesn't fit. Wonder if she might think that Claire is just way more crafty than all bugs, a real danger. Or perhaps, deep there, she craves for Claire to be that different. To help her. It's interesting to see Lily's reaction  when Claire acted sincerely and warmly, like the first time she greeted her. Or now when the twins were begging for her to not harm Claire. Maybe Lily struggled with both views, the one that urged her to crush Claire right away for being what she 'was'; and the other reality where little by little all her friends were starting to feel deeply attached to this one they should be hating instead. It's something for her to feel curious. Or scared... scared to 'take the leap of faith' too. Being this deep in hate, I believe Lily may try to force Claire to show her true 'nature' of a bug through truly extreme means. Like she said once before, how the bugs act in a certain way and will do anything afraid of dying. And I'm sure she will have no second thoughts in killing Claire. Maybe the only choice for help Lily might need something truly drastic to pass through all this thick shell, maybe even sacrificing something to help Lily... or sacrifice herself. If this meant Lily's happiness, I believe Claire may do anything. Maybe even giving her life. Which is scary.

Speaking of scary. It gave goosebumps to discover just how powerful and perfect Lily is. Enough for even the twins to acknowledge this. Wonder if it's because of this that Lily might have feel herself superior, like a deity or something like this compared to the bugs. To have this amount of perfect control of both sides at her young age. Truly frightening.

I'm incredibly anxious, nervous, frightened and hoping for Claire's apparently 'big battle' in the next chapter. I hope so much she helps Lily. And to finally discover the grand plan.

Will be quite a ride! Gladly will take a while, lots of time to recover and prepare my heart...



Author's Response:

Ehh, my heart XD

It always makes my night when i come back and see your reviews LJin, the amount of time you put into these really shows and i it just makes me so thankful you found my story and that i'm able to do this much for you with it :)

I'm glad you saw into the point i've been trying to express when it comes to the twins deep intrest with Claire and why they didn't simply alter her perspective out right to make her theirs. Mutual trust and love is the main key to their goals and without Claire having either of her own accord they knew they wouldnt be able to bring her into the fold.

I've already started on the next chapter but sadly this one i'm going into alone. The amount of detail i need to do for it I don't want FW to worry about xD So this will take a bit but i expect it to be very rewarding in the end. I hope you'll enjoy it as much as you did this one and i look foward to future reviews from you :D

I also want to note out of everyone trying to figure out my end game you seem to be on the right track the fastest out of anyone, :P

 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Burdens of a lost girl,

...

 

I had read the first part few days ago, but couldn't post my thoughts yet, had to take a break.

Now when I thought I was ready, I come to find this and my heart couldn't take it, another blow, even more stronger. I need more time ... However, thankfully, the ending made me smile and cry. And won't leave me so anguished like before. Want so much for Lily to find her happiness.



Author's Response:

I had missed your reviews Ljin, they were some of the greatest i read :)

Thank you for taking the time to tell me this, and i'm sorry for playing with your emotions. All I can tell you though, is it's far from over~

 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Kat fight,

I have fewer time to post my thoughts lately with classes, life and such, especially now with each wonderful chapter that play with my feelings in such a way and I have more to think about.

Reading a story is like offering ourselves to the author, to the world they create, and allowing him/her to do whatever they want with us. It's like a hidden agreement. And this is the most wonderful thing that can happen, the unknow, to not expect things to happen, often never be prepared and our feelings not go as we expect. The surprise. That moment I get myself suddenly crying because of reasons. It's not our world. We're living the world you created. Playing with our emotions is the most amazing thing to feel, and why we enjoy so much stories that managed to do this and finds a special place in our mind.

All I can say is that this story is one of the few things that make my month happier, and whenever I have free time, I get myself thinking about it.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your words LJin. A feelings as great as that comes from writing for others as well. Having our own little world, just ready to be explored. Hidden things only we can foresee, but yet others never stop to try and see for themselves. When we know we can make people stop and really question whats going on around them. To have them wonder why this is that, or that is this. Its the little details that throw people off that truly cause me enjoyment ^,^ And i hope i'll be able to keep this up just a bit longer, until the final scene drops, and the story, comes to a fold. A appreciate you taking time out of your busy day to review, so thank you once again :)

 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2016 Title: Chapter 15: The truth about trust...

Wonderful as always. Hope I'll be able to share my thoughts soon, for everything I've read. Lily and Kat become two of my dearests.

And I feel there will be more to Claire, things she isn't even aware. And I have an unease feeling about this. If so, I'm glad everyone is together to be with her, as much as Claire was with them at the moments they needed most.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the review, thank you :)

Claires story isn't quite over, only just coming to light now...

Summary:

ATTENTION ANYONE who is a fan of fantasy stories (like LotR and Wheel of Time) please CHECK THIS STORY OUT! This is my attempt at a fantasy story, since it's is my favorite of the genres.

Titans, a race of giant women who are capable of shrinking down to human size, hold dominance over the majority of the world. The humans that live under them, who are not pets, try to scrape by as unnoticed as possible. Until one Titan sees something that leads her to believe humans are not the animals she was raised to think they are, and that Titans may be the true beasts. But what is to be done about this? Can she hope to stand against an empire of warriors and slavers? Perhaps with some help from a fellow outcast of the world, she can.


Categories: Slave, Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, Instant Size Change, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116681 Read Count: 137336
[Report This] Published: February 24 2016 Updated: August 12 2018
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm loving so much this STORY, I am truly anxious to see what is going to happen next! :o Will be fun to see her fighting with this -unique- style against other Titans.

Summary:

A Fantasy GTS Story

 

There is a tradition within Windermere. Every year the giant Alexandra chooses one person to become her personal Attendant. This year marks the 200th anniversary of this tradition, and she has someone very special in mind.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29935 Read Count: 281643
[Report This] Published: February 26 2016 Updated: June 10 2016
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: A Different Kind of Attendant

Decided to search for a new story to read and found this one today. I am so happy of my choice. Thank you so much for writing it.

 

At the end I was hoping that you would, maybe, skip the time to an year after to discover what would happen to Emil's feelings, which I doubt he would stop loving her and she loving him, probably even more than when they first started.

 

But then I remembered and realized that it really doesn't matter. The goal itself. Like many times I read the expression "Remember, it's not so much about the destination, as it is the journey..." Even if the destination is the end of the assigned year or the end of their journey together in life as lovers, since no one lives forever. No matter what, all the wonderful memories, and living the present are what matters.



Author's Response:

Couldn't have said it better myself. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story. 

I do have plans for what would happen about a year out, though that's stuff to consider for a sequel haha

Summary:

After becoming accidentally trapped in his sister Becky’s shoe, Mark has an unusual lesson to learn on shrunken safety, courtesy of his mother and sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9762 Read Count: 99343
[Report This] Published: May 21 2016 Updated: June 16 2016
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Lovely ending! Well, compared to the other series Mark was pretty lucky. The guy wouldn't complain if he knew that could be much worse! I really like Becky, she is adorable. And the mom is scary and loving at same time, like almost all mothers... Thank you for this story.



Author's Response:

Mark would definitely be counting his blessings if he was in a different story. Thanks for reading!

Summary:

As his sister slowly grows, Kyle finds himself losing control of their relationship...and of himself.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14660 Read Count: 226654
[Report This] Published: May 25 2016 Updated: June 29 2016
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very, very good intro. Can't help but to feel anxious and so curious for the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Probably with good reason. ^^

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I want to! :D

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor lil' bro~ He will never be the same again...